Chapter 3
I was finishing my last orders when my dad had walked in.” Hello, Dawn” he stated shock because him and Storm had looked for me.”Your order will be here in a few” I started while watching the other Socs. I had finish for the day and went to see my dad and Storm.”Storm,told me why you were crying.I sorry Dawn. “ dad said.I didn’t know he would be sad over me crying I was wrong.”No.I should be sorry.Its wasn’t you ,it was me.I ran away crying and you and Storm looked for me.So I’m sorry dad” I stated.We were walking home when Soda walked up to us.” Hi, Ponyboy.Hows my niece and nephew doing .” Soda said putting both arms around me and Storm.” Geez , Soda .Your chocking them “ dad laughed. “Sorry “ Soda said sheepishly letting go.Then we see our cousins Snap and Coke. A lot of people ask why their name that.The names Coke- Cake and Snapop are just nick names.Their real names are Chris and Sam.The reason Chis’s nick name is Coke - Cake is because he likes to eat coalolete cake with a coke.Sam’s nick name came from him sitting by a fire while drinking a soda.
“It’s real nice to see you guys “ Soda stated ruffling my hair “Are you ok now Dawn “ Soda asked worried.”Yes Uncle Soda.I’m fine now “ I answered.”Thats good to know .” Soda said.” You we’re crying when you ran into me .Then after you ran off your brother came asked me if I’d seen you .Boy, you have one in a kind twin. Even if he might be taller than you or looks more like Pony.He doesn’t care about that he cares about you, his only sister.His twin. “ Soda happily stated.After we stopped talking to uncle Soda we walked down the street we saw the Socs who had saved us.”Hey “ he yelled running to us.”What.....” I whispered mad.”Oh boy,how’d get Dawn mad.” dad laugh “ You better run, while you have a change.Once she runs,she catches anything she after. “ Storm agreed.
“Well ,I’m. not looking for a fight or a case.I’d just want us to be cool with everything.You dig ? “ he argued. “ I would be ok with it it’s just that you Socs don’t know don’t know how to STOP the whole fighting. “ I yelled.The only thing keeping me back was my both my dad and Storm.If it wasn’t for them I would already jumped him.How can anyone stand people when they jumped you over, and over again.Then come back and said their sorry afterwards.I just don’t get it.
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um, the entire thing is pretty much exactly what happened to pony boy at the beginning of the original outsiders and aside from grammatical errors, i think this has potential. good job for the most part ?
keep it up!