The Outsiders Sequel

The Outsiders Sequel

This is a sueaul to the Outsiders. Let's go with what the story is about. Dawn and Strom was twins who are still treated unfairly by the Socs . They knew that nothing would change .

published on October 29, 2017not completed

Chapter 6

Chapter 6 We were starting to get worried.We had seen a few fuzz every now and then.As Strom and I waited for Dally we saw an ambulace with lights."Dawn , Stay here " my brother told me but I did not listen.I wanted to know who was in there.I wanted to know if that person was ok. I ran down to my brother and pasted him on actdent.I wasn't out of breath ehiter.I saw a gispilesd of who it was.I frozed. I fell down and pass out.I had no reason to pass out , it just happen.Strom ran to me , besides I couldn't anything but hear his voice."Dawn, hold on ! Dawn ! Don't you died too.....Please " he cried.In all of my life I never herad my brother cry , he was the strongest bewteen us.I , on the other hand can get hurt really easy so my brother has to make people stop or I 'll cry for three and a half hours.

As Strom was crying Dally came back."What's wrong with you Strom " Dally asked"What's.Wrong. What's wrong. I'll tell you whats wrong .My ony sister is pass out and is slowly breathly ! Thats what's wrong. " Storm yelled. " Dude, Chill .Is she breathing ? Like at all ." Dally asked trying to cool Storm off."What did I just say ,I said she was slowly breacthing..." Storm states trying to clam down."Can you carry her ?" Dally asked again "I'm stronger than her,so I guess I can carry her." Strom say slowly putting his sister on his back." Well that's good.Follow me I know a faster way to hospail ." Dally commatied. Storm started to walk when he felt me move a little and yelped in pain."Hey Dally can I check my sister real quick , please " Storm begged.

Dally nodded Storm placed his down and noctied a mark on her sholder .He noctied socs and know why.He picked her up again and ran " Come on Dally ! " Storm yelles running. "Here is the loction to the short cut to there ok. I'll hold them off just get you and your sister there.Your dad needs you ok " Dally states gving Storm the place for the short cut.
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ok, so
um, the entire thing is pretty much exactly what happened to pony boy at the beginning of the original outsiders and aside from grammatical errors, i think this has potential. good job for the most part ?
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Thanks .Its about the outsiders kids
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yw. and yeah, I picked up on that
keep it up!
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I had to read this this year to
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Yeah.My teacher wants us to The Outsiders projects and we had many opaintions to pick and I 'd pick this.My teacher wants us to this instead of a big test.
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To late my brother beat you to it.
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Well .I not telling you anything about it.
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No something happened and we had the week off.
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Have you wacth it yet.
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My teacher is just making us watch the movie
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