The Outsiders Sequel

The Outsiders Sequel

This is a sueaul to the Outsiders. Let's go with what the story is about. Dawn and Strom was twins who are still treated unfairly by the Socs . They knew that nothing would change .

published on October 29, 2017not completed

Chapter 4

Chapter 4 Dad, Storm, and I had got home.Dad had fixed us dinner witch was chicken with the side of fries.Me and Storm both love to eat chocolate just like our dad.” Dad can we eat chocolate too “ Storm asked nicely ” Maybe” he stated.After we finish eating we sit and talk about our day.Before we could talk about our day there was a knock at the door.”I’m coming “ I yelled.I opened the door and who was I wasn’t expecting.” Um ,Excuse me miss but do you know a Ponyboy Curtis “ he asked “ Yeah he’s my dad “ I answered.He had grabbed my arm and pull me onto the street.I tried to yell for help but didn’t work .” Look , if you yell I’ll be in big trouble “ he stated throwing me onto the car.” Be a nice little girl and stay still while I do this “ he whispered .” Dawn!!! Leave her alone!! “ I heard another voice but I had blacked out.

When I woke up up I saw blood everywhere even on me. I didn’t know why nor I wanted to know.I saw Storm and dad standing in front of me.”W.....what’s going on....” I whispered “Are you ok Dawn “ dad asked me in a soft voice.”Why is there so much blood “ I asked.”Thats not important right now Dawn.” Storm stated walking over to us.”We need to go “ Storm stated while helping me up.” Let’s go home besides I have a surprise for you and Storm.” dad ad told me.”What happed dad,Storm , is there something you’re hiding from me “ I asked when I had stop walking.Dad and Storm never hide stuff unless it was very bad.”Its for your safety ,Dawn , ok “ dad told me looking very worried.”I’m sorry.........” I whispered and ran.”Dawn ! Wait “ dad yelled and ran after me with Storm .Dad had got me hand and stopped me.”Why will you two not tell me anything “ I cried “Because we did something bad,ok Dawn “ Dad stated.”They think you did it “ Storm said pointing to me. “ What!” I yelled “Now we have to send you and your brother away somewhere.” dad had stated why I had tears in my eyes.”Look Dawn ! I don’t want to lose you two ok.Just do as I say and take this paper and money and go ! “ dad yelled at me.He never ever yells at me.I understood why did he.

He didn’t want to lose us like his brother.”I’m sorry dad.Ok thanks bye “ I said grabbing my brother’s hand pulling him to the place on the paper.”H-h-Hey “ a voice came behind me and Storm. “Who are you! “ Storm yelled while in fighting stand.” I’m not here to hurt you.I am Johnny, your dad’s best friend “ the voice stated.Then he just walked away from us and Storm and I continue to walk.As we were walking we saw the fuzz a few times walking but they couldn’t see me.Maybe because every time they come near us Storm would hide me from them somehow.Storm is nice to anyone other then when you make him mad.” Dawn Curtis ! Are under arrest for the the murder of Mick Amber “ a man voice yelled . “I didn’t do anything “ I yelled while running away while Storm tired to convince the police.I started to run out of breath.” Hello , little Curtis , how are you “ a man voice came up.I thought it might of been the Johnny person but this voice was different.


“W-w-who are you “ I asked scared “Don’t worry I not going to hurt you ,Dawn “ he said. “What’s your name “ I asked again “Dallas, but most people called me Dally “ he started looking at something in my hands.” Oh I know that place but we might want to wait for the person who’s was with you .” Dally stated and I nodded.For once I felt safe with some else for once.I have no clue why I feel comfortable with this person Dally.I guess I do feel safe and comfortable with people that is friends with dad.”Dawn ! “ Storm yelled catching his breath.”Who’s he “ Dally asked pointing to Storm.”He’s my twin, Storm.”I answered hugging Storm.”How did it go with the fuzz Storm. “I asked “Good, I told them that you only did it for self defense.They still be coming for you because they are not sure .” Storm stated.”I can help “ Dally stated proud.”Dawn , who’s this.” Storm asked pulling me back.” He also one of dads friends “ I answered s looking at him.” Ok....I’ll trust him only because he’s dads friend.
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ok, so
um, the entire thing is pretty much exactly what happened to pony boy at the beginning of the original outsiders and aside from grammatical errors, i think this has potential. good job for the most part ?
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Thanks .Its about the outsiders kids
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yw. and yeah, I picked up on that
keep it up!
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I had to read this this year to
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Yeah.My teacher wants us to The Outsiders projects and we had many opaintions to pick and I 'd pick this.My teacher wants us to this instead of a big test.
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To late my brother beat you to it.
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Well .I not telling you anything about it.
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No something happened and we had the week off.
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Have you wacth it yet.
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My teacher is just making us watch the movie
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