The Cracked Doll

The Cracked Doll

Emma Coma moved into a Victorian house with her family, her mom, dad, and sister. She picked her room on the top floor and looked around. A floor board creaked, she pulled up the floor board to see an old doll under it. A long crack was found on the dolls back..but is the doll just a normal one? After a few days, things started getting weird...so find out yourself.

published on October 12, 2015not completed

Entry Three; May 19th, 1820

Entry Three; May 19th, 1820 I have found a secret room, it is in the wine cellar. There is a small door behind a wine holder. It is a very small room, but big enough for me and Emma and a few other belongings of mine. I have a secret. I stole Emma back and placed her in the room! I feel like such a..a..a rebel! I believe that is what the boy's call it! Right? I think so..anyways, I've set Emma in the room, and when ever I want time to myself, I could just go down in my room. It's so quiet, and so dark. I have to bring a candle down there, if me mum ever found the room, I would be in BIG trouble. For staying in such an 'unlady like' room, stealing a candle, and stealing my doll back. Well Emma isn't a doll, we always talk to each other. When I told me mum that she told me to stop acting so childish...this house seemed to have changed her though. I hate this house!..I HATE IT!
Hate;
Sara
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One more chapter and I can sleep easy
Otherwhise I'm gonna have chlaustrophobia infested dreams for the rest of my life
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okay I'm fixing the grammar errors right now (not Jane's texting of course) and adding on slightly more to the chapters then I'll write a new one
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Yay okay
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Wait..someone...cares about this..?
HOLY BALLS I'M GONNA WORK ON IT
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is there another chapter? i wanna read more!!!
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heh im workin on it ;)
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I gave it 5 stars. It's awesome! :D
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really? yay! :D i feel special X3 B)
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no one? jeez i expected at lease two people to like this story
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wow 4 people! :D:D:D
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