Mary-Sue - The Ultimate Guide

Mary-Sue - The Ultimate Guide

Based on every advice ever given, I believe I have conjured the ultimate guide to follow when creating an OC for any fandom, as Mary-Sue's exist everywhere. (There is still more to come, so don't panic if there is something left out. That just means it will be in a future chapter coming soon.)

published on March 03, 2017not completed

Position of Authority

Okay, the title of this chapter may confuse you, so let me explain.
It actually means positions such as nobility, and royalty.
And you knew I had to talk about this. This thing is just WAY too common in Mary-Sue's, and it just needs to STOP! Okay?
IT'S TIME TO STOP!

How many of you out there have an OC that plays a high role in life?
If you do, then think about how they obtained it. Was it to do with blood? Did they have to earn it?
Or did they just randomly acquire it for no logical explanation whatsoever?

If you got it through the blood, then... as long as it makes sense, then I guess it's okay. I mean, that's monarchy. It's actually done here in the UK with Queen Elizabeth II.
If you got it through earning it, tell us how. What did your OC do to earn that crown? (And I just realised that rhymed.)
But if you just randomly acquired the position...
Stop trying to be Relena Peacecraft from Gundam Wing! Nobody wants to be that annoying bitch!
NOBODY!
Why do you think they made so many yaoi fanfics for that anime?
NOBODY WANTED RELENA!

But the one I HATE the MOST, is when people claim that their OC is a God or Goddess.
Just...
WHAT?!
What the actual...
No. just no. You can NOT just randomly become an immortal almighty living person, I mean, what goes on in someone's head to make them think that's a good idea?
I am shocked that people are like this.
Really, it just...
No.
Behave.
Make it stop.

If there are any other authority positions I left out, let me know. I'll make a part 2 of this position of authority.
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I have very creative OC names what about roasted peanut butter choclate banana
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on January 31, 2018
Question:

What if for appearence, they have some of those attributes but make those realistic?

Such as, for females, they have huge breasts but when fighting it's a disadvantage, or, in general, they DISPISE them?
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Big breasts can be natural, or through plastic surgery, which is realistic. And it would hold them back, yes.
I suppose I do need to talk about appearances more.
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on November 23, 2017
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on November 23, 2017
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on April 02, 2017
Yep. Mary-Sue's aren't fun. At all. But hey, having blood relations to a canon character i.e a sibling to Sasuke, doesn't necessarily mean your character is a Mary-Sue or Gary Stu either. There are some pretty good non-Mary sue stories where this occurs. But that's beside the point. Anyways, other Mary-Sue traits include....Having multiple love interests, a perfect See More
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True, but I will be separately talking about them too. I'm not resting until this guide is complete.
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Fair enough~ :) (Long time no chat, by the way.)
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on April 01, 2017
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on April 01, 2017
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on April 01, 2017
I love this story! Maybe consider adding more about looks?
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The position of authority chapter's up, R'ena! Knock yourself out!
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on March 31, 2017
I will be soon. First I'm gonna talk about position of authority
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Yes!!
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on March 30, 2017
Oh you bet I will!
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on March 30, 2017
Ooh, that's good. And maybe talk about the immortality bullshit?
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on March 30, 2017
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on March 30, 2017
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on March 30, 2017
If you're gonna hate my new chapter, COME AT ME! I'm ready!
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lol ok so since I know your little message at the top was about me

I'm not on anything. its all a matter of opinion that you can't understand, that's why it was on the "unpopular OPINIONS" page

I just think having an of related to a canon character is cringy but here you are, freaking out again because maria wanted to get pissy about it
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I'm pretty sure you weren't the first to say it, hence why I said it wasn't to you.
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on March 12, 2017
you were even involved when I said it, tf
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on March 12, 2017
lol lie again
it says "to whoever said that blood relation makes your character a Mary sue..." and that was me

why would you put it there if it wasn't for anyone
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on March 12, 2017
What? It wasn't to anyone, chill.
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on March 12, 2017
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on March 07, 2017