The Outsiders Sequel

The Outsiders Sequel

This is a sueaul to the Outsiders. Let's go with what the story is about. Dawn and Strom was twins who are still treated unfairly by the Socs . They knew that nothing would change .

published on October 29, 2017not completed

Chapter 3

Chapter 3 Why would my brother bring up dad out of the blue ? All I know is that is said we were alike.As we were walking to find dad. We noticed that dad was the gas station for work.When dad works so do we. We went home got our uniforms for work.My uniform was dark blue shirt with a navy blue pants.Even as a girl .Once we got dressed we headed off to work.The place was packed.”Hello, Dawn, Storm .” we heard voice coming from the back.Its one of dads friends Two-Bit.”H-hello “ I whispered sheepish.So as the day went on it got busy and busier. Its was just or was just ‘ Greasers ‘ restaurant.The Socs had started to come and us Greasers didn’t like it.Even my dad ,his brother, or any of friends.The Socs would always try something and tried to get my ‘ affection ‘ .My dad would gets mad or something like that.My brother gets very close of beating alive. But it’s always clam at the end.

I was finishing my last orders when my dad had walked in.” Hello, Dawn” he stated shock because him and Storm had looked for me.”Your order will be here in a few” I started while watching the other Socs. I had finish for the day and went to see my dad and Storm.”Storm,told me why you were crying.I sorry Dawn. “ dad said.I didn’t know he would be sad over me crying I was wrong.”No.I should be sorry.Its wasn’t you ,it was me.I ran away crying and you and Storm looked for me.So I’m sorry dad” I stated.We were walking home when Soda walked up to us.” Hi, Ponyboy.Hows my niece and nephew doing .” Soda said putting both arms around me and Storm.” Geez , Soda .Your chocking them “ dad laughed. “Sorry “ Soda said sheepishly letting go.Then we see our cousins Snap and Coke. A lot of people ask why their name that.The names Coke- Cake and Snapop are just nick names.Their real names are Chris and Sam.The reason Chis’s nick name is Coke - Cake is because he likes to eat coalolete cake with a coke.Sam’s nick name came from him sitting by a fire while drinking a soda.

“It’s real nice to see you guys “ Soda stated ruffling my hair “Are you ok now Dawn “ Soda asked worried.”Yes Uncle Soda.I’m fine now “ I answered.”Thats good to know .” Soda said.” You we’re crying when you ran into me .Then after you ran off your brother came asked me if I’d seen you .Boy, you have one in a kind twin. Even if he might be taller than you or looks more like Pony.He doesn’t care about that he cares about you, his only sister.His twin. “ Soda happily stated.After we stopped talking to uncle Soda we walked down the street we saw the Socs who had saved us.”Hey “ he yelled running to us.”What.....” I whispered mad.”Oh boy,how’d get Dawn mad.” dad laugh “ You better run, while you have a change.Once she runs,she catches anything she after. “ Storm agreed.

“Well ,I’m. not looking for a fight or a case.I’d just want us to be cool with everything.You dig ? “ he argued. “ I would be ok with it it’s just that you Socs don’t know don’t know how to STOP the whole fighting. “ I yelled.The only thing keeping me back was my both my dad and Storm.If it wasn’t for them I would already jumped him.How can anyone stand people when they jumped you over, and over again.Then come back and said their sorry afterwards.I just don’t get it.
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ok, so
um, the entire thing is pretty much exactly what happened to pony boy at the beginning of the original outsiders and aside from grammatical errors, i think this has potential. good job for the most part ?
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Thanks .Its about the outsiders kids
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yw. and yeah, I picked up on that
keep it up!
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I had to read this this year to
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Yeah.My teacher wants us to The Outsiders projects and we had many opaintions to pick and I 'd pick this.My teacher wants us to this instead of a big test.
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To late my brother beat you to it.
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Well .I not telling you anything about it.
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No something happened and we had the week off.
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Have you wacth it yet.
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My teacher is just making us watch the movie
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