Summer Camp Story

Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

published on November 04, 2016not completed

The story of Cropsy Part 2

Crouched behind some bushes, Domanic elbowed Surge as they spied on the Qfeast camp girls. Domanic was disgusted.
"Dude!" He whispered. "That is totally the wrong story! Where did she hear that? Cropsy didn't escape from an insane asylum."
"Shup up." Surge whispered back. "If they hear us, they'll freak out." Domanic's eyes glinted in the moonlight.
"That's a good thing, isn't it? Let's scare them!" Surge hesitated. Domanic elbowed him again.
"Come on, Sur, just for fun. Just a little bit. Then we'll let them know it's just us."
"I don't know." Surge said.
"We could make it up to them with icecream?" Domanic insisted. Surge quirked a smirk at him.
"Okay, let's scare them. Let's pretend I'm Cropsy." He opened his mouth to call out to the girls in a spooky voice.
"Wait! Let's go get the chainsaw out of the truck." Domanic suggested. "We can use it as a prop!"
"The chainsaw?"
"They'll love it." Domanic promised. "Trust me." And so the two crept down the road towards Domanic's truck.

"Okay, we left off with Randy hearing giggling behind him." Sapphire reminded her rapt audience. "Randy jumped backwards but fell over, knocking the breath out of him. The giggling grew louder and louder. Thin bony fingers wrapped around his neck and squeezed. Randy kicked and screamed but it was no use. Randy passed out. When he woke up, he discovered he was handcuffed to a brick wall. He heared a jiggling noise, followed by heavy footsteps. Heavy leather boots stomped down the stairs. Then legs. Then thin bony fingers carrying a set of keys. Then behold the face of Cropsy. He was thin, pale and wore an eyepatch. Cropsy reached into the shadows and pulled out an axe. Randy began to struggle. Cropsy laughed his crazy laugh and leaned towards him. The blade was pressed against Randy's throat. Suddenly, Randy slipped his hand out of the cuff and slammed it into Crospy's face! Cropsy howled and attempted to hack at Randy but Randy deflected the blade. Before he realised what he was doing, he cut off Cropsy's arm! Cropsy collapsed in a pool of blood and he lay as still as death. Shaking, knowing he had just escaped the clutches of a madman yet knowing he had taken a life, Randy grabbed the keys and unlocked his other wrist. Cropsy didn't move. He dropped the keys and they landed on the floor with a clank. Cropsy jerked lunging for Randy's ankle! Randy grabbed the axe and ran hearing Cropsy grunting, knowing he was standing up. He got to the first floor of the abandoned shack and saw...his counsellor's head! The rest of his bunk mates were hanging off of old hooks, smiling, lifeless. Randy screamed and ran out of the shack into the thick fog once more. There was a boat on the lake's edge. Without hesitation, Randy jumped in and decided to use the axe as a paddle. But to his horror he wasn't holding the axe...but Cropsy's arm! He dropped the arm hearing only grunts and screams from behind him. Cropsy's voice boomed from across the lake.
"I WANT MY ARM!" Cropsy was right behind Randy now, who was frozen in fear. WHAM! Cropsy cut off Randy's arm! Randy was never heard from or seen again. Every six years, it happens again, Cropsy hunts down a camper and cuts off their arm! This is the sixth year, my friends. Cropsy is coming..."
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Oooh shit's got real! Electra is probably dead by now :3
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on January 24, 2018
DAAAAAAAMMNNNN SHITS GETTING REAL
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yeyeyeyeyeyeyyeyeye
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:D Righttttttttt on it XD
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on December 26, 2017
Now theres a funny little thing called conversatio s *wink* (NOT HINTING ANYTHING XD)
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on December 26, 2017
OHHH THIS IS WHAT I CALL A GOOD STORY!!!
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Why a thank you XD
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on November 12, 2017
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on November 12, 2017
Love it!!!
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on November 01, 2017
It has been so long since I last read thus story. Crap it's gotten good!
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You haven't seen most of it yet :P
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Thank you x3
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on August 15, 2017
I am excited to read the rest of it
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on August 15, 2017
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on August 15, 2017
Nice chapter! :3
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Thank you! :3
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No problem X3
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on August 05, 2017
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on August 04, 2017
Damn... is it weird that I legit felt that offence irl?
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Sorry! D:
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Im sorry ^.^U
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on August 03, 2017
It's cool, it just means it was very well applied :)
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on August 03, 2017
I didn't mean it! Its just for the story I swear! D:
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
Oohh that is creepy
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on July 28, 2017
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@The_Half_Glaceon_Girl , @Megpoid_GUMI, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart

Sorry this took so long! New chapter! :P
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woah I forgot this was a thing xD
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Very much so XD
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on August 16, 2017
Agh rip.. I'm glad it's over for you now xD less stress..
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on August 16, 2017
They killed me :c I've actually got my results in 3 weeks, but for now I'm focusing on qfeast :3
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on August 15, 2017
That's fine x3 Exams are important, so it's best to focus on them at the time uwu
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on August 15, 2017
Aha, yea, sorry it took so long, I had exams :3
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on August 12, 2017
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on August 12, 2017
It's okay no worries I'm at the end of the chapter! XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Also if I got your name wrong I'm really sorry XD
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on July 28, 2017
Maria: Sapphiireee!! Hurry up and continue!! I wanna see lilgro hap--
Lili: Maria! No, y-you dont. He dont like me anyway. So it wont happen... lilgro wont happen...
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It couldddddddddd
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Only time will tell :P
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on July 24, 2017
(*Hugs back* IMSORRYSOMUCHHASHAPPENEDSINCEIVEBEENOFFHEREANDHADTOTAKEABREAK)
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on July 24, 2017
Lili: *blushes hard* b-But amy..
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on July 24, 2017
(HOLY SHIT YOUR ALIIIVEEE!!!! *HUGS TIGHT*)
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on July 23, 2017
SAPPHY WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG UNTIL AN UPDATE :((
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IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS EXSISTED XD I'll get another one out soon I promise
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on July 08, 2017
Can't wait for the next chapter ?
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on March 30, 2017
Can Trinity go hug Amy? She needs a hug and then maybe the girls can all get along.
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The thing I shall I e actually made this fall out so it can lead to something really big >:3 so I'm making it go on for a little longer eheheh
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on February 14, 2017
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on February 14, 2017
I feel a bit bad for Amy...
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on February 12, 2017
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on February 12, 2017
Just a friendly reminder to update this story soon. Much appriciation if you do.
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Of course, I've took quite a long break this story is actually the first on my list to update :)
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on February 05, 2017
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on February 05, 2017
What did Electra roll her eyes at me for? Did I make an anime pun?
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But in reality, most likely XD
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on January 26, 2017
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on January 26, 2017
Amy thinks it's because Electra was making fun of her to you :3
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on January 24, 2017
Please update soon Sapphire!
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Will do :)
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on January 09, 2017
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on January 08, 2017
WHY HASNT SOMEONE COME TO AMY AND HUG HER
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Cuz everyone thinks she's a butt
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Yes, but no one notices it :)
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on January 09, 2017
BUT SHES OBVIOUSLY DEPRESSED.
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on January 08, 2017
Also really great*claps*???
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on January 07, 2017
Luckily I can catch up in very little time. I have very mixed feelings about Amy, sometimes nice sometimes mean...
But thank you Amy for letting Trinity stay in your tent
The woods are scawy :3
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on January 07, 2017
Awww poor Amy love the chapter by the way X3
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Thank you :3
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No problem X3
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on January 07, 2017
I really hope lilgro happens..
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on January 06, 2017
You need to update this soon.*poke*
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Have way through the next chap :3 it's just a case of finding time :D
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on January 06, 2017
What's gonna happen? XD
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dUN DUN DUNNNNNN XD
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on December 19, 2016
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on December 19, 2016
He might be~
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on December 19, 2016
Cropsy coming?
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on December 19, 2016
NOT SENT HOME PLEASE NO! DX
(Also why you no agree to a Vocaloid friend for Jackie :( )
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Oh yeahhhhh forgot about that XD aha, idk if there's anymore room for another characture, maybe a mention though?
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on December 11, 2016
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly :P
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Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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on November 30, 2016
I see her doing that, actually...
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on November 29, 2016
The new chapter is good! :D
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Thanks! X3
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No problem X3
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on November 29, 2016
I hope lili and negro get together...

Also

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER 4 MY STORY?! IVE WAITED AGES!! *growls*
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I'm sorry, it's getting really confusing ^.^U
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I'm just confused on what's going on in that story, like what I have to write, when comes next, when to end the chapter, you know??
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on November 28, 2016
Wym its getting confusing?
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