Ask. Me. Anything.

Brittany and her two friends, Anna and Kaylie, take a girl's night out and meet a strange man that tells them how they'll die. Not thinking much of it, they go about their lives. But maybe they should've listened...

published on May 28, 2017not completed

Alley Man

We decide to go home late at night. We don't feel up to walking very far, so we take the shortcut through the alley. When we're in about the middle of the alley, we see a strange man. Just standing there, with a sign. It says "Ask me anything". I find this funny. Usually, people ask about the future, and think he's some kind of psychic. But psychics are frauds, and I know it's a joke, or so I thought.
"Hey can I ask you something?" I smile.
"Ask me anything", he says, expressionless.
I gesture towards my friends and I. "Tell us how we'll all die." I almost laugh.
He looks at Kaylie first. "You had a boyfriend, correct? You broke up today, correct?" The smile that was once there falls from her face and is replaced with fear.
"How..." She starts.
"He will kill you. You broke up with him. He'll get angry and murder you."
He then looks at Anna. "You're gonna die in a car accident. A very, very severe car accident. Just like your mother."
No one, except Kaylie and I, knew about her mother's death from a car accident. How could he have possibly known that?
Finally, he looks at me. He looks me dead in the eyes. I swear, it feels like he's looking right into my soul. "You", he said last. "You will die in an elevator. Once the doors close, the cable will snap. You'll fall from 10 stories."
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 2 users

Comments (8)

Geez bruh-
Y'ALL SHOULD HAVE BELIEVED IN PSYCHIC MAGIC, WHAT DID HE TELL YOU!
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2022
great story, but maybe use a tad more details, but other then that PERFECTO!!!!!!!!!!
reply
Okay. Thanks for the feedback :)
reply
then YAY!!!!
reply
About Author
Report
on June 15, 2017
No it didn't sound rude. I actually appreciate getting suggestions :)
reply
About Author
Report
on June 12, 2017
no prob, sorry if it sounded rude.
reply
About Author
Report
on June 11, 2017
About Author
Report
on June 11, 2017
About Author
Report
on June 10, 2017
This story is awesome.
reply
Thanks. :) I actually really appreciate it :)
reply
About Author
Report
on May 28, 2017
About Author
Report
on May 28, 2017