Summer Camp Story

Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

published on November 04, 2016not completed

The story of Cropsy Part 1

"Many years ago, a boy's bunk was camping in the forest by Qfeast Lake. They were all settled in, listening to the radio, when a news bulletin came on. An inmate had just escaped from the near by asylum for the Criminally Insane. His name was Cropsy. Cropsy had been locked up for six years before, and was so violent and crazy that he had to be kept in a straitjacket in a padded room, all by himself. They slid his meals through a little slot in the door while the guard trained a gun on him.
"Everyone must clear the area at once!" the radio annoucer continued. "Until Cropsy is apprehended, anyone in the forest is in terrible danger!" So the boys broke camp as fast as they could. They rolled up their sleeping bags and stuffed them in their backpacks. After their counsellor put out their fire and passed out the flashlights, he told them that they would head out of the woods and make for the highway, where they would flag someone down. If they couldn't get someone they'd notify someone that they were there. But as they left their campsite a strange fog rolled in off the lake. It was so thick that the boys couldn't see each other. They could only hear their own voices. This one guy named Randy kept hearing someone calling his name, and he kept following the voice. He thought he recognised it. He saw a figure in front of him, but as soon as he laid eyes on it. It was gone. He called out but there was nothing but a faint voice.
"Randyyyyy, come to me." He was sure it was his counsellor, but he couldn't tell what direction it was coming from. He walked straight ahead and crashed it something hard! It was only a tree trunk. He backed away, tripping over something on the ground. He dropped to his knees and felt it. It was rough and spindly, and it must have been a tree root.
"Hello?" He called out again.
"Randyyyyy, come to meeee" He got to his feet.
"Where are you?"
"Close, very closeeee." A twig snapped right behind him. Then a strange high pitched giggling sounded in his right ear, and Randy suddenly knew that the man behind him wasn't his friendly counsellor. It was Cropsy!

"Nope." Yamilette blurted out. "Nopenopenopenoope."
"Alright, time out. Enough." Blaze gestured to Sapphire. "We should stop." Sapphire pouted and switched off her torch. Amy rolled her eyes but kept her mouth shut. She wanted to hear the end and from the looks of everyone else, they did too.
"Cropsy! Cropsy! Cropsy!" Maria and Electra chanted, laughing at their scratchy voices.
"Tell it!" Red squawked. Yamilette giggled.
"Blaze, it's fine. For the good of the bunk, i'll endure this terrorfying tale!" She cried making the other girls laugh. Amy sighed and shared a look with Wave who rolled her eyes. Rouge came behind Blaze and whispered something to her. Blaze stood.
"I'm going to the tents with Rouge, something we have to plan for the scavenger hunt tomorrow." Sapphire waited until Blaze and Rouge walked away before switching on her flashlight again.
"Where were we..."
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Oooh shit's got real! Electra is probably dead by now :3
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on January 24, 2018
DAAAAAAAMMNNNN SHITS GETTING REAL
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yeyeyeyeyeyeyyeyeye
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:D Righttttttttt on it XD
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on December 26, 2017
Now theres a funny little thing called conversatio s *wink* (NOT HINTING ANYTHING XD)
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on December 26, 2017
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on December 26, 2017
OHHH THIS IS WHAT I CALL A GOOD STORY!!!
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Why a thank you XD
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on November 12, 2017
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on November 12, 2017
Love it!!!
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on November 01, 2017
It has been so long since I last read thus story. Crap it's gotten good!
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You haven't seen most of it yet :P
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Thank you x3
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on August 15, 2017
I am excited to read the rest of it
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on August 15, 2017
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on August 15, 2017
Nice chapter! :3
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Thank you! :3
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No problem X3
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on August 05, 2017
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on August 04, 2017
Damn... is it weird that I legit felt that offence irl?
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Sorry! D:
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Im sorry ^.^U
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on August 03, 2017
It's cool, it just means it was very well applied :)
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on August 03, 2017
I didn't mean it! Its just for the story I swear! D:
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
Oohh that is creepy
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on July 28, 2017
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@The_Half_Glaceon_Girl , @Megpoid_GUMI, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart

Sorry this took so long! New chapter! :P
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woah I forgot this was a thing xD
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Very much so XD
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on August 16, 2017
Agh rip.. I'm glad it's over for you now xD less stress..
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on August 16, 2017
They killed me :c I've actually got my results in 3 weeks, but for now I'm focusing on qfeast :3
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on August 15, 2017
That's fine x3 Exams are important, so it's best to focus on them at the time uwu
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on August 15, 2017
Aha, yea, sorry it took so long, I had exams :3
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on August 12, 2017
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on August 12, 2017
It's okay no worries I'm at the end of the chapter! XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Also if I got your name wrong I'm really sorry XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Maria: Sapphiireee!! Hurry up and continue!! I wanna see lilgro hap--
Lili: Maria! No, y-you dont. He dont like me anyway. So it wont happen... lilgro wont happen...
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It couldddddddddd
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Only time will tell :P
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on July 24, 2017
(*Hugs back* IMSORRYSOMUCHHASHAPPENEDSINCEIVEBEENOFFHEREANDHADTOTAKEABREAK)
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on July 24, 2017
Lili: *blushes hard* b-But amy..
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on July 24, 2017
(HOLY SHIT YOUR ALIIIVEEE!!!! *HUGS TIGHT*)
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on July 24, 2017
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on July 23, 2017
SAPPHY WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG UNTIL AN UPDATE :((
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IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS EXSISTED XD I'll get another one out soon I promise
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on July 08, 2017
Can't wait for the next chapter ?
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on March 30, 2017
Can Trinity go hug Amy? She needs a hug and then maybe the girls can all get along.
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The thing I shall I e actually made this fall out so it can lead to something really big >:3 so I'm making it go on for a little longer eheheh
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on February 14, 2017
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on February 14, 2017
I feel a bit bad for Amy...
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on February 12, 2017
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on February 12, 2017
Just a friendly reminder to update this story soon. Much appriciation if you do.
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Of course, I've took quite a long break this story is actually the first on my list to update :)
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on February 05, 2017
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on February 05, 2017
What did Electra roll her eyes at me for? Did I make an anime pun?
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But in reality, most likely XD
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on January 26, 2017
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on January 26, 2017
Amy thinks it's because Electra was making fun of her to you :3
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on January 24, 2017
Please update soon Sapphire!
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Will do :)
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on January 09, 2017
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on January 08, 2017
WHY HASNT SOMEONE COME TO AMY AND HUG HER
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Cuz everyone thinks she's a butt
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Yes, but no one notices it :)
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on January 09, 2017
BUT SHES OBVIOUSLY DEPRESSED.
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on January 08, 2017
Also really great*claps*???
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on January 07, 2017
Luckily I can catch up in very little time. I have very mixed feelings about Amy, sometimes nice sometimes mean...
But thank you Amy for letting Trinity stay in your tent
The woods are scawy :3
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on January 07, 2017
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on January 07, 2017
Awww poor Amy love the chapter by the way X3
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Thank you :3
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No problem X3
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on January 07, 2017
I really hope lilgro happens..
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on January 06, 2017
You need to update this soon.*poke*
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Have way through the next chap :3 it's just a case of finding time :D
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on January 06, 2017
What's gonna happen? XD
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dUN DUN DUNNNNNN XD
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on December 19, 2016
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on December 19, 2016
He might be~
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on December 19, 2016
Cropsy coming?
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on December 19, 2016
NOT SENT HOME PLEASE NO! DX
(Also why you no agree to a Vocaloid friend for Jackie :( )
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Oh yeahhhhh forgot about that XD aha, idk if there's anymore room for another characture, maybe a mention though?
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on December 11, 2016
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly :P
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Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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on November 30, 2016
I see her doing that, actually...
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on November 29, 2016
The new chapter is good! :D
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Thanks! X3
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No problem X3
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on November 29, 2016
I hope lili and negro get together...

Also

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER 4 MY STORY?! IVE WAITED AGES!! *growls*
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I'm sorry, it's getting really confusing ^.^U
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I'm just confused on what's going on in that story, like what I have to write, when comes next, when to end the chapter, you know??
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on November 28, 2016
Wym its getting confusing?
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