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✧You're braver than you think.✧

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How I First Met @Ella_swan

*Note: I will call @Ella_swan by the name of Ella because I don't think she wants me to give out her real identity!

I was at a woman's house (I go to an online school and my parents work so I have to be babysat, it's a long story) for my first day of school. She told me, "The neighbor's daughter, Ella, is coming over for lunch today."
I said, "Okay." So the day progressed fine.
Then, Ella came over for lunch. When we looked at each other, I think See More
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:) Thanks, so are you!
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aww shucks ur sweat!
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When I see a poll titled "whats ur fav color":

Me: Okay, so now people are too lazy to even spell out 'your?' 'Favorite' is sometimes tricky to spell, but you should still try. Also, why no capital letters? And there should be an apostrophe before the 's' in 'whats.'

Normal people: *vote on it* *walk away*
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I know, but it is easier to understand and read when it has proper spelling and grammar. Many people on Qfeast - including me - have OCD, and that makes us very distracted whenever we notice an error in text. I've pointed out probably about twenty mistakes in published books in my lifetime, because to me, they stand out. Again, not trying to be mean, but when See More
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I'm one of those ppl who don't like to capitolise and use proper grammer because we came online to not use grammer not to use perfect spelling not trying to be me
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Here is a way to tell whether you should say "me" or "I" when talking about two people doing something together.

1. Take out the noun other than you. Like if it was "Ben and me," take out the "Ben." Also, take out the "and."

2. Read it aloud. "Ben and me went to the store." minus "Ben and" equals "Me went to the store."

3. Does the remaining sentence make sense? "Me went to the store." doesn't make sense. So then you say "I" instead. "I went to the store." makes sense. So the See More
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That's how my primary school teacher used to explain it.
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XD Me is very welcome! lol
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Here is a clarification for anyone who needs it:

"Your really nice!" INCORRECT

"You're really nice!" CORRECT

"I like your dress!" CORRECT

"I like you're dress!" INCORRECT

"There you are!" CORRECT

"Their you are!" INCORRECT See More
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I agree with you. I am in 7th grade, but AP. People need to fix their grammar. It really bothers me.
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Here's a reminder: "it's" stands for "it is." If you're talking about possessive, then it is "its." Trust me; my mom is a grammar freak and so am I, and also my mom teaches 8th grade advanced ELA.
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"The dragon had blue wing's." INCORRECT

"The dragon had blue wings." CORRECT
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"I like frog's." INCORRECT

"I like frogs." CORRECT

"There were spikes running down the frogs back." INCORRECT

"There were spikes running down the frog's back." CORRECT
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Congratulations to @gothicskittlescupcake for her story being the Story of the Day!
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Blue
Blue looks up at you
Eyes wide, mouth open too
And she says, just three words,
"I love you."

Blue walks through blizzards
Blue drowns in lakes
Blue would do this
All for you.

Blue is like a child
So small and true
And she asks you five words,
"Do you love me, too?"

And there's nothing you can do
But look down at Blue
And say just three words,
"I love you."
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The Red Dress
In the very back of the dark closet
There is a worn, red dress
Worn by many,
Forgotten by all.

The red dress belonged to a queen,
And she wore it well.
But over time
It became dusty and neglected.

It was passed to the princess,
Who wore it not once
She was too busy flaunting about
In her own pink dress.

It got passed on to the maid,
Who put it to good use.
She wore it to the ball
And fell in love with a miller.

They got married
And had a child
She was a girl.
And the red dress passed to ...
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Look at my quiz results! What about you?
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Perfect!
7 correct questions out of 7. The passing score mark is 3
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Loreena McKennitt The Lady Of Shalott
Loreena McKennitt The Lady Of Shalott
On either side of the river lie Long fields of barley and of rye, That clothe the wold and meet the sky; And thro' the field the road run by To many-towered ...
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Red is passion, deep in our hearts
Orange is blazing desire
Yellow is a wink, a smile
Green is mellow generosity
Blue is gentle arms hugging us
Indigo is the knowledge deep inside us
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Yellow is the moon
It is a round sphere of pure light
It is happiness
Optimistic
Lemon yellow
It is flaming sunlight
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