element university

element university is the only collage for element benders, ally is an avatar ready to make her next move which is indeed,college at elements university.

published on June 09, 2015not completed

the dorm

i walk with ginger up to a table with the dorm sign up sheets. we pick room A89 there was a girl named lila already signed up there and i couldn't wait to meet her.  i walk with ginger up the flight of steps to a dorm room with the letter and numbers A89 on the door.  Ginger takes a deep breath and opens it.  inside is a red haired girl with pitch black eyes.
"hi" she says putting more books onto her shelf along with an ipad and iphone.
"hi" ginger says but i just smile to busy putting my bags onto my bed.  I fix the sheets and place my laptop my dad gave me onto my desk, along with a notepad and pencil.
"so your Lila?" i ask
"ya" Lila says "i'm a tech bender well obviously, because of my eyes!"
"your eyes seem darker then other tech benders" ginger says
"ya i get that a lot" she smiles a little and sits down on her bed
"what do you wanna do?" i ask after a little while
"we can play a board game" ginger says
"what game?" lila asks as ginger reaches under her bed and pulls out monopoly
"great we'll be playing all night" i joke
"well i say it's worth it" ginger says bringing it to the middle of the room.  We all gather around the game and begin to play. 5 hours pass i can feel my eyes drooping, it's 1:04 in the morning.  I slowly turn to ginger because it's her turn but all i see is her blonde hair on part of the board.  i turn to Lila who is now trudging to her bed. I do the same falling instantly asleep.
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The cafeteria's toast tastes like heaven.  The butter sinks into my teeth as i watch the cafeteria buzz with noise.  Lila sits next to me, and ginger sits in front of me. Tomorrow school started and i couldn't wait to get started. i finish eating fast and rush to my dorm room and make my bed.  i pull on some clean clothes, i put on a pair of jean shorts, a plane light blue tee, and black converse.  I pull my hair up in a pony tale.  i look at the mirror and see me, a black haired girl not small but deferentially not tall for a 18 year old.  my eyes seem to sparkle even though they are brown, I've never cared about what other people say i just want to be me. ginger walks out of the bathroom in a graffiti tee, jeans, sneakers, and her hair pulled into a bun. Ginger walks over to Lila and me.
"k your turn to get ready" ginger tells Lila who is still in her PJ's.  I lay on my bed and stare at the ceiling Tomorrow was the first day of collage but i still needed to get through this day.
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on October 04, 2023
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on June 16, 2022
I love the story! You're getting a LOT better with your grammar! :) I look forward to reading more :D
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on November 25, 2016
as @MerTaylor said, great story, plot and characters but a lot of grammer mistakes. In the third chapter you got better by adding capitals on the names but still you use a lower case i instead of and I when talking about yourself. Another few tipes, indeant the line when someon talks. In the titles of the chapters, make sure each wourd is capitlaized. Anyway, See More
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Yep. Exactly. You had some typos in your explanation there... Sorry but I couldn't help but point it out.
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Yeah. I do that lots. :)
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on June 12, 2015
yeah, i was in a hurry, kinda funny about how i had some typos while writing about typos and such
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on June 12, 2015
Thx! I'm working on mrammar still as you might of noticed :">
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on June 12, 2015
Aww thanks!
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on June 12, 2015
dont worry! It's getting so much better!!
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Love it! Lots of details, great concept. There are some grammar errors, but other than that, amazing!
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thanks! and i'm working on my grammar i'll go over it again :)
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:D No problem! :D And I absolutely love that, even if there are some mistakes, you're making the effort to go back and fix them!! :D :D
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