Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

More unfolds as Flash and Daisy find new friends and watch there fowls grow. There will be a surprise guest... Who will it be?

published on August 07, 2013not completed

A new prince rises

A new prince rises Flash woke up to a knock on the door... His bedroom door. "Ah, come in" pat walks in, "oh good your up. Daisy left me to foalsit as Raimcloud is busy. I wanted to introduce you to my old friend." Flash nods, Pat calls, "PP come here please." a green Pegasus with a red mane and tail soon enters the room. Pat continues, "flash, this is Peach." Peach adds, "every pony calls me Party Peach, PP for short." Flash chuckles, "you both have party cutie marks." Both mares look at each other. Flash continues, "if both of you planned a party I wonder what it would be li.." Flash smiles, "how would you both like to plan a party for Princess Luna, Princess Celestia, and Princess Lauren." Both mares gasp, Peach hyperly replies, "that would be super duper sky high Fabtabulous." "What's the party for." Adds Pat. "It's a party to celebrate the family being reunited with a lost relative." Both mares give a questioning look, flash replies, "I'm there long lost Family member" then Flash quickly adds, " Non-royal though." The mares bounce excitedly out if the room.

Flash sighs and goes to the kitchen to get breakfast, he reads the newspaper, "ah I see news gets around fast. Princess Lauren's arrival is in here." There's a knock on the door, "I'll get it." Yells Flame. "Dad it's Princess Lily." Flash goes to the door, princess Lilly speaks, "may I have a privet word with you." Flash nods and leads princess Lilly to his room. "Are the rumours true." Flash looks puzzled, princess Lilly continues, "there's rumours of you being royalty." Flash replies, "oh that.. He he, you see it depends what you've herd." Princess Lilly looks confused, "what do you mean depends what I have herd. Are you royalty." Flash sheepishly replies, "I guess I am as my nana is Princess Luaran and my 2 Aunties are Princess Luna and Princess Celestia." Princess Lilly looks dazed, she then replies, "I can't believe we've known each other since foal-care and you never told me." Flashes ears go back, "I. I. You see. It. I wanted to live life normally." Princess Lilly replies, "would you want to be royalty but live life as you do now." Flash nods. After a short silence princess Lilly says, "why don't you, I mean there's now rule against it. Oh and what are you Prince of." Flash answers, "I'm prince if Critters, you are princess of the earth an I am prince of the inhabitance. But I got my cutie mark before I found I was royalty." Princess Lilly nods, after a chat Princess Lilly leaves.

Daisy walks in, "did you hear that PP and Pat are gonna take the foals out tonight... That mean we have the WHOLE house to ourself." Flash smiles, it's been so long since we had the house to ourself. What ideas do you have." Daisy walks around flash, "oh I have a few ideas that will last most if the night." Flash watches her then gazes at her flank. Daisy smiles, "I have a spa date with Dash and Lilly I will see you tonight." Flash kisses her and she leaves.

Flash goes to the lounge, "PP, pat, I'm gonna visit Twilight." The mares nod and PP speaks, "don't be back to late as Pat, me, and the foals are going out tonight." Flash nods and heads out the door. Flash launches into the air and flies to Ponyville.

As Flash nears Ponyville he sees a chariot coming from the Castle, flash thinks, 'I wonder who is coming to Ponyville.' Flash stops mid-flight as he nearly flies into Fluttershy. Flash Lands in Ponyville as one of the Princesses steps out, Princess Celestia goes talks with Fluttershy and Twilight, Princess Lund looks at Flash and nods. Flash goes over to Princess Luna, Luna speaks, "would you like us to announce it." Flash nods approvingly. Princess Luna goes to Princess Celestia and whispers in her ear. Then both turn to the herd of ponies, Princess Luna addresses them, "Mares and Gentlecolts I am glad to announce the name of a new prince." She looks at Flash then continues, "Prince Flash." Both Princesses walk up to Flash, Celestia speaks, "This Alicorn is Prince of critters, as I am of the earth." "And to show how much he cares for all of you he lives in a normal house. Not a castle." Luna adds. All the ponies look at Flash, Flash speaks, "I think that even though I'm a Prince, why should I live in such a fancy house when I could live like those who I adore and look after." The whole town erupt with cheer and the Mane 6(well RD isn't there) chant "Long Live Prince Flash." As the Princesses Give Flash there blessings. Twilight goes up to Flash, "Wow Flash, A prince living a normal life, I myself love living in a normal house." Flash smiles, "Twilight I came to talk with you, in privet." She nods and leads Flash to her tree.

When they are inside flash speaks, "Iv come to talk to you about Lauren." Twilight nods and Flash continues, "She's Princess of all Matter, and for her, Luna, and Celestia Me an some if my Friends are planning a party." Twilight smiles, Spike walks in, "sorry to bother you two but Twilight I finished alphabetising the whole library. Could I go and see Rarity." Twilight smiles and nods, then turns to Flash, "A Party, who's invited." Flash replies, "All the royals, including yourself, Friends of the royals, and Scootaloo with her friends and mother." Twilight half frowns, "Ah Scootaloo doesn't know her mother. The Filly was found in a box." Flash smiles, "She was reunited." Flashes smile Turns to Sadness, "My Father Reunited them on his deathbed, He was sharing a room with her." Twilight softy comforts flash, "I'm sorry about him. Daisy told me about your father."  Flash nods. Twilights clock rings, Flash looks at it, "it's 5o'clock already. I better get home Daisy will be waiting for me." Twilight Smiles, "ok, nice chatting with you... You better teleport yourself home or away from Ponyville. Your a Prince now after all." flash hugs Twilight then teleports himself to the edge if Maneton.
Flash Flies home, as he Glide down onto the front yard he sees the mares and foals head off.
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Sorry for the long wait I'm starting the new chapter as Iv been in polytechnic for 1 week now
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on February 23, 2014
Yes please update :)
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on January 27, 2014
AMAZINGNESS IS HAPPENING
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on January 27, 2014
In will add one chapter per day. Any requests will be added. Thank you
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on November 13, 2013
*sugh* ok Daisy you can do the mares party.
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on November 13, 2013
YAY, Flash this is awesome.. PLZ let me help with the story.. i can do the "girly" bits.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ:-*
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on November 12, 2013
You'll be there. I fixed my phone so my stories will continue
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on November 11, 2013
The rings are bracelets for there hooves
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on October 06, 2013
Awesome! I'm the ring bearer! Wait, how are they supposed to fit those on their hoofs?
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on October 06, 2013
Sorry for yet another delay. My phone needs repair so I need to re right those chapters. Please bear with me.:">
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on September 23, 2013
This is a promace. I WILL UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTERS BY THE WEEKEND
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on September 19, 2013
its ok.
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on September 19, 2013
Oh ok thanks and sorry about what happened...
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on September 19, 2013
*worry
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on September 18, 2013
Also sorry for the delay with the story. I. Had some Health issues... But don't warty I'm al better now.
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on September 18, 2013
Also Aqua_Bubble if you wanna be in one if my stories there's also Warriors FanFic.
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on September 18, 2013
Well see, IV got a lot if ponies on the list, I'll see when I can add you
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on September 18, 2013
Wow this is a really good story is it possible if I could join? My name's aqua bubble and you can see my profile picture to see what I look like
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on September 18, 2013
Great story! And congratulations!
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on September 07, 2013
THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AWESOME WITH A CAPITAL!!
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on August 24, 2013
Pt 2 will be out tonight or tomorrow
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on August 24, 2013
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on August 23, 2013
Yes you may xXTwilight_SparklexX. Pm me your character
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on August 23, 2013
Can I join? That would be nice!
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on August 23, 2013
:) thanks can't wait for the next chapter &[]
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on August 22, 2013
It suits you.
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on August 21, 2013
btw i'm now blazing fire
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on August 21, 2013
I'M SO EXICTED :D
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on August 21, 2013
*sigh* ok. Your luck I haven't added blaze yet. I will make the change.
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on August 21, 2013
OMG I keep changing names but this one's final instead of blaze can I be called blazing fire? Everything else is the same
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on August 21, 2013
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