Matchmaker

Matchmaker

Heather is an 16 year old girl who just moved from Georgia. As she starts a new school, she makes three unlikely friends. When the Fall Festival comes along, Candy, Coraline, and Tracy want to repay the favor by finding Heather a perfect match.

published on June 28, 2014not completed

Detention

Detention Detention. It's a mean, crude, boring, strict, and probably at least 30 other words I can't think of right now. I was alone, except for some other girl at the back of the room, sobbing and muttering something under her breath. The clock read 12:30, so my torture would end in half an hour. i had finished all my homework last night, an I hadn't been assigned anything for second period. Coraline wasn't there, so I was assuming she was still at Mr. P.'s office, and Kain was flirting with me again, so basically everything was as normal as it gets. I did everything possible think of at the moment: braid my hair, twirl my pencil, drum my fingers on the desk, make a "Cat's Cradle" out of my hairband, even read my textbook (which i immediately gave up after 2 gruesome pages), and looked at the clock again. 12:31. I tilted my head back and groaned. This was going to be a long lunch break.

After the bell FINALLY rang, I trudged to fourth period. When I walked in, Tracy was looking around and frowning. She noticed me and her expression lightened, and she beckoned me over.
"Where were you?!" she whisper-yelled at me once i sat down.
"Um... its a long story..." Tracy frowned at looked at her watch.
"We've got time. Spill," she prompted. I explained what had happened to her in the exact same way I had told Mr. P., but, you know, less formally. Tracy listened and thoughtfully gazed somewhere over my head.
"Oh... wow," Tracy mumbled when I finished, at a loss for words. As if on cue, the bell rang and everyone immediately sat down with their hands folded across their desks. I clumsily followed their example, but didnt have enough time to get it right when Ms. Harris paraded in. I guess I did a pretty bad job, because as she scrutinized the room, her eyes rested on me. She smiled,  an unpleasant sight, because with her bright red lipsticks and thin, tight lips she reminded me of a snake. She marched up to my desk and leaned over.
"How was detention today Heather?" she asked. Scarlet blush covered my entire face as i stuttered: "I-it was fine ma'am." Ms. Harris frowned, and for a moment she reminded me of Libby.
"Detention, my dear," she said matter-of-factly, "Is not suppost to be "fine." Or would you like another?"
"No ma'am." For some reason I felt obligated to call her "ma'am", even though i never heard anyone call her that. I looked at Tracy for help, but she was rigid and facing forward, with an occasional glance towards me without moving her head. She bit her lip, which was the only sign she wasnt a statue aside from her eyes. I had expected worse, but Ms. Harris just narrowed her eyes at me and sat back calmly at her desk. I gulped. Tracy breathed a small sigh and smiled nervously at me.
"For today's lesson, we are going..." I blocked Ms. Harris's voice out of my head as I thought about how bad I had started my new school.
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Wow, havent written these words in a while.
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Update!
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@Kisume are you gonna make more
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on February 18, 2021
YEAH ^.^
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on January 18, 2015
PLEASE DONT DITCH DIS
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on January 17, 2015
UPDATE DISSSSS
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TT^TT i really truly am sorry. I have school, and im working on three other stories besides this one praaaaaght.
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on October 21, 2014
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on October 20, 2014
When are you updating!!!! IT IS SUCH A GOOD STORY I MUST KNOW!~~~~~
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lol soon :D school started, i dont have much time to work on my stories :(
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on August 21, 2014
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on August 21, 2014
Like the new chapters! :D
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thx!
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on August 21, 2014
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on August 20, 2014
Yayay!
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:P :D
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It's fine. I was just curious
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on August 13, 2014
next chapter actually! its just that i already had this one planned out to introduce the dance ;)
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on August 13, 2014
When are you including my OC?
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on August 13, 2014
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on August 13, 2014
I love it :)
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thx! glad you like! :D
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on August 10, 2014
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on August 10, 2014
XD funny! Write more sooon!
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on August 08, 2014
@BlizzardPony @CrystalDiamond2323 @GymnasticsBubbleZo @ILoveMusic @piepantslol @Ravenclaw3243 @The_Great_And_Powerful_Trixie @TheRilingRavenclaw Update! Enjoy! :D
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OMG! Love it~
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Heather is 5'8
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on August 09, 2014
yeah, but Audren is around 5'9
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on August 09, 2014
But, with the part about Addie talking about the bathing suit I was slightly confused. Because Coraline is like SUPER tall. She is 6' 5". I know it is tall, but long story.
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on August 09, 2014
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on August 08, 2014
Can I make an OC?
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sure. i have a profile question for that!
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I made an oc!
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on August 06, 2014
;) :D
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on August 06, 2014
Ok! I'll check that out!
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on August 06, 2014
Awesome! GREAT!
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thx! :D
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on August 06, 2014
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on August 06, 2014
I love the new chapter, just one thing. Coraline gets an A most of the time in science, and Cs or Bs in other things.
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oh ok! Thanks! good to know :) ill fix that ;)
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on August 03, 2014
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on August 03, 2014
coool! update more often plzzzzz
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i knooow sowwy. i had problems with the new qfeast rule and cldnt figure out what was wrong. its all good now though :)
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on August 03, 2014
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on August 03, 2014
@BlizzardPony @CrystalDiamond2323 @GymnasticsBubbleZo @ILoveMusic @piepantslol @The_Great_And_Powerful_Trixie @TheRilingRavenclaw New chapter! FINALLY!
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on August 03, 2014
Hahahahahahaha Mr. P! Mr. Pee!!! Ahahahhahahahaha
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lol that was unintentional
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no its fine :D
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on July 17, 2014
Sorry, i just had to point that out :D
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on July 17, 2014
HAHA Mikus hair :D your a great writer!
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thanks! :P
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on July 16, 2014
@BlizzardPony @CrystalWings @GymnasticsBubbleZo @ILoveMusic @TheRilingRavenclaw Update!
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on July 16, 2014
OMG 100 reads! :-O yay! :D
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on July 12, 2014
@BlizzardPony @CrystalWings @GymnasticsBubbleZo @ILoveMusic @TheRilingRavenclaw two new chapters! :D
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on July 12, 2014
new chapteeeeer :3
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on July 02, 2014
WARRIORS EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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XD
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:D AHAHAHA I JUST DIED OF LAUGHTER
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on June 29, 2014
no like smiley face
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on June 29, 2014
Wut? I luv teh kittehz (only finished book 3 in first series *butthurt*)
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on June 29, 2014
Love it
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thx
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on June 28, 2014
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on June 28, 2014
I added a chapter!
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on June 28, 2014
Nice!
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thank you! it means a lot
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