Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

More unfolds as Flash and Daisy find new friends and watch there fowls grow. There will be a surprise guest... Who will it be?

published on August 07, 2013not completed

New family

New family
                                                  *3 years later*
"Daddy, Daddy... Wake up Daddy." Flash reluctantly opens his eyes, "good morning Flame, good morning Daffodil." Flash blinks the sleepiness out of his eyes, the foals have the biggest smile on there faces, "guess what today is." Flash smiled as he knew but thought he would make them even more excited, "is it Uncle Bills Birthday." Flame shakes his head, "nope, guess again." Flash giggles, "is it nana Pegasy's visiting day." Daffodil giggles a little, "no, silt daddy." Flash looks at them, "I give up, what is happening today." Both foals blurt out, "it's our 1st day at Pony Primary." Flash smiles, "that's right, are you two ready." Both foals show thy have there saddle bags on. Flash hops out of bed, "alright I will drop you two off. You don't want to b late. Should we drop by Aunty Dash and Uncla Bull's to see if Lickity split is ready." Flame replies, "actually they are already here, they are in the lounge with mummy."

"Good morning Dash" Dash looks at him, "mornin cuz. Lickity split seems to be as eager as a beaver to get to pony primary." Flash smiles, "same with my two." As Flash, Dash, Daffodil, Flame, an Lickity split leave Flash kisses Daisy, "I will be home soon" Daisy nods and the 5 ponies trot off. After the foals are dropped off Dash says to Flash, "I ne'er got roun to askin ya.. How can ya be a alicorn and not be livin the castle an what not." Flashes ears drop, "well... How about you come over for dinner and I will explain." Dash nods, then teleports herself away.

Flash gets home and is welcomed with a kiss, "how did the kids go." Flash half smiled, "they went off quicker then I could blink." After some silence flash looks into Daisy's eyes, "Daisy there's something I never told you" Daisy leans on him, "oh, what is it." Flash puts his chin on her head, "as you know I'm a alicorn, yet I live in a house like others.~flash takes a deep breath.~ my family i havent told you about is, my Nana is Lauren Faust, my aunties are ~flash swallows hard~ Princess Luna and Celestia." Daisy sits up right and looks at Flash, "I was puzzled at why a alicorn like you would be living like this. But what are you Prince of anyway." Flash replies, "I'm prince of all critters, that's ponies, animals, insects." Daisy was about to speak when there's a knock on the door.

Daisy opens the door, the pony at the door speaks 1st, "hello Daisy, is flash home, we wish to speak to him." Daisy nods and lets the 3 guests in. Flash gasps, "nana, Luna, Celestia. Is is so nice to see you." He turns to Daisy ~flash points as he names them~. "this is nana Lauren, Aunty Luna, And. ~flash pauses then continues~. And Aunty Celestia." Lauren speaks, "Daisy may we have a privet talk to Flash." Daisy nods, "I will go visit Pat." And flies off.

"Flash." Princess Celestia starts, "It is so nice to meet a nephew. I'm surprised mother didn't talk about you much." Princess Luna adds, "she ALWAYS talks about family." Lauren speaks, "I didn't mention Flash cause I haven't seen him since he was a foal. Rainbowflash was a busy pegasi, and... Speaking if him, where does he live." Flash replies, "he lived in Cloudland." "Lived." Lauren echoed, flash sighs, " he passed away  about three years ago." Lauren hugs him "I'm so sorry. What about your mother." Flash looks up, "Raincloud is still alive, she lives in Cloudland, she will be visiting tomorrow to foalsit for me and Daisy."
The 4 alicorns start chatting. Just before they Lear Luna says, "we are staying at Lilly's for the week if you wated to visit." Flash nods a the 3 guests fly off.
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Sorry for the long wait I'm starting the new chapter as Iv been in polytechnic for 1 week now
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on February 23, 2014
Yes please update :)
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on January 27, 2014
AMAZINGNESS IS HAPPENING
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on January 27, 2014
In will add one chapter per day. Any requests will be added. Thank you
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on November 13, 2013
*sugh* ok Daisy you can do the mares party.
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on November 13, 2013
YAY, Flash this is awesome.. PLZ let me help with the story.. i can do the "girly" bits.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ:-*
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on November 12, 2013
You'll be there. I fixed my phone so my stories will continue
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on November 11, 2013
The rings are bracelets for there hooves
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on October 06, 2013
Awesome! I'm the ring bearer! Wait, how are they supposed to fit those on their hoofs?
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on October 06, 2013
Sorry for yet another delay. My phone needs repair so I need to re right those chapters. Please bear with me.:">
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on September 23, 2013
This is a promace. I WILL UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTERS BY THE WEEKEND
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on September 19, 2013
its ok.
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on September 19, 2013
Oh ok thanks and sorry about what happened...
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on September 19, 2013
*worry
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on September 18, 2013
Also sorry for the delay with the story. I. Had some Health issues... But don't warty I'm al better now.
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on September 18, 2013
Also Aqua_Bubble if you wanna be in one if my stories there's also Warriors FanFic.
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on September 18, 2013
Well see, IV got a lot if ponies on the list, I'll see when I can add you
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on September 18, 2013
Wow this is a really good story is it possible if I could join? My name's aqua bubble and you can see my profile picture to see what I look like
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on September 18, 2013
Great story! And congratulations!
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on September 07, 2013
THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AWESOME WITH A CAPITAL!!
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on August 24, 2013
Pt 2 will be out tonight or tomorrow
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on August 24, 2013
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on August 23, 2013
Yes you may xXTwilight_SparklexX. Pm me your character
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on August 23, 2013
Can I join? That would be nice!
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on August 23, 2013
:) thanks can't wait for the next chapter &[]
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on August 22, 2013
It suits you.
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on August 21, 2013
btw i'm now blazing fire
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on August 21, 2013
I'M SO EXICTED :D
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on August 21, 2013
*sigh* ok. Your luck I haven't added blaze yet. I will make the change.
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on August 21, 2013
OMG I keep changing names but this one's final instead of blaze can I be called blazing fire? Everything else is the same
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on August 21, 2013
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