Changing The World

Changing The World

With a war separating Earth, two sides (Adya,light side, and Duante, dark side) are locked in a deadly war. Two unlikely teams must work together to prevent a dark evil that is beginning to awake, or will they destroy each other in the process?

published on July 02, 2014not completed

Past Comes Back

Past Comes Back That Night

Looking around, Crystal knew this was her chance. A chance to kill the Adya. Creeping to Evie, she raised her hand in the air and was ready to kill her. The happiness of seeing Evie's blood every where made her smile. This was her only chance to complete what she was hoping for. Suddenly, something sharp grazed Crystal's arm. The attack had cut her arm causing bleeding down her arm. 'Who did this?' she would think before looking up. Looking up, Crystal saw the emotionless face of Max holding the bloody dagger in her hand.

"You little brat! You made me bleed." (Crystal waking everyone but Lilith up yelling)
"You were trying to kill Evie! Who knows who you would of hurt next?!" (Max)
"*yawn* What is going on?" (Alyssa)
"Apparently, Crystal was trying to kill Evie, and Max cut her arm." (Crystal Xie)
"Does that mean I can cut one of their members?" (Autumn)
"No!" (Hannah)
"Does anyone have a healer?" (Alyssa)
"Yes...The Evie girl can heal.." (Alana)
"Will you heal Crystal?" (Alyssa)
"That Adya will not touch me!" (Crystal)
"Crystal! If you wake Lilith up, I swear I will kick your butt." (Alana)
"Why can't we wake the dog up?" (Hannah)
"She has a anger problem when she wakes up for no reason." (Autumn)
"Oh. OK. Well Evie will you please heal her, so we can go back to sleep." (Max)
"She just tried to kill me! Do you think I will help her after that!!?" (Evie)
"Hard headed much aren't you Forever?" (Hannah)
"Don't call me that!" (Evie)
"Just help her out. I want to go back to sleep." (Lacee)
"Ugh! Fine." (Evie)

Evie thought of other things to do rather than heal the enemy. Placing her hand on Crystal's cut, she squeezed tight and healed the cut. Taking her hand away, Evie saw Crystal bite her lip. 'What is with this girl?' Evie thought going back to her friends.

"Alyssa, Crystal is a threat to our team. Control your team mates." (Max)
"I had no idea that would happen, Adya. I will talk to her." (Alyssa)
"Now lets go back to bed!" (Evie)

Alyssa watched as all the Enforcers laid back down to sleep. However, Alyssa did not like how Max told her to control her team like her team mates were animals besides Lilith who is a animal. Glaring at Crystal, Alyssa felt the hatred glowing from Crystal.

"Alyssa, we need to kill them. They are weak. They won't make it. You know that." (Crystal)
"Shh. Let them fight with us. Y'all will need the help." (Alyssa laying back down)
"Y'all? What is she talking about?" (Crystal muttering to herself)


The Next Day


Thinking back, Max realized how much she couldn't trust the Destroyers. Packing up, she looked over and saw the girls grabbing their equipment. From what she could tell, Alyssa was whispering what happened last night to Lilith. 'What was with these girls?' Max thought walking which her team down the forest.

Lilith held on to Alyssa tight. Looking at her friend, Lilith noticed the pain she was going through. Lilith knew once they made it inside the cave that her friend would slowly disappear and make room for someone else. Thinking, she tried wondering of all the things she could do to help her friend, but nothing came to thought.

Flying in the air, Crystal Xie loved the cold wind blowing her blue hair. Crystal Xie knew how tight the tense was. Enjoying being alone, she saw it. The mountain radiated darkness off of it. Something evil was coming near them.

Walking close to Merlin and Flash, Evie realized just how evil the Duante members were. For years, she forgot about Duante and spent her time with people who cared for her. The lose. The heart ache. Evie didn't want to lose any more people she's care about.

Glaring around her, Alana did not care too much about the drama going on between the groups. Her mind stayed focused on the Duante children slowly losing their parents' lives. They could be alone. Scared. Alone.

Noticing her anger, Kiara tugged on Hannah's clothes. Hannah wasn't sure why all her friends were trusting a group of murders. She sees the evil girls in front of her just acting so normal and trying to win over her friends and her.

Lacee watched with a pain forming in her chest. The hidden ability she had been hiding was killing her more and more, but nothing fueled her more than what Crystal almost did. Lacee was just starting to trust them. Now, they have crossed the line.

Glaring at the mountain, Autumn was ready to fight the fake god waiting for us. The journey was fun, but Autumn still dreamed of the death of the animals behind her. She hated that she let the animals live as long as she has. Was she getting soft? No. Not yet.

Mad at herself, Crystal stayed at the front of the group. Her mission was a failure. How could she not finish the attack? With such a little wound, it would of been easy. Was she getting too weak to kill people? No. Crystal beat herself up about what she couldn't finish.

Looking up at Lilith, Alyssa felt honored to have friends like Lilith helping herself out. However, she knew what would happen in that mountain. The lose of her mind. The attacking of her friends shot the fear in her weak body, but she knew her friends could save her. Maybe just maybe she could not let him take over.

Finally, the girls made it to the entrance of the cave. Blue crystals shoot out of every direction on the walls. The gate was a stone wall with blue patterns on it. When the girls stood in front of it, the light shined through out the cave. Hitting each blue crystal, the Enforcers thought it was so beautiful, but the Destroyers were ready for whatever terrible thing was in their way. Radiating everywhere, the light glowed it crystal in a show of amazing. Suddenly, the light hit them. The girls felt something strange running through them. Like, their entire secrets were being searched through. Unlike the others, Alyssa was kneeling on the ground in pain. She felt like her head was splitting in half. He was close. Very close. Getting inside her, she could hear him.

Inside Alyssa's head

'Welcome back. Are you ready to help me destroy this beautiful world y'all have created?' (Nemesis)
'No. Get out of my head.' (Alyssa)
'We are one, Alyssa Woods! Like it or not! You will be my puppet!' (Nemesis)

Crystal, Autumn, Alana and Lilith kneel down beside Alyssa trying to hold her up.

"Ali, whats wrong?" (Crystal)
"It hurts..Get out of here." (Alyssa)
"We won't back down from a fight, Ali" (Autumn)
"We are here to stop him and save you." (Alana)
"See, Ali. We are here for you. Always. No matter what." (Lilith)
"Girls..y'all are great friends. Please save me from him." (Alyssa)
"Why is she in so much pain? It is so beautiful." (Evie)
"Something is going to happen isn't it?" (Max)
"I am.. not sure.. My head just hurts.." (Alyssa)
"What is going on here?" (Hannah)
"Should we be ready to fight?" (Lacee)
"From the looks of it, maybe." (Crystal Xie)

The light disappeared while something else took its spot. Creatures of blue figures appeared first. Then, people took over. Each person had a connection to the people the creatures were resembling. A trickster using his powers to break the girls down.

"Bravery? Is that you?" (Evie)
"That creature...No I killed it...How?" (Autumn)
"That person..No you won't boss me!" (Hannah)
"Mother..You're alive..How?" (Lilith)
"Robin...But how?" (Max)
"You are still alive..I killed a bully like you!" (Crystal)
"Master? But no.." (Lacee)
"Father?" (Crystal Xie)
"What how? Lexi.." (Alana)
"Jaden..No you are not here! It's all a big lie!" (Alyssa)



Next time:

The girls' will fight their pasts. Will everyone of them be able to kill them, or will the connection between them prevent them from killing the other?
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But thanks for te update!! Awesome! (Yet again)
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Haha! I'll finish the next chapter today
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on December 09, 2014
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on October 14, 2014
I finally updated this lol
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H*ll yeah! Now I'm on a go read..
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on October 10, 2014
When are you going to update?
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I am gonna update very soon. Haven't had much time to be on since school but I will try now
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Oh kk
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on October 01, 2014
OMFG THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO AWSOME!
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If i could rate this again and again i would, this deserves more then five stars, But in all honesty, the only thing is it needs to be edited as I have seen some mistakes still all in all I am LOVING this story,
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on July 19, 2014
This is getting interesting.. Even though it even was already
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Thank you! ^_^
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on July 17, 2014
Sweet
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on July 16, 2014
YES NEW CHAPTER!!
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on July 16, 2014
aaaaawwwwwwssssssoooommmeeeeeeee
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on July 11, 2014
Thanks for adding that, this Story is so amazing ^.^
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on July 09, 2014
I love it! Its amazing! And oooo OMG im so evil >:D
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MUAHAHAJA xD
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on July 07, 2014
Loving it^.^
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on July 07, 2014
Amazing battle good imagery
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Thank you!
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on July 04, 2014
This looks awesome
keep writing and i will keep reading thanks for picking Lacee though.
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Your welcome! And thank you for liking it :)
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on July 03, 2014
So awsome so intreasting my GOD u write amazing!
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Thank you! :D
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on July 02, 2014
This is so AWESOME!
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Thank you! :D
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