swageyamatobiyolo added a new chapter to Heartbreak Girl
Chapter Heartbreak Girl
I see Luke sitting on a bench a few metres away, his head in his hands. I walk over to him slowly and sit next to him cautiously.
"Hi," I say gently. He doesn't reply. "Luke..." I sigh. He looks up at me. "You're talking like this is my fault," he says softly. "Luke, I -" "Save your excuses, Lauren," Luke says, sitting up. He turns away.
Luke has never been like this before. I don't know what to do. "Luke, please listen to me," I plead desperately. He says nothing. "Why won't you talk to me?... Read Full Chapter
"Hi," I say gently. He doesn't reply. "Luke..." I sigh. He looks up at me. "You're talking like this is my fault," he says softly. "Luke, I -" "Save your excuses, Lauren," Luke says, sitting up. He turns away.
Luke has never been like this before. I don't know what to do. "Luke, please listen to me," I plead desperately. He says nothing. "Why won't you talk to me?... Read Full Chapter
on July 05, 2014
I AM CRYING AND ROCKING BACK AND FORTH ON MY CARPET AND CRYING AND OH YEAH I AM CRYING!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
on July 04, 2014
THEY SAID IREALDN THEY SAID IRELAND THEY SAID IRELAND THEY DA THEY SAID IRELAND THEY ARE COMING HERE THEY ARE COMING HERE THEY ARE COMING HERE I CAN'T THIS IS TOO AMAZING WORDS CAN'T EXPLAIN HOW I FEEL RIGHT NOW !!!!!!
NO IDEA YET THEY HAVEM'T ANNOUNCED BIT THEY'RE ACTUALLY COMING TO THIS TINY LITTLE COUNTRY MY ABSOLUTE FAVOURITE BAND ARE CONINGBTO IRELAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on July 04, 2014
I CAN'T BELIEVE IT I CAN!T BELIEVE IT I CAN'T BELIEVE IT I CAN!T BELIEVE IT I CAN'T BELIEVE IT THEY'RE ACRUALLY COMING THEY'RE ACTUALLY COMING AND FOR REAL GEADLINGING NOT AS SUPPORT OG MY GOD OG MY GOD OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!))))!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on July 04, 2014
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on July 04, 2014
on July 04, 2014
I updated my story!!! :D
on July 04, 2014
on July 04, 2014
Is it just me or does Break Free seem like it could be about the last biscuit?
on July 04, 2014
on July 04, 2014
BREAK FREE IS JUST INCREDIBLE OH MY GOD MY EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE JUST PERFECTION
on July 04, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo added a new chapter to Heartbreak Girl
Chapter Long Way Home
I walk over to Calum's house later that day. I should be thinking about Ashton, but I can't stop thinking about Luke. I wonder what he will think about Ashton and me liking each other. I hope he won't be angry.
I arrive, and ring the doorbell. I can hear some shouting inside. I roll my eyes. After about a minute, Calum opens the door. "LAUREN!" he yells, hugging me before I can even enter the house. "Lauren's here?" I can hear Luke say instantly. "Yeah!" Calum shouts VERY loudly. I wince. "O... Read Full Chapter
I arrive, and ring the doorbell. I can hear some shouting inside. I roll my eyes. After about a minute, Calum opens the door. "LAUREN!" he yells, hugging me before I can even enter the house. "Lauren's here?" I can hear Luke say instantly. "Yeah!" Calum shouts VERY loudly. I wince. "O... Read Full Chapter
on July 04, 2014
I wrote more New Girl, it's not a chapter but more of well... you'll see. :D
on July 03, 2014
So I took a 'Does she like you?' quiz...and apparently, Lauren likes Luke. ;)
on July 03, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo added a new chapter to Heartbreak Girl
Luke & Lauren = Luren
A/N: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR 150 READS!!!! I have a feeling that I've lost readers because of Ashren...oops. Well, if you stayed, please stick with me! There will be a bit of Luren...
Next goal: 20 readers!
Anyway, this flashback was MockingjayDistrict's idea. It's how Luke fell for Lauren, and it's from Luke's point of view. Please tell me what you think, and if you have any ideas for the next teasers - I do flashbacks too! ;) I hope you like this!
I liked her as soon as I saw her. We were ab... Read Full Chapter
Next goal: 20 readers!
Anyway, this flashback was MockingjayDistrict's idea. It's how Luke fell for Lauren, and it's from Luke's point of view. Please tell me what you think, and if you have any ideas for the next teasers - I do flashbacks too! ;) I hope you like this!
I liked her as soon as I saw her. We were ab... Read Full Chapter
on July 03, 2014
I updated my story :D
on July 03, 2014
I wrote more New Girl! :D :) ;) :P
on July 03, 2014
Heartbreak Girl
Luke dedicates his life to Lauren, the one who never sees the truth.
Okay, so this is technically a Luke Hemmings fan fiction, but you don't have to know who Luke Hemmings or 5 Seconds of Summer are to understand it, because I'm just going to write it as a normal story. I hope you like it!
A classic high-shcool teen romance full of broken hearts, crushes, and friendzones... Good characters and nice plot. A good thing to read if you're craving something light.
Note: It's good but it sounds like all the other good teen romances out there.... You have the core of a great story but you have to make sure what you're building around the core is original See More and interesting. Good luck and Good writing!
Note: It's good but it sounds like all the other good teen romances out there.... You have the core of a great story but you have to make sure what you're building around the core is original See More and interesting. Good luck and Good writing!
on July 03, 2014
Thank you so much!! :D Yeah, I was thinking that I'm getting to the point too soon, haha!!
on July 02, 2014
The plot of this story is well set, in modern day. It follows a simple FanFic storyline with twists, and teaser chapters. It's one of the
FanFics that has brought most attention on qfeast!!! It started picking up good speed about 1/3 of the way into the story.
If I could change anything, it would be that some parts are TOO fast, you don't want to miss important See More details that may confuse people if they're not included, besides that, GREAT job!!
FanFics that has brought most attention on qfeast!!! It started picking up good speed about 1/3 of the way into the story.
If I could change anything, it would be that some parts are TOO fast, you don't want to miss important See More details that may confuse people if they're not included, besides that, GREAT job!!
on July 02, 2014
on July 02, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo added a new chapter to Heartbreak Girl
Chapter End Up Here
I wake up early the next morning. I check the time on my phone, and then I decide to text Ashton. Surprisingly, he replies almost instantly.
Me: Hi!
Ash: Hi, Lauren!
Me: You replied quickly! Were you up all night waiting for me to text you?? :)
Ash: Something like that ;)
Me: Haha!
Ash: So, about this Nathan guy...
Me: Please don't mention him :(
Ash: OH MY GOD I AM SO SORRY
Ash: SERIOUSLY I AM REALLY SORRY
Me: It's okay
Ash: Sorry!! You don't have to talk about it.
Me: Thanks. :)
Ash: We'll... Read Full Chapter
Me: Hi!
Ash: Hi, Lauren!
Me: You replied quickly! Were you up all night waiting for me to text you?? :)
Ash: Something like that ;)
Me: Haha!
Ash: So, about this Nathan guy...
Me: Please don't mention him :(
Ash: OH MY GOD I AM SO SORRY
Ash: SERIOUSLY I AM REALLY SORRY
Me: It's okay
Ash: Sorry!! You don't have to talk about it.
Me: Thanks. :)
Ash: We'll... Read Full Chapter
on July 02, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo added a new chapter to Heartbreak Girl
A/N + Sorry!!!
Dear all my readers who hate me right now,
SORRY!!!!! I know that all the Luren shippers will be annoyed, but...I had to!! ;) Please stick with the story anyway!! We stuck with it when Ron was with Lavender, didn't we?? :D
So, I'll be releasing a sort of flashback as the next teaser. It will be how Luke fell for Lauren. IT WAS ALL MOCKINGJAYDISTRICT'S IDEA!!!!!!! Anyway, I'll release it when I get 150 reads or 20 readers!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!!!! Read Full Chapter
SORRY!!!!! I know that all the Luren shippers will be annoyed, but...I had to!! ;) Please stick with the story anyway!! We stuck with it when Ron was with Lavender, didn't we?? :D
So, I'll be releasing a sort of flashback as the next teaser. It will be how Luke fell for Lauren. IT WAS ALL MOCKINGJAYDISTRICT'S IDEA!!!!!!! Anyway, I'll release it when I get 150 reads or 20 readers!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!!!! Read Full Chapter
on July 02, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo added a new chapter to Heartbreak Girl
Chapter Beside You
"Lauren!" Calum runs over and hugs me so tightly that I can't breathe. He eventually lets me go, and I gasp for air.
"We wrote a new song, Lauren!" he tells me excitedly, like a five-year-old would tell you that he learned the alphabet.
"Really?" I grin. "Can I hear it?" The question is actually directed at Luke.
Luke nods. "It's not very good so far," he tries to warn me. "We only have the first verse and chorus written and - " "Luke!" I cut him off. "I'm sure it's amazing."
Luke smiles a... Read Full Chapter
"We wrote a new song, Lauren!" he tells me excitedly, like a five-year-old would tell you that he learned the alphabet.
"Really?" I grin. "Can I hear it?" The question is actually directed at Luke.
Luke nods. "It's not very good so far," he tries to warn me. "We only have the first verse and chorus written and - " "Luke!" I cut him off. "I'm sure it's amazing."
Luke smiles a... Read Full Chapter
on July 02, 2014
Thumbs up this comment if you ship Luren.
on July 01, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo added a new chapter to Heartbreak Girl
The (Only) Reason
A/N: OH MY GOD I GOT OVER 100 READS!!! THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!
So, this is your reward, as promised.
Some of you may have been wondering why exactly Ella hates Lauren, so here's why. A little story from Ella's point of view. I hope you like it!
I don't remember the first time I met Lauren. Well, how could I? I was only a baby. I don't remember when I started hating her either. I was very young then, too.
Luke and Lauren have been best friends for years. They've been ... Read Full Chapter
So, this is your reward, as promised.
Some of you may have been wondering why exactly Ella hates Lauren, so here's why. A little story from Ella's point of view. I hope you like it!
I don't remember the first time I met Lauren. Well, how could I? I was only a baby. I don't remember when I started hating her either. I was very young then, too.
Luke and Lauren have been best friends for years. They've been ... Read Full Chapter
on July 01, 2014