Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

More unfolds as Flash and Daisy find new friends and watch there fowls grow. There will be a surprise guest... Who will it be?

published on August 07, 2013not completed

Star gazing

Star gazing
Flash was still upset, he decided to go for a little fly by himself.
He is flying over the everfree Forrest when he looks up, he sees a shooting star, "I wish my father hadn't died" he muttered. Then another star came closer an ld closer until Flash saw it plow into the middle of the Forrest, he went to investigate. As Flash nears the HUGE crater he sees some wings under the rubble. Flash flys down and uses his magic to remove the rubble, Flash is taken back by what he sees.
Flash sees a Pegasus who's white with light blue and white mane. He makes a home-made slay and makes his way through the Forrest.

'Oh how I wish I could fly, but this pegasi is heavy.' Flash thinks to himself. Something in Flashes mind suddenly clicked, 'dah, I can teleport us to my front yard' and in a split second both are on Flashes front yard.
As Flash reaches his door it flys open, Daisy and his mother rush out and help bring the unconscious Pegasus inside.
"What happened" asked Daisy. Flash replies, "I saw what looked like a star falling, then it plowed into the ground. I wished upon it and so went to investigate. I saw some wings in the rubble so removed it then found her."

The Pegasus eyes begin to slowly open. The Pegasus look around the room, "wh-where am I" flash responds with a gentle soothing tone, "you are in Maneton. I saw you fall out of the sky and bought you back to my house." The Pegasus looks at him, "What the hay, I remember kicking a comet away from earth and now I'm ON earth."
Daisy, Raincloud and Flash exchange confused glances.
"Where are my manners, my name is Starchaser. I am the strongest Pegasus in the known universe." The mare continues. The others introduce themselves, "does princess Celestia, Luna, Cadence, or Lilly know about you." Asks Raincloud. "I know of Princess Luna, she is my commanding officer." Starchaser replies. "We'll it's been a long morning from us, make yourself at home Starchaser, we will see you in the morning."
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Sorry for the long wait I'm starting the new chapter as Iv been in polytechnic for 1 week now
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on February 23, 2014
Yes please update :)
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on January 27, 2014
AMAZINGNESS IS HAPPENING
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on January 27, 2014
In will add one chapter per day. Any requests will be added. Thank you
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on November 13, 2013
*sugh* ok Daisy you can do the mares party.
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on November 13, 2013
YAY, Flash this is awesome.. PLZ let me help with the story.. i can do the "girly" bits.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ:-*
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on November 12, 2013
You'll be there. I fixed my phone so my stories will continue
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on November 11, 2013
The rings are bracelets for there hooves
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on October 06, 2013
Awesome! I'm the ring bearer! Wait, how are they supposed to fit those on their hoofs?
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on October 06, 2013
Sorry for yet another delay. My phone needs repair so I need to re right those chapters. Please bear with me.:">
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on September 23, 2013
This is a promace. I WILL UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTERS BY THE WEEKEND
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on September 19, 2013
its ok.
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on September 19, 2013
Oh ok thanks and sorry about what happened...
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on September 19, 2013
*worry
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on September 18, 2013
Also sorry for the delay with the story. I. Had some Health issues... But don't warty I'm al better now.
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on September 18, 2013
Also Aqua_Bubble if you wanna be in one if my stories there's also Warriors FanFic.
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on September 18, 2013
Well see, IV got a lot if ponies on the list, I'll see when I can add you
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on September 18, 2013
Wow this is a really good story is it possible if I could join? My name's aqua bubble and you can see my profile picture to see what I look like
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on September 18, 2013
Great story! And congratulations!
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on September 07, 2013
THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AWESOME WITH A CAPITAL!!
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on August 24, 2013
Pt 2 will be out tonight or tomorrow
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on August 24, 2013
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on August 23, 2013
Yes you may xXTwilight_SparklexX. Pm me your character
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on August 23, 2013
Can I join? That would be nice!
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on August 23, 2013
:) thanks can't wait for the next chapter &[]
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on August 22, 2013
It suits you.
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on August 21, 2013
btw i'm now blazing fire
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on August 21, 2013
I'M SO EXICTED :D
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on August 21, 2013
*sigh* ok. Your luck I haven't added blaze yet. I will make the change.
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on August 21, 2013
OMG I keep changing names but this one's final instead of blaze can I be called blazing fire? Everything else is the same
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on August 21, 2013
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