Chosen

Chosen

Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.

published on May 04, 2014completed

Another round of duels

Another round of duels DAWN'S POV

I felt sick. The first duel was so gory that I dreaded the next one. I looked over at Ashe who was being congratulated, but her eyes where wide and her hands shaking. I looked at the arena. It now looked so peaceful. The lady smiled and sat down at her chair. The Elementors whispered their choices into her ear. She nodded. "The Elementors have decided for round 2!" She said a little bit to enthusiastically. "Wind picks..." I looked at the wind section. Everyone was holding their breath. "Teron Heserat." She finished. My first thought: "That is the ugliest name I've ever heard. Second though: "I could be next..." The Fire Elementor looked pleased with himself as the lady spoke. "From fire... Aria Summer. I looked over at Amethyst. She sat straight up and her eyes widened.  

AMETHYST'S POV

I blinked hard, holding back tears as Aria stepped into the arena. The weirdo Teron guy was already there. I didn't listen to the other choices. I was to busy coming back to reality. Once the round had began, I noticed the other picks. A girl I'd seen before... An Earth girl. Her name was Ruby. Then, there was Water. There was a guy I had trained with before. His name was "Bob" or something. Teron blasted air at Bob and he flew backwards and was stricken by one of Aria's flames. Aria was amazing. She sent flame spikes flying, hitting Teron and Ruby. They let put piercing screams. Teron didn't mind. He produced a wave of wind and knocked a weak Bob off his feet. Bob was raising his hand to surrender when Ruby sent a rock flying at him and he was crushed.  

ARIA'S POV

I dodged a volley of earth spikes and melted them with heat. Then I let out a wave of fire. Teron was completely engulfed. I stared at Ruby. My last opponent. She sliced the ground and a line of spikes appeared from where she was standing to where I was. I used the opportunity. I melted all the rocks forming a steaming liquid and with my last might let it fly back to where it came from. The liquid hit her on the face, as she dropped to her knees. I wiped my hands and grinned. That was just for the audience.
Inside, I was crying. I was shaken, and I was scarred. I looked and smiled at Dawn who was obviously very relieved. After that, many rounds went on. About 12. One of the winners was water. One was earth, and one was of course... Fire. The wind Elementor looked troubled.
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Is anyone else reminded of Divergent?
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I wrote this before I knew divergent existed
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on September 29, 2014
not anymmore. its marked as completed
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on September 28, 2014
You know you can actually edit what's alredy there, right?
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on September 28, 2014
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on September 28, 2014
thanks! i'm gonna make an edited version that's longer and has no pov switches and is less cheesy
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on September 28, 2014
Wow. So basically you came up with a storyline as good as one that millions of people have read, that's really amazing. Great job! All the switching POVs are kind of confusing
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on September 28, 2014
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on September 28, 2014
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on September 28, 2014
-CHOSEN-
remembering Chosen with 72 readers, but only 20 chapters. Released's first chapter is in!

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yay!who thumbed this down btw
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on August 31, 2014
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on August 31, 2014
Awesome story! Though you might want to add some paragraph breaks in the first chapter ;)
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:3 thanks and yea
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
Love this story!
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Reply to comments here. You can even reply to replies, but it will look weird. Qfeasters have to get used to it.
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Ok then...
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on July 12, 2014
sorry. recording this
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on July 12, 2014
What? I'm confused
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on July 12, 2014
see?
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on July 12, 2014
Like this
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on July 12, 2014
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on July 12, 2014
I Loved the Whole Thing, its so fascinating and like a proper book. I hope you become an author when you become older because I would surely read your books
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Aww!! Thanks
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on July 01, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
Awesome
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on June 24, 2014
I really like this! This is pretty much exactly what I want in a book!
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Thanks :D
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Super cool! It was awese from the beginning!
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*awesome
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Thanks! :)
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on June 13, 2014
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on June 13, 2014
:D I hope you enjoyed it
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on June 08, 2014
Awesome!
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on June 04, 2014
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on May 31, 2014
I must say, that you had a amazing beginning makingdreaders(like me) want to read more, the chapters between were full of actions si readers didnt get bored. The chapters were quite long (which I like) and you also had a amazing finish
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My first ones are about my roleplay characters/my friends' characters, biographies, last known locations, that sort of thing. Then after I'm done with all that, I will be writing the roleplay out (Some character's names were forgotten, so I had to create new names for the forgotten ones, lol)
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on May 26, 2014
yay Magic is there!!! :D
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on May 26, 2014
amazing finish!
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on May 24, 2014
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on May 22, 2014
Honestly crystal, these are amazing!
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on May 22, 2014
Wow o_o Take me a couple of days to read then x
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on May 22, 2014
20 it think
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on May 21, 2014
How Many Chapters Is There Crystal? x
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on May 21, 2014
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on May 21, 2014
Amazin' x
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on May 21, 2014
:D anytime
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on May 20, 2014
^_^ Np
I'm just grateful that you added me in it etc
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on May 20, 2014
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on May 20, 2014
Nah its fine
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on May 20, 2014
Srry, just that sequels don't really get as much attention as the actual story
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on May 20, 2014
No sequel
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on May 20, 2014
WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE.A.SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SEQUEL TIME XD XD XD
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on May 19, 2014
Sometimes i did want to make a sequel, but meh
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on May 19, 2014
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