Summer Camp Story

Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

published on November 04, 2016not completed

Cabin Screams

Stricken, Maria ran across the parking lot after Amy, then stopped and flopped her arms down at her sides. She should probably wait until Amy cools down before she tries to apologise. Behind her Jackie sighed.
"Talk about lousy timing"
"I'm sorry you guys" Maria turned and faced the group. "I should have just kept my mouth shut"
"Me too" Electra lowered her head.
"Me three" Trinty folds her arms as she frowns.
"You didn't say anything at all" Maria reminded Trinty.
"But I was about to!" Yamilette raised her hand.
"Me four. Only my love of the dramatic pause stopped me in time"
"Got to love the dramatic pause" Maria looked over her shoulder to Amy who was a speck in the distance. "We will have to make it up to her. We can't start off the summer like this"
"If she wants top bunk, let her have one?" Trinty ventured.
"Everyone's mood can be changed with a little sugar!" Electra announced her smile brightening her features. "My mum sent two dozen of her killer chocolate chip and strawberry cupcakes" Yamilette groaned but this time with delight.
"Your mum is a goddess!" Jackie smiled like the other girls but she knew she couldn't have as many as the other girls. She wasn't feeling her best before she came and she knew it was down to her sugar intake before so she had to watch what she was eating.
"What about Wave?" Trinty asked. "Do you think Amy will tell her what we said?"
"I hope not" Maria shook her head. She didn't want to imagine a summer feuding with Amy and Wave. The crowds were beginning to thin as the campers headed for their bunks.
"Guys, we have to check in with our counsellor" Sapphire said reaching for the handle on her suitcase.
"She's at the bunk, we will lead the way" Electra announced gesturing for everyone to follow her. "We are up the hill this year"
"I hope we aren't in trouble with Blaze" Trinty mumbled. "That's our counsellors name"
"About Blaze" Jackie smoothed her hair. "She's a little...never mind, it might just be me"
"It's not just you" Yamilette said. "In a word? She's freaky"
"Freaky? How?" Sapphire asked.
"She's intense, or should I say, tense?" Yamilette shrugs
"Tense works for me" Electra nods.
"Maybe it's because she's new?" Victoria suggests.
"Yeah, she's new, she must be from somewhere with not a lot of sun because she's as white as a ghost. Well, she's pale purple but still!" Yamilette said.
"Ghostly" Trinty said.
"Maybe she is a ghost!" Sapphire cackled.
"Speaking of ghosts and changing the subject, Sapphire has a spooky ghost story to tell" Maria announced with a smile. She knew Sapphire was dying to tell it.
"Ohhh! Very spooky?" Trinty hums.
"Not just spooky, horrifying! And it's not just a story either, it's true! I'll tell it tonight to scare the wits out of everyone!"
"No way!" Yamilette cried. "I'm still having nightmares from last years spooky stories!"
"Me too" Trinty's lower lip quivered.
"It's fun to be scared" Electra insisted. "And and I watch horror movies all the time!" That made Jackie smile.
"Then tonight is your lucky night" Sapphire promised as she winked at Yamilette and Trinty. "I'll tell it when you two are asleep then" Yamilette pulled a face.
"Maybe I'll weaken and and listen to every gory detail you have to offer" Maria was no longer listening and was focused in the hill.
"I wish we didn't have to face Amy again so soon"
"Well, the cookout is in under a hour" Jackie pointed out. "We can try to make up there?" Everyone nods in agreement as Sapphire slaps a bug on her arm.
"Demon bug! Be gone!"
"Is Sonic here yet?" Jackie asked Yamilette.
"No, not yet" She answered. "And Lilli isn't here yet either. I think they're coming in together"
"Red has yet to show too" Jackie said. Silence.
"Hey, what if Amy told Blaze on us?" Trinty said not caring she was making it obvious she was worried.
"This summer is already a bummer" Electra sighs.
"Come on guys!" Sapphire popped up out of no where. "Let's hit reset! Let's promise one another that this will be the best summer yet. We have a great bunk and we can still have lots of fun right?" She put her hand out. "Who's with me?" Remembering their cheer for the sports events the girls giggle and put their hands on hers.
"Goooo GREEN LAKE CAMP!" They throw their arms up in the air with a fit of giggles. Then a blood curdling scream echoed around them.
"What was that?" Victoria asked. A second scream. It was coming from their cabin.
"Come on guys!" Maria shouted. She broke into a run, Sapphire, not being able to run with her suitcase set it down and jetted to catch up. Soon everyone was running forward as a third screamed blasted from the top of the hill.
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Oooh shit's got real! Electra is probably dead by now :3
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on January 24, 2018
DAAAAAAAMMNNNN SHITS GETTING REAL
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yeyeyeyeyeyeyyeyeye
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:D Righttttttttt on it XD
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on December 26, 2017
Now theres a funny little thing called conversatio s *wink* (NOT HINTING ANYTHING XD)
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on December 26, 2017
OHHH THIS IS WHAT I CALL A GOOD STORY!!!
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Why a thank you XD
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on November 12, 2017
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on November 12, 2017
Love it!!!
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on November 01, 2017
It has been so long since I last read thus story. Crap it's gotten good!
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You haven't seen most of it yet :P
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Thank you x3
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on August 15, 2017
I am excited to read the rest of it
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on August 15, 2017
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on August 15, 2017
Nice chapter! :3
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Thank you! :3
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No problem X3
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on August 05, 2017
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on August 04, 2017
Damn... is it weird that I legit felt that offence irl?
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Sorry! D:
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Im sorry ^.^U
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on August 03, 2017
It's cool, it just means it was very well applied :)
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on August 03, 2017
I didn't mean it! Its just for the story I swear! D:
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
Oohh that is creepy
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on July 28, 2017
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@The_Half_Glaceon_Girl , @Megpoid_GUMI, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart

Sorry this took so long! New chapter! :P
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woah I forgot this was a thing xD
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Very much so XD
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on August 16, 2017
Agh rip.. I'm glad it's over for you now xD less stress..
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on August 16, 2017
They killed me :c I've actually got my results in 3 weeks, but for now I'm focusing on qfeast :3
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on August 15, 2017
That's fine x3 Exams are important, so it's best to focus on them at the time uwu
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on August 15, 2017
Aha, yea, sorry it took so long, I had exams :3
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on August 12, 2017
It's okay no worries I'm at the end of the chapter! XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Also if I got your name wrong I'm really sorry XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Maria: Sapphiireee!! Hurry up and continue!! I wanna see lilgro hap--
Lili: Maria! No, y-you dont. He dont like me anyway. So it wont happen... lilgro wont happen...
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It couldddddddddd
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Only time will tell :P
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on July 24, 2017
(*Hugs back* IMSORRYSOMUCHHASHAPPENEDSINCEIVEBEENOFFHEREANDHADTOTAKEABREAK)
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on July 24, 2017
Lili: *blushes hard* b-But amy..
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on July 24, 2017
(HOLY SHIT YOUR ALIIIVEEE!!!! *HUGS TIGHT*)
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on July 23, 2017
SAPPHY WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG UNTIL AN UPDATE :((
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IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS EXSISTED XD I'll get another one out soon I promise
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on July 08, 2017
Can't wait for the next chapter ?
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on March 30, 2017
Can Trinity go hug Amy? She needs a hug and then maybe the girls can all get along.
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The thing I shall I e actually made this fall out so it can lead to something really big >:3 so I'm making it go on for a little longer eheheh
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on February 14, 2017
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on February 14, 2017
I feel a bit bad for Amy...
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on February 12, 2017
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on February 12, 2017
Just a friendly reminder to update this story soon. Much appriciation if you do.
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Of course, I've took quite a long break this story is actually the first on my list to update :)
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on February 05, 2017
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on February 05, 2017
What did Electra roll her eyes at me for? Did I make an anime pun?
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But in reality, most likely XD
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on January 26, 2017
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on January 26, 2017
Amy thinks it's because Electra was making fun of her to you :3
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on January 24, 2017
Please update soon Sapphire!
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Will do :)
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on January 09, 2017
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on January 08, 2017
WHY HASNT SOMEONE COME TO AMY AND HUG HER
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Cuz everyone thinks she's a butt
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Yes, but no one notices it :)
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on January 09, 2017
BUT SHES OBVIOUSLY DEPRESSED.
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on January 08, 2017
Also really great*claps*???
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on January 07, 2017
Luckily I can catch up in very little time. I have very mixed feelings about Amy, sometimes nice sometimes mean...
But thank you Amy for letting Trinity stay in your tent
The woods are scawy :3
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on January 07, 2017
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on January 07, 2017
Awww poor Amy love the chapter by the way X3
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Thank you :3
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No problem X3
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on January 07, 2017
I really hope lilgro happens..
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on January 06, 2017
You need to update this soon.*poke*
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Have way through the next chap :3 it's just a case of finding time :D
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on January 06, 2017
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on January 06, 2017
What's gonna happen? XD
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dUN DUN DUNNNNNN XD
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on December 19, 2016
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on December 19, 2016
He might be~
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on December 19, 2016
Cropsy coming?
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on December 19, 2016
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on December 19, 2016
NOT SENT HOME PLEASE NO! DX
(Also why you no agree to a Vocaloid friend for Jackie :( )
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Oh yeahhhhh forgot about that XD aha, idk if there's anymore room for another characture, maybe a mention though?
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on December 11, 2016
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly :P
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Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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on November 30, 2016
I see her doing that, actually...
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on November 29, 2016
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on November 29, 2016
The new chapter is good! :D
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Thanks! X3
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No problem X3
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on November 29, 2016
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on November 29, 2016
I hope lili and negro get together...

Also

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER 4 MY STORY?! IVE WAITED AGES!! *growls*
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I'm sorry, it's getting really confusing ^.^U
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I'm just confused on what's going on in that story, like what I have to write, when comes next, when to end the chapter, you know??
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on November 28, 2016
Wym its getting confusing?
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