element university

element university is the only collage for element benders, ally is an avatar ready to make her next move which is indeed,college at elements university.

published on June 09, 2015not completed

meeting hank peterson

  I must've fallen asleep because Ginger shakes me and my eyes pop open.
"WAKE UP" she yells
"one more minute" i say turning on my other side but it's no use i was awake and i would stay awake till ten at least. "ugh, fine i'm up" i get up and check my phone which has 60 new text messages from my mom, i decide i will check them all after dinner, which was in a couple of minutes.  I follow Lila and Ginger to the cafeteria just in time for dinner.  i pick up a tray full of grapes, a sandwich and a pudding cup.   I walk over to ginger, and Lila.
"do you min if my cousin sits with us" Lila asks
"i don't mind do you?" i ask Ginger
"oh of course not!" she says
"thanks, well before i invite him over i just want to say he just found his power of earth and well hes still learning how to use it" Lila says
"so whats bad about learning your new power still, i even have trouble using my powers" Ginger says happily
"i know ijust want him to feel welcome hes really shy well i'll go get him" Lila walks over to a brown haired boy who just received his lunch.  Lila guides him over to us and sits down"
"hi" he says shyly
"Ginger, Ally, this is hank, and hank, this is Ginger, and ally"
"hi, i'm Ginger" Ginger says in a quiet voice like the day i met her, i guess she was kinda shy unless you get to know her.
"I'm ally" i say holding out a firm hand and he take it.  he then sits down along with the rest of us.  As he reaches out his hand to take the pudding cup a rock comes out and hits him in the hand.
"ow! sorry that was me" he say blushing and letting out a short sigh
"it's not your fault entirely" Ginger says
"ya it kinda is" he say in a even quieter voice.  we finish eating quickly and go back to our dorm, it's already 10:23 by the time we finish talking with hank in our dorm.  he heads off to his dorm and Ginger, Lila, and i drift off to sleep.
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on June 16, 2022
I love the story! You're getting a LOT better with your grammar! :) I look forward to reading more :D
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on November 25, 2016
as @MerTaylor said, great story, plot and characters but a lot of grammer mistakes. In the third chapter you got better by adding capitals on the names but still you use a lower case i instead of and I when talking about yourself. Another few tipes, indeant the line when someon talks. In the titles of the chapters, make sure each wourd is capitlaized. Anyway, See More
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Yep. Exactly. You had some typos in your explanation there... Sorry but I couldn't help but point it out.
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Yeah. I do that lots. :)
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on June 12, 2015
yeah, i was in a hurry, kinda funny about how i had some typos while writing about typos and such
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on June 12, 2015
Thx! I'm working on mrammar still as you might of noticed :">
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on June 12, 2015
Aww thanks!
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on June 12, 2015
dont worry! It's getting so much better!!
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Love it! Lots of details, great concept. There are some grammar errors, but other than that, amazing!
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thanks! and i'm working on my grammar i'll go over it again :)
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:D No problem! :D And I absolutely love that, even if there are some mistakes, you're making the effort to go back and fix them!! :D :D
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