Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

More unfolds as Flash and Daisy find new friends and watch there fowls grow. There will be a surprise guest... Who will it be?

published on August 07, 2013not completed

Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, and the guest

Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, and the guest Scootaloo wakes up and there on her bedside table is a tray with oats and juice on it. Scootaloo soon finishes, she then takes the tray to the kitchen, after she washes the breakfast dishes she notices something isn't quite right, but couldn't put her hoof on it. Suddenly there was giggling coming from Rainbow dashes room, puzzled Scootaloo goes and knocks on rainbow's bedroom door. Rainbow dash calls out, "what is it squirt." Scootaloo replies, "dash, can I come in." There's a silence then rainbow Dash opens the door, "sure squirt." When Scootaloo is inside she sees Soarin on Rainbows bed. Soarin looks at Scootaloo, "so, your Dashies little sis, it's nice to meet you." Scootaloo just stands there with her jaw hanging, "Soar, Soarin." was all Scootaloo could say. Soarin kisses Rainbow Dash on the cheek, "I'd better get to the academy, Spitfire is wanting me to train the colts." And leaves.
Scootaloo looks at Rainbow Dash, "are you and Soarin..." "Yes, me and him have been dating for a while now." Rainbow Dash interrupts. Rainbow continues, "so Scootaloo, what do you wanna do today." Scootaloo replies, "I'd like to hang with you." Rainbow giggles, "of corse you would. Hey, let's go to the wonder-bolts academy and see how fit you are." Scootaloo nods her had and the two Pegasus race to the wonder-bolts academy.

After a long tiring morning Rainbow Dash speaks with Scootaloo, "you done vary well squirt. You only failed at the spinout machine... But you have beaten the all time filly time." Scootaloo tries to shake the dizzy feeling out of her head, she then says, "what was the speed on the gage." Rainbow smiles, it was on hair speed, about the same as when I 1st hopped on the machine." Scootaloo smiles, "wow!" Rainbow looks at the suns position in the sky, "oh jez! We had better get back home, Soarin will be arriving soon." And they both head back home.

Rainbow and Scooter clean the house, "this is a vary important afternoon for me squirt. Soarin said he had something IMPORTANT to tell me." Scooter nods, "I will keep out of your mane." Rainbow nods. There's a knock on the door, Scootaloo answers it, "hello Soarin. Come on in." Soarin walks to the lounge, Scootaloo closes the door and walks to her room.
Soarin kisses rainbow, new we've been dating for celestial knows how long now. But I think it's time we got really serious." Rainbow dash looks into Soarins beautiful emerald eyes, "yes." Soarin continues, "we'll will you become my wife." And kneels on the floor in front of Rainbow. Rainbow Dash says, "ohmygosh, ohmygosh, ohmygosh, YES."

In her room Scootaloo does her mane up. "Im so glad dash has her special some pony." She was about to grab her scarf when Rainbow calls out her name, she then trots to the lounge, "yes dash." Rainbow smiles then says, "my life just got 20% cooler. Soarin proposed to me." Scooter jumps in the air, "yes!! I'm so happy for you. And my life is now Awsome. I have have dash  as a sister, I found my mother, an now Soarin." Soarin speaks, "Scootaloo, you and dash are orphans." Scooter shaker her head, "no, just me, dash is my... My step-sister." Soarin nods his head in understanding.
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Sorry for the long wait I'm starting the new chapter as Iv been in polytechnic for 1 week now
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on February 23, 2014
Yes please update :)
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on January 27, 2014
AMAZINGNESS IS HAPPENING
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on January 27, 2014
In will add one chapter per day. Any requests will be added. Thank you
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on November 13, 2013
*sugh* ok Daisy you can do the mares party.
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on November 13, 2013
YAY, Flash this is awesome.. PLZ let me help with the story.. i can do the "girly" bits.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ:-*
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on November 12, 2013
You'll be there. I fixed my phone so my stories will continue
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on November 11, 2013
The rings are bracelets for there hooves
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on October 06, 2013
Awesome! I'm the ring bearer! Wait, how are they supposed to fit those on their hoofs?
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on October 06, 2013
Sorry for yet another delay. My phone needs repair so I need to re right those chapters. Please bear with me.:">
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on September 23, 2013
This is a promace. I WILL UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTERS BY THE WEEKEND
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on September 19, 2013
its ok.
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on September 19, 2013
Oh ok thanks and sorry about what happened...
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on September 19, 2013
*worry
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on September 18, 2013
Also sorry for the delay with the story. I. Had some Health issues... But don't warty I'm al better now.
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on September 18, 2013
Also Aqua_Bubble if you wanna be in one if my stories there's also Warriors FanFic.
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on September 18, 2013
Well see, IV got a lot if ponies on the list, I'll see when I can add you
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on September 18, 2013
Wow this is a really good story is it possible if I could join? My name's aqua bubble and you can see my profile picture to see what I look like
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on September 18, 2013
Great story! And congratulations!
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on September 07, 2013
THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AWESOME WITH A CAPITAL!!
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on August 24, 2013
Pt 2 will be out tonight or tomorrow
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on August 24, 2013
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on August 23, 2013
Yes you may xXTwilight_SparklexX. Pm me your character
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on August 23, 2013
Can I join? That would be nice!
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on August 23, 2013
:) thanks can't wait for the next chapter &[]
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on August 22, 2013
It suits you.
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on August 21, 2013
btw i'm now blazing fire
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on August 21, 2013
I'M SO EXICTED :D
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on August 21, 2013
*sigh* ok. Your luck I haven't added blaze yet. I will make the change.
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on August 21, 2013
OMG I keep changing names but this one's final instead of blaze can I be called blazing fire? Everything else is the same
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on August 21, 2013
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