element university

element university is the only collage for element benders, ally is an avatar ready to make her next move which is indeed,college at elements university.

published on June 09, 2015not completed

Danger?

The alarm clock goes off and i hit the off button.  Ginger is already up and heading into the bathroom to change.  I pull off my blankets and comb my hair.  i pull my hair up into a ponytail and finish just in time for Ginger to come out of the bathroom in a black an white sweat shirt and jeans.  i go in and change into a blue t-shit and black jeans i walk out after brushing my teeth and let Lila in.  
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I walk with Ginger to our first class, the element rules.  we are about to pass the clinics office when i hear something.
"It's gone my elemental powers" a voice wails, a female it sounds like
"it's can't vanish in thin air" a male voice says
"it's didn't vanish i told you he took it away from me it was scary" she began to cry i could tell
"now that's imposable lets get you back to class" thats all i hear before we get far enough that i shouldn't be able to hear.  Ginger and I get to class just in time.
"your late" mr. harson sais (our teacher)
"no we are on time" i say
"i don't think so!" he points to his watch which say 9:01 a minute late we sit at our desks and i try to listen but all i can focus on is what that girl said, is there really danger?
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on June 16, 2022
I love the story! You're getting a LOT better with your grammar! :) I look forward to reading more :D
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on November 25, 2016
as @MerTaylor said, great story, plot and characters but a lot of grammer mistakes. In the third chapter you got better by adding capitals on the names but still you use a lower case i instead of and I when talking about yourself. Another few tipes, indeant the line when someon talks. In the titles of the chapters, make sure each wourd is capitlaized. Anyway, See More
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Yep. Exactly. You had some typos in your explanation there... Sorry but I couldn't help but point it out.
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Yeah. I do that lots. :)
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on June 12, 2015
yeah, i was in a hurry, kinda funny about how i had some typos while writing about typos and such
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on June 12, 2015
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on June 12, 2015
Thx! I'm working on mrammar still as you might of noticed :">
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on June 12, 2015
Aww thanks!
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on June 12, 2015
dont worry! It's getting so much better!!
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on June 12, 2015
Love it! Lots of details, great concept. There are some grammar errors, but other than that, amazing!
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thanks! and i'm working on my grammar i'll go over it again :)
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:D No problem! :D And I absolutely love that, even if there are some mistakes, you're making the effort to go back and fix them!! :D :D
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