Chapter 5
As Dally walking us to the hide-out we stayed quiet.”Why are you guys being so quiet for? I don’t bite” Dally asked stopped walking”Maybe we don’t know what to say ,Dally” I stated mad.”Geez, your a fighily girl , I like it “ Dally jokes.Storm bout rip his head off if it wasn’t me holding back.I tried to hold back Storm when he’s mad sometimes it’s work sometimes it doesn’t.I had heard from dad that Dally flirts with every girl that talks back to him.Maybe that’s why Storm had gotten mad.I just wanted to back home with dad and everybody else.I knew that wasn’t going to happen any time soon.Later at the hide-out, “What’s with the sad face Dawn “ Dally had asked “I miss home.What did I do wrong” I stated still looking down until I felt a hand on my shoulder.”If it makes you feel better here’s a letter from your pa.” Dally said handing me it.At first I wonder would it be okay if I did open it.I look at my twin with ‘can I open it eyes.”Yes you can “ Storm told looking at me.I open the letter slowly and mentally read the letter.
Dear Dawn and Storm,
I know by the time you get this Dally is already half way there.I wish I could be there with you guys.Sadly, I trying very hard to clean things up with the fuzz.Its going ok for now.Don’t ever forget that I will love you no matter what.
Love father,
Ponyboy Curtis
I had tears because I really miss home.Storm and Dally noctied it.”What’s wrong Dawn “ Storm asked bending down my eye level which wasn’t very far from his. “R-read “ was all I could say as I handed Storm the letter,more note.Storm began to read it and nocited why I was crying.”It’s not likely for him to die that easily,Dawn” Storm states hugging me.”Dawn, Strom, I’m going to the store.Don’t worry I’ll be fine “ Dally said.
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um, the entire thing is pretty much exactly what happened to pony boy at the beginning of the original outsiders and aside from grammatical errors, i think this has potential. good job for the most part ?
keep it up!