Prologue
(opps I ment to put this 1st. I hope this doesn't affect the story)---------------------------------
Ponycare days
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Flash is looking at a picture book, he soon gets board of it and puts it away. "Good boy Flash" Mr. Hoof praises, "you just earned your 25th cleaning star." Flash smiles and goes to draw. As Flash sits down a filly wines, "My drawing sucks!" Flash walks over to her and looks at the painting and asks, "what's so bad about it." The filly replies "cause the others laughed at it." Flash replies, "it's beautiful. I love the blue sky and the paintbrush cutie mark." The filly looks at him, "you think it's nice." Flash nods, the filly hugs him and trots off to show Mr. Hoof.
Flash sees a new filly come in and goes to greet her. She closes her eyes takes a deep breath, then when she opens her eyes she jumps nearly landing on Mr. Hoof. Flash puts his ears back, "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to scare you." The filly replies, "it's ok." The filly looks around then continues, "I'm Lilly" flash smiles, "I'm Flash" both kids look at each other then both go outside to play.
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School days
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As Flash flies past Lilly's house Lilly calls out. "hey Flash!" And flys next to Flash, flats greets her, "I see you don't have your cutie mark yet." Lilly shakes her head and speaks, "an it's the last day of school."
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