GalacticBiRavenclaw created a poll
Which of my stories is your favorite?
on April 29, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw created a poll
Do you like getting feedback on your stories?
on April 29, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw created a story
Lilly Anderson: Kidnapped!
on April 29, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw created a story
True Weird Story
on April 29, 2015
How I First Met @Ella_swan
*Note: I will call @Ella_swan by the name of Ella because I don't think she wants me to give out her real identity!
I was at a woman's house (I go to an online school and my parents work so I have to be babysat, it's a long story) for my first day of school. She told me, "The neighbor's daughter, Ella, is coming over for lunch today."
I said, "Okay." So the day progressed fine.
Then, Ella came over for lunch. When we looked at each other, I think See More we automatically became best friends. We went outside to swing, she told me about OUAT and Studio C, and we talked. We played games. I told her about Qfeast and Lost. She got a Qfeast account. We watched Studio C together. I got around to watching OUAT and fell in love (partly because a lot of cute Lost actors are in it). She has come over every day she can since then.
Ella is one of my best friends, and has been ever since that day. We did have a mild fight a few weeks ago, but it has all blown over. Follow her!
*Note: I will call @Ella_swan by the name of Ella because I don't think she wants me to give out her real identity!
I was at a woman's house (I go to an online school and my parents work so I have to be babysat, it's a long story) for my first day of school. She told me, "The neighbor's daughter, Ella, is coming over for lunch today."
I said, "Okay." So the day progressed fine.
Then, Ella came over for lunch. When we looked at each other, I think See More we automatically became best friends. We went outside to swing, she told me about OUAT and Studio C, and we talked. We played games. I told her about Qfeast and Lost. She got a Qfeast account. We watched Studio C together. I got around to watching OUAT and fell in love (partly because a lot of cute Lost actors are in it). She has come over every day she can since then.
Ella is one of my best friends, and has been ever since that day. We did have a mild fight a few weeks ago, but it has all blown over. Follow her!
GalacticBiRavenclaw
:) Thanks, so are you!
on April 29, 2015
Maya_swan
aww shucks ur sweat!
on April 29, 2015
on April 29, 2015
When I see a poll titled "whats ur fav color":
Me: Okay, so now people are too lazy to even spell out 'your?' 'Favorite' is sometimes tricky to spell, but you should still try. Also, why no capital letters? And there should be an apostrophe before the 's' in 'whats.'
Normal people: *vote on it* *walk away*
Me: Okay, so now people are too lazy to even spell out 'your?' 'Favorite' is sometimes tricky to spell, but you should still try. Also, why no capital letters? And there should be an apostrophe before the 's' in 'whats.'
Normal people: *vote on it* *walk away*
I know, but it is easier to understand and read when it has proper spelling and grammar. Many people on Qfeast - including me - have OCD, and that makes us very distracted whenever we notice an error in text. I've pointed out probably about twenty mistakes in published books in my lifetime, because to me, they stand out. Again, not trying to be mean, but when See More a story has many punctuation, capitalization, or spelling errors, I find it hard to understand. I also find it hard to concentrate on the story.
on April 29, 2015
I'm one of those ppl who don't like to capitolise and use proper grammer because we came online to not use grammer not to use perfect spelling not trying to be me
on April 29, 2015
on April 29, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw created a story
Grammar (and other mechanics)
on April 29, 2015
Here is a way to tell whether you should say "me" or "I" when talking about two people doing something together.
1. Take out the noun other than you. Like if it was "Ben and me," take out the "Ben." Also, take out the "and."
2. Read it aloud. "Ben and me went to the store." minus "Ben and" equals "Me went to the store."
3. Does the remaining sentence make sense? "Me went to the store." doesn't make sense. So then you say "I" instead. "I went to the store." makes sense. So the See More proper sentence is "Ben and I went to the store."
1. Take out the noun other than you. Like if it was "Ben and me," take out the "Ben." Also, take out the "and."
2. Read it aloud. "Ben and me went to the store." minus "Ben and" equals "Me went to the store."
3. Does the remaining sentence make sense? "Me went to the store." doesn't make sense. So then you say "I" instead. "I went to the store." makes sense. So the See More proper sentence is "Ben and I went to the store."
on April 29, 2015
on April 29, 2015
on April 29, 2015
Here is a clarification for anyone who needs it:
"Your really nice!" INCORRECT
"You're really nice!" CORRECT
"I like your dress!" CORRECT
"I like you're dress!" INCORRECT
"There you are!" CORRECT
"Their you are!" INCORRECT See More
"They're you are!" INCORRECT
"That's there food." INCORRECT
"That's their food." CORRECT
"That's they're food." INCORRECT
"They're really nice!" CORRECT
"Their really nice!" INCORRECT
"There really nice!" INCORRECT
"The frog had spikes running down it's back." INCORRECT
"The frog had spikes running down its back." CORRECT
"It's nice of you to help me!" CORRECT
"Its nice of you to help me!" INCORRECT
"Your really nice!" INCORRECT
"You're really nice!" CORRECT
"I like your dress!" CORRECT
"I like you're dress!" INCORRECT
"There you are!" CORRECT
"Their you are!" INCORRECT See More
"They're you are!" INCORRECT
"That's there food." INCORRECT
"That's their food." CORRECT
"That's they're food." INCORRECT
"They're really nice!" CORRECT
"Their really nice!" INCORRECT
"There really nice!" INCORRECT
"The frog had spikes running down it's back." INCORRECT
"The frog had spikes running down its back." CORRECT
"It's nice of you to help me!" CORRECT
"Its nice of you to help me!" INCORRECT
I agree with you. I am in 7th grade, but AP. People need to fix their grammar. It really bothers me.
on April 29, 2015
Here's a reminder: "it's" stands for "it is." If you're talking about possessive, then it is "its." Trust me; my mom is a grammar freak and so am I, and also my mom teaches 8th grade advanced ELA.
on April 29, 2015
on April 29, 2015
"I like frog's." INCORRECT
"I like frogs." CORRECT
"There were spikes running down the frogs back." INCORRECT
"There were spikes running down the frog's back." CORRECT
"I like frogs." CORRECT
"There were spikes running down the frogs back." INCORRECT
"There were spikes running down the frog's back." CORRECT
on April 29, 2015
on April 29, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw asked a question
Does anyone here have synesthesia? Synesthesia: a crossing of the senses. It's hard to ...
on April 29, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw created a page
Good Things That Happen To You
on April 28, 2015
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on April 28, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw added a new chapter to Colors (1)
Blue
Blue looks up at you
Eyes wide, mouth open too
And she says, just three words,
"I love you."
Blue walks through blizzards
Blue drowns in lakes
Blue would do this
All for you.
Blue is like a child
So small and true
And she asks you five words,
"Do you love me, too?"
And there's nothing you can do
But look down at Blue
And say just three words,
"I love you." Read Full Chapter
Eyes wide, mouth open too
And she says, just three words,
"I love you."
Blue walks through blizzards
Blue drowns in lakes
Blue would do this
All for you.
Blue is like a child
So small and true
And she asks you five words,
"Do you love me, too?"
And there's nothing you can do
But look down at Blue
And say just three words,
"I love you." Read Full Chapter
on April 28, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw added a new chapter to Colors (1)
The Red Dress
In the very back of the dark closet
There is a worn, red dress
Worn by many,
Forgotten by all.
The red dress belonged to a queen,
And she wore it well.
But over time
It became dusty and neglected.
It was passed to the princess,
Who wore it not once
She was too busy flaunting about
In her own pink dress.
It got passed on to the maid,
Who put it to good use.
She wore it to the ball
And fell in love with a miller.
They got married
And had a child
She was a girl.
And the red dress passed to ... Read Full Chapter
There is a worn, red dress
Worn by many,
Forgotten by all.
The red dress belonged to a queen,
And she wore it well.
But over time
It became dusty and neglected.
It was passed to the princess,
Who wore it not once
She was too busy flaunting about
In her own pink dress.
It got passed on to the maid,
Who put it to good use.
She wore it to the ball
And fell in love with a miller.
They got married
And had a child
She was a girl.
And the red dress passed to ... Read Full Chapter
on April 28, 2015
on April 28, 2015
Loreena McKennitt The Lady Of Shalott
On either side of the river lie Long fields of barley and of rye, That clothe the wold and meet the sky; And thro' the field the road run by To many-towered ...
on April 28, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw created a story
Colors (1)
on April 28, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw asked a question
What is wrong with me? For a couple years now, I've felt strange whenever I hear certai...
on April 28, 2015
Red is passion, deep in our hearts
Orange is blazing desire
Yellow is a wink, a smile
Green is mellow generosity
Blue is gentle arms hugging us
Indigo is the knowledge deep inside us
Violet is forgiveness See More
Pink is gratefulness, appreciation
Gold is shining pride
Silver is wondering wisdom of age
Black is pure mystery
Gray is a sigh
White is a whisper, a finger to our mouth
Together, colors deepen our understanding of the natural world.
Earth isn't only made up of facts.
Sometimes, we have to trust the colors, who have been here longer than us.
They compose the greatest symphony to ever sound on Earth.
Please don't rep0st this. I spent a while coming up with this poem, and I just wanted to share it for the sake of doing it. I've felt... strange around colors for my entire life. When I hear a descriptive, deep color word - like indigo, cerulean, jade - my cheeks flush and my heart beats faster. Is there such a thing as "colorsexual?" XD Nothing romantic, really. I compare it to eating. It is as if descriptive colors could be my food.
I am strange, I know XD
Orange is blazing desire
Yellow is a wink, a smile
Green is mellow generosity
Blue is gentle arms hugging us
Indigo is the knowledge deep inside us
Violet is forgiveness See More
Pink is gratefulness, appreciation
Gold is shining pride
Silver is wondering wisdom of age
Black is pure mystery
Gray is a sigh
White is a whisper, a finger to our mouth
Together, colors deepen our understanding of the natural world.
Earth isn't only made up of facts.
Sometimes, we have to trust the colors, who have been here longer than us.
They compose the greatest symphony to ever sound on Earth.
Please don't rep0st this. I spent a while coming up with this poem, and I just wanted to share it for the sake of doing it. I've felt... strange around colors for my entire life. When I hear a descriptive, deep color word - like indigo, cerulean, jade - my cheeks flush and my heart beats faster. Is there such a thing as "colorsexual?" XD Nothing romantic, really. I compare it to eating. It is as if descriptive colors could be my food.
I am strange, I know XD
on April 28, 2015
Yellow is the moon
It is a round sphere of pure light
It is happiness
Optimistic
Lemon yellow
It is flaming sunlight
Flavors See More
Gleaming gold
It is a wink
A smile
It is a round sphere of pure light
It is happiness
Optimistic
Lemon yellow
It is flaming sunlight
Flavors See More
Gleaming gold
It is a wink
A smile
on April 28, 2015