Ask. Me. Anything.

Brittany and her two friends, Anna and Kaylie, take a girl's night out and meet a strange man that tells them how they'll die. Not thinking much of it, they go about their lives. But maybe they should've listened...

published on May 28, 2017not completed

Girl's Night Out

Kaylie and I were in her room, reading texts from her boyfriend. They were having problems in the relationship, and were arguing back and forth. I sit by her side, advising her on how to text back. I eventually lead her to break up with him, because I know she can do better. She knows she can do better, but she's still heartbroken.
"Hey", I said. "He's not worth it. Let's take a girl's night out with me, you, and Anna."
"Okay", she says, her voice shaky. "That'd be nice."
So we invite Anna over and we all go to the mall. It's right by Kaylie's house, so we walk there.
We had a good time, and Kaylie seemed to be getting over the breakup.
"Raymond who?" She laughed. "I can't believe I was ever with him in the first place."
"Yup", Anna said. "Join us in the single life!"
"You have your whole life ahead of you" I added. "Don't spend it dwelling on a stupid guy."
Little did I know, she didn't have her whole life ahead of her. None of us did. Maybe it would've been best if we hadn't known.
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Geez bruh-
Y'ALL SHOULD HAVE BELIEVED IN PSYCHIC MAGIC, WHAT DID HE TELL YOU!
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on August 10, 2022
great story, but maybe use a tad more details, but other then that PERFECTO!!!!!!!!!!
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Okay. Thanks for the feedback :)
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then YAY!!!!
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on June 15, 2017
No it didn't sound rude. I actually appreciate getting suggestions :)
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on June 12, 2017
no prob, sorry if it sounded rude.
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on June 10, 2017
This story is awesome.
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Thanks. :) I actually really appreciate it :)
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on May 28, 2017
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