Ask. Me. Anything.

Brittany and her two friends, Anna and Kaylie, take a girl's night out and meet a strange man that tells them how they'll die. Not thinking much of it, they go about their lives. But maybe they should've listened...

published on May 28, 2017not completed

The First One

Once we get back to Kaylie's house, we are still shaken up.
"I'm sure it was just a lucky guess..." I say, but I'm unsure.
"A lucky guess?!" Anna yells. "I never told anyone except you guys about my mom! How did he know?!"
"We don't know how he knew. But there's a logical explanation that we just don't know of yet. Psychics are fake." Kaylie tries to reassure Anna.
"Let's just not think about it", I suggest. "It's probably nothing to worry about."
They agree, and we all sleepover.
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At around 2am, we were all asleep, but wake up to knocking on Kaylie's window. Kaylie, still groggy, goes to open it. It's Raymond.
"Ray?" She says. "Why are you here?"
"Baby, I miss you", he says. "Please come back. I love you."
"I can't", she begins. "I don't love you anymore. You broke my heart and didn't care. I can't be with a guy like that."
"I understand", he says. He reaches at the side of his jeans, and pulls out a gun.
We all stare in shock, unable to move.
"But if you're not gonna be with me, you will never be with anybody. Goodbye, Kaylie." Four gunshots fire. Raymond runs.
Kaylie's body lays on the floor, dead. The police come minutes later; the neighbors must have called. The police interrogate us, and we tell them what happened. Once they leave, Anna and I go back to our own houses. We don't feel like talking. Once I get home, all of my emotions hit me. I break down and cry uncontrollably, to the point where I'm gasping and choking.
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Geez bruh-
Y'ALL SHOULD HAVE BELIEVED IN PSYCHIC MAGIC, WHAT DID HE TELL YOU!
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on August 10, 2022
great story, but maybe use a tad more details, but other then that PERFECTO!!!!!!!!!!
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Okay. Thanks for the feedback :)
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then YAY!!!!
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on June 15, 2017
No it didn't sound rude. I actually appreciate getting suggestions :)
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on June 12, 2017
no prob, sorry if it sounded rude.
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on June 10, 2017
This story is awesome.
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Thanks. :) I actually really appreciate it :)
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on May 28, 2017
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