Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

More unfolds as Flash and Daisy find new friends and watch there fowls grow. There will be a surprise guest... Who will it be?

published on August 07, 2013not completed

A helping hoof

A helping hoof Starchaser woke up and found a tray with a plate of mixed fruit, a bowl of oats, and a glass of grass juice. She ate it hungrily, "this is good. I haven't eaten like this since I was a foal. All I have eaten is space food." Daisy sits next to her, "I'm glad you liked it. Flash loves to have visitors and he buys the best oats and grass juice for them." Starchaser finishes the glass if grass juice, Daisy continues, "how does your wings feel after that dreadful fall." Starchaser flexes her wings, "nothing broken." She then walks around the lounge, "all limbs working and counted for." Daisy asks, "how did you get your name." Starchaser smiles, "I got it from Luna, my real name is star. But I go by Starchaser as I protect earth and pony planet from asteroids and comets, thus I got my name."
The two mares start chatting up a storm.
Flash appears in the lounge (teleported himself) "good morning Starchaser, I hope you sleeper well." Starchaser replies, "I did, thank you. And thank you for taking me into your beautiful home." "No problem it's nice to..." Flash started when then Raincloud brings the foals into the lounge, "oh am I interrupting" asks Rain, flash shakes his head, "no mother. It's fine."

After chatting for a while Daisy asks, "would you like me to contact Princess Luna." "That would be nice, thank you Daisy." Starchaser kindly replies, Daisy picks up the Ipony and calls Twilight.

"Flash, you wouldn't happen to be related to Princess Lauren Faust." Flash smiles "yes I am, Lauren is my nana" Starchasers jaw drops, "but-but that means your..." Flash zipper her lips (with Magic) and whispers, "shh, I don't want any pony to know I'm royalty, ok" Starchaser nods. Flash unzips her lips. Starchaser adds whispering, "what are you prince of." Flash whispers back, "I'm Prince of critters, that means I am in charge of all creatures; ponies, bunnies, insects, excetera."

Daisy comes back, "ok Twilight has sent off the letter and..." She stops, "Flash, why are you so close to her." Flash blushes and replies, "I was whispering something to her, something important for her." Daisy sighs, "oh ok then. Can I show her around town." Flash nods and the two mares leave.

Flash sighs, "what's on your mind Flash." His mother asks, flash replies, "just Daisy, I love her but since she had the foals we haven't had time together... Other then bed but usually me or her are tired." His mother nods, "you should get a foalsitter so you can have time together.... I could foalsit once a week for you if you like." Flash smiles "that would be lovely, thank you" and flash hugs her. "I best be off to Bill and Dashes, I promised Bill I would help build the barn extension" and then flys to the farm.

"I'm here Bill" flash says as he flutters down in front of Bill. "Howdy cuz, were gonna build the 3rd story. I also got Apple jack and Big Mac to help us out." AJ comes and shakes Flashes hoof, "we'll howdy cuz, Tis A pleasure to meet ya. Helpin out family is what I love to do." Big Mac dips his head, "Eeyup" the 4 ponies begin work. After 3 hours of work Daisy and Starchaser arrive at the farm, "and this is Big Bill and Dashes farm, they have the best oats in all Equestria." Big Bill chuckles, "we'll hold on lil missy, you donno if we're the best oats in Equestria." Bill looks at Starchaser ,"and who is this lil lady you have with you Daisy" Starchaser blushes, "hi I'm Starchaser." AJ comes up to her, "howdy, I'm Applejack but every pony calls me AJ. Where d'ya work." Starchaser answers, "I work for Princess Luna, she is my commanding officer." All the ponies (except Flash) ohh and ahh. "Well we'd better get on with the tour" Daisy says and her and Starchaser fly off. After another 3 hours of hard work Dash calls from the house, "Apple sider. Y'all must be thirsty." The 4 ponies tro over and have a break and drink some apple sider AJ and Big Mac brought over. "Well this ha been fun hanging with you guys" Flash said, "Eeyup, we should get together more." Big Mac stated, every pony nods. The 4 ponies finish off the roof then paint, then Flash says goodbye and heads home, the moon is just above the mountain as Flash gets home, he sneaks in and sinks into his bed.
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 5 users

Comments (66)

Sorry for the long wait I'm starting the new chapter as Iv been in polytechnic for 1 week now
reply
About Author
Report
on February 23, 2014
Yes please update :)
reply
About Author
Report
on January 27, 2014
AMAZINGNESS IS HAPPENING
reply
About Author
Report
on January 27, 2014
In will add one chapter per day. Any requests will be added. Thank you
reply
About Author
Report
on November 13, 2013
*sugh* ok Daisy you can do the mares party.
reply
About Author
Report
on November 13, 2013
YAY, Flash this is awesome.. PLZ let me help with the story.. i can do the "girly" bits.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ:-*
reply
About Author
Report
on November 12, 2013
You'll be there. I fixed my phone so my stories will continue
reply
About Author
Report
on November 11, 2013
The rings are bracelets for there hooves
reply
About Author
Report
on October 06, 2013
Awesome! I'm the ring bearer! Wait, how are they supposed to fit those on their hoofs?
reply
About Author
Report
on October 06, 2013
Sorry for yet another delay. My phone needs repair so I need to re right those chapters. Please bear with me.:">
reply
About Author
Report
on September 23, 2013
This is a promace. I WILL UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTERS BY THE WEEKEND
reply
About Author
Report
on September 19, 2013
its ok.
reply
About Author
Report
on September 19, 2013
Oh ok thanks and sorry about what happened...
reply
About Author
Report
on September 19, 2013
*worry
reply
About Author
Report
on September 18, 2013
Also sorry for the delay with the story. I. Had some Health issues... But don't warty I'm al better now.
reply
About Author
Report
on September 18, 2013
Also Aqua_Bubble if you wanna be in one if my stories there's also Warriors FanFic.
reply
About Author
Report
on September 18, 2013
Well see, IV got a lot if ponies on the list, I'll see when I can add you
reply
About Author
Report
on September 18, 2013
Wow this is a really good story is it possible if I could join? My name's aqua bubble and you can see my profile picture to see what I look like
reply
About Author
Report
on September 18, 2013
Great story! And congratulations!
reply
About Author
Report
on September 07, 2013
THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AWESOME WITH A CAPITAL!!
reply
About Author
Report
on August 24, 2013
Pt 2 will be out tonight or tomorrow
reply
About Author
Report
on August 24, 2013
About Author
Report
on August 23, 2013
Yes you may xXTwilight_SparklexX. Pm me your character
reply
About Author
Report
on August 23, 2013
Can I join? That would be nice!
reply
About Author
Report
on August 23, 2013
:) thanks can't wait for the next chapter &[]
reply
About Author
Report
on August 22, 2013
It suits you.
reply
About Author
Report
on August 21, 2013
btw i'm now blazing fire
reply
About Author
Report
on August 21, 2013
I'M SO EXICTED :D
reply
About Author
Report
on August 21, 2013
*sigh* ok. Your luck I haven't added blaze yet. I will make the change.
reply
About Author
Report
on August 21, 2013
OMG I keep changing names but this one's final instead of blaze can I be called blazing fire? Everything else is the same
reply
About Author
Report
on August 21, 2013
1 2 3 »