The Cracked Doll

The Cracked Doll

Emma Coma moved into a Victorian house with her family, her mom, dad, and sister. She picked her room on the top floor and looked around. A floor board creaked, she pulled up the floor board to see an old doll under it. A long crack was found on the dolls back..but is the doll just a normal one? After a few days, things started getting weird...so find out yourself.

published on October 12, 2015not completed

Well isn't this a nice home? You know just heads laying around and stuff

I laughed and shook my head. "You have been drinking to much coffee." I said and took another drink. "Says the one drinking!" She shouted, I put my hands up. "Alright alright alright, calm down. OK? There was a head, what did it look like?" I asked and took another drink. "It..it was a woman's head. She had long brown hair and pail skin. That's all I saw!" She said, I blinked. "Alright than, cool. Send me a pic next time." I said as I took a few doughnuts and my cup and started walking to my room, leaving her there with a shocked face.
"I have to unpack anyways!" I said as I shut my door and turned around. I bit a chocolate doughnut and looked at all the boxes. I sighed as I placed the doughnuts and coffee on top of a box and started opening random boxes. "CD's, records, posters, stuffed animals, video games." I went on and on naming things. "Alright, now lets put this crap here and this crap...here." I said as I placed my CD's on my dresser and my records next to them.
After many horrible hours of unpacking, playing with boxes, eating, and being lazy. I finally finished. I sighed and and plopped on the bed. I looked at the ground and raised an eyebrow. "Alright doll what you got for me." I said as I went back to the floorboard. I slowly opened it and looked down at the doll and the journal....alright cool. I stood up, grabbed a random pair of winter gloves, put them on and took them both out again. I winkled my nose at the smell of rat piss. "Gross." I muttered and blew on the journal. I slowly opened it and looked at the yellow pages. "Hello, I'm glad me mum allowed me to have you....what the hell?" I asked and looked it over again, the words were so faded that I could hardly read it. "Sara." I said and looked up. "So a chick named Sara lived here." I said and looked back at the door. "So your names Emma too huh?" I asked and smiled. "Sweet, two of a kind." I said and looked around. "Wheres my phone?" I asked and went on a life time search for it.
I lifted the sheets and smiled as I picked up my phone. "Sometimes I feel smart, and other times I'm just a stupid as Misa." I said as I looked over the messages.
'OMG I FEEL SO BAD FOR YOU!'
I sighed and texted back.
'Alright Jane whats the big deal?'
She didn't respond, not surprised, she said that two hours ago. I scratched my head and looked back at the doll. "Hey you little weirdo, didn't I put you here?" I asked as I placed her by the open floor boards again. "Weird." I muttered and placed the doll back, but placed the journal by my CD's. I opened the door with my long since empty coffee cup downstairs. "Yo! Ashley! Where are you?" I asked as I threw the up away, I looked outside to see her puking again. I looked back at the doughnuts, she ate about three of them. "Oh Andy, Ash." I said and chuckled at my own joke and went outside.
"Yo! The hell?" I asked, she looked at me and went back to puking. "I saw..it..again." She said, and held her phone out to me. I grabbed her hair and pulled it back, hey we might be hateful siblings, but when a girl is puking, you pull back her hair. That's just the Girl Code, even if you don't know her, or don't like her. You. Pull. Her. Hair. Back. I took her phone with her other hand and looked at the picture. "Dude..what the fuckk?" I asked as I looked at the big matted mass of brown hair in the toilet. "S..see?" She said and puked again. "That's disgusting." I said and looked at her. "How did you stay still long enough to take a picture?" I asked. she looked at me and snatched her phone away. "I had it on already and the moment I walked in the bathroom I shut my eyes and took a picture....I took about twelve, but only this one showed up." She said and walked inside. "I'm calling a plumber or something." She said, I rolled my eyes and walked inside. "Hey hey hey relax alright?" I said, she turned around and narrowed her eyes. "Calm down? I JUST SAW A HEAD! IN THE TOILET!" She shouted and went to the phone.
I sighed and walked upstairs. I went int my room and slammed the door shut. I turned around and covered my mouth. The floor board was open. I looked inside it and widened my eyes.....
She was gone.
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One more chapter and I can sleep easy
Otherwhise I'm gonna have chlaustrophobia infested dreams for the rest of my life
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okay I'm fixing the grammar errors right now (not Jane's texting of course) and adding on slightly more to the chapters then I'll write a new one
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Yay okay
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Wait..someone...cares about this..?
HOLY BALLS I'M GONNA WORK ON IT
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is there another chapter? i wanna read more!!!
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heh im workin on it ;)
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I gave it 5 stars. It's awesome! :D
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really? yay! :D i feel special X3 B)
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no one? jeez i expected at lease two people to like this story
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wow 4 people! :D:D:D
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