Alice in Wonderland?

Alice in Wonderland?

Alice goes mad in the real world, and ends up going to Wonderland once more, only to realize that Wonderland is anything but full of magic

published on December 29, 2015not completed

Cheshire Cat and Hell?

"Hm well look at whom we have here." A voiced purred. I slowly opened my eyes and gasped. A cat hovered above of me...but it didn't look like a cat. It was black with a blue design, it was as skinny as a cat that hasn't eaten in about three weeks. Its ribs showed like a new tattoo, but its fur was puffy....in some places. In other places the fur was missing. It's tail was long and curled and swished around many times. It's eye was a wide and disgusting yellow with a reddish tint with its pupils narrowed in the tiniest of slits as for its other eye, long gone.
One of its ears were ripped and hanging down, clinging for dear life by a small piece of skin. But the most disturbing thing about it was its smile. Its smile reached its ears showing its sharp bloody teeth. I blinked a few rimes, making it smile more and its eyes narrow more..if that were even possible.
We stayed like that for a few minutes,until it finally blinked. "You must be...terrified." It purred again as it brought it's boney paw to my cheek. Its claws were sharp enough to cut through anything. I blinked and sat up. I scooched away from him and looked around. He looked at me with his strangely wide eyes and chuckled.
I looked back at him and tilted my head. "Where am I?" I asked and widened my eyes at the sound of my voice. It sounded so strange. It chuckled again and glided over to me. It spun upside down and blinked. "Why...you my dear..are in what's left of Wonderland." It said, I looked at its side. A large scratch laid on its side, blood dripped on the ground.
"You are hurt." I said, it's eyes darted to its side than back to me. "Why yes, I am." It purred. I immediately ripped a part of my dress and snatched it out of the air. He narrowed his eyes as I placed him on my lap and wrapped up his cut. I didn't even bother asking what happened, nor did I want to know about the beast that did this. A deep rumbling noise was heard from the bottom of his throat as I gently stroked him.
Maybe this, Wonderland, wasn't that bad...I mean..I found a nice cat, and maybe a new friend.
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Hm so I was reading this and then I thought to myself you should update this oh and I'm going to fix some grammatical errors
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And are you Drocell now? Lololol
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XD YES
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on November 03, 2016
And Drocell is cute so there is no downside XD
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
I'm saying fück cause I don't wanna be Drocell
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on November 03, 2016
Nope I made it on time
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on November 03, 2016
Did you miss the bus mate?
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on November 03, 2016
FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
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on November 03, 2016
Sucks you're Drocell now
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on November 03, 2016
No I just say that sometimes
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
Danke
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
I <3 it!!!!! XD
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Heheh yay! X3
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on March 18, 2016
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on March 18, 2016
Yo bitch you should update this or I will slap you at school
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Yay ^.^
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on March 03, 2016
Oh my...alright I'll update it
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on March 03, 2016
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on March 03, 2016
KEEP GOING!!! It's AMAZING!!
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Aw thanks! alright! X3
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on January 22, 2016
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on January 22, 2016
I love this!! Please continue!
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I messed up XD I tried fixing the title and it posted before I finished it
Its done now XDXDXD
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on January 09, 2016
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on January 09, 2016
Nice new chapter! It's freaking amazing! Keep goin'!
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Aw thanks! X3
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You're welcome!
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
This story is.....Fuckking awesome!Well technically its just currently a chapter....But its still great :D
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Aw thanks Ciel!
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*squints* The line between those is blurry...
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on December 30, 2015
D: D: D: D: D: D:
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on December 30, 2015
He didn't hate him he just thought he was a brat with anger issues
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on December 30, 2015
(XD meant down point.)
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on December 30, 2015
Johnathon was a good llama.....who hated Alois. His only doenpoint.
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
Johnathon never liked you though
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on December 30, 2015
May Johnathon rest in pieces...I MEAN PEACE
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on December 30, 2015
Alois do you have any words to say about Johnathon
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on December 30, 2015
RIP, Johnathon. *waves at his grave with a handkerchief*
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on December 30, 2015
His name was Johnathon and he will be missed dearly
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on December 30, 2015
XD poor llama
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on December 30, 2015
@AlliceTeea
Poor llama....
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on December 30, 2015
Don't laugh llama death is a very serious matter!!!!
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on December 30, 2015
Pffft HAHAHA
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on December 30, 2015
It would have gotten six out of five but a llama got hit by a car
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on December 30, 2015
XD That works X3
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on December 30, 2015
It gets five out of five llamas
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on December 30, 2015
Of cores! But is it really that good?
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on December 30, 2015
You know Alice in Wonderland is one of my many obsessions
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
Can you make another chapter? This is really good, and you should make more.
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Aw thank you!!
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on December 30, 2015
Alright :D
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on December 30, 2015
You're welcome. But I'm serious, though. You should continue it.
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
ITS FUKN BEAUTIFUL!
I want moar! =0
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I love it.xd
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My first chapter is doooone! ^_^
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on December 29, 2015
Alright have fun! X3
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on December 29, 2015
XD I would actually do that, too.
I'm going to work on mine. Soooo =/
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on December 29, 2015
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on December 29, 2015
The part she asks 20 questions. X3
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on December 29, 2015
X3 what's the best part so far?
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on December 29, 2015
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on December 29, 2015
Aw really? X3
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