Alice in Wonderland?

Alice in Wonderland?

Alice goes mad in the real world, and ends up going to Wonderland once more, only to realize that Wonderland is anything but full of magic

published on December 29, 2015not completed

Wonderland, or Helland?

I opened my eyes and darted them around. I sat up and looked around again. I tilted my head, I was in a small room. I stood up and stared at all the doors. Cracked, broken, rotting, and begging to be burned. I walked up to a big black door that seemed to have been oak at one point, now just rotting. I looked at the knob, it was rotting, no way it would open. I walked to the next door, a mahogany door with dents and cracks. The knob seemed fine, I placed my hand on the knob and watched as it clattered to the ground. I walked around the room, trying every door, only for the knobs to fall off or the door to be locked. I blinked as I slowly looked at a black, shredded, and moth eaten certain. I strutted over to it, I grabbed it, my long fingernails tearing into the delicate cloth. I ripped it back, my dress flowing with the movement of the black certain. I looked at the blank wall, then darted my eyes to the ground. A small broken door with a rusted lock.
I turned around to look at the small table that sat in the center of the small circle room. I strutted over to the table, looked up and tilted my head. The rabbit hole mocked me from miles down. I looked back down at the table, a small glass bottle laid there, filled with a deep red liquid, too thick to be wine of any sort. I picked it up and held it close to my sunken eyes. Drink me. I blinked and opened the bottle, the smell of blood filled the tight room.
I slowly took a small sip, it was real blood. I gently set the glass down and rubbed my tongue over my teeth, licking the blood off of them. I felt a strange pain fill my body, almost making me hold my stomach. It almost felt like the insides of me were being twisted. I looked around as everything seemed to grow, as I shrunk. I looked at my now mice small hands and clenched them. I went back to the small door, my small feet making a tiny clacking sound against the broken tile. I looked up at the now big door, I looked back at the lock and peered through it.
An inky black color met my eyes as I looked though. A small sound reached my ears, making me turn around. Something was by the table. I walked over to it and looked down. A cake. A black cake that looks like it has been waiting to be eaten for ages. The small box was dented, bent, the 'Eat me' was scratched and faded. I opened it up and picked a small piece of the cake, it smelt like death. I looked up to look at the rabbit hole, only for a smile to grasp my lips as I saw a key.
I ate the cake, not minding it's moldy, deathly taste that wanted me to cut out my tongue. Once the distasteful food ran down my throat and rested in my stomach, the room seemed to grow smaller. I looked around as I grew. Growing food and shrinking liquid...interesting. I plucked the rusted key of the tables dusty grasp. I picked up the cake and drink and placed them in my pocket as I walked over to the now tiny door. I placed the key in its rightful place and unlocked the door. It creaked open, filling the room with it's cries of agony. Once it opened all the way, I pulled out the blood and took a small sip, taking away the moldy taste, masking it with a silver taste. I stood blankly as the door, once again, towered over me.
I stood at the opening of the blackness of the opened door. Without even thinking about what could be on the other side, I walked through. The blackness covered me like a blanket, wrapping me up like a mother swaddles a baby. I closed my eyes as the darkness seemed to control my body, my mind, taking me over. I stopped walking and opened my eyes. The slight brightness of the new world made me squint my eyes ever so slightly. I looked around, the stairs I am supposed to walk down are missing some steps, old and rotting, a rat ran across one of the stairs. But something was off about it...it was mechanical. A stump was left of a tree as I started walking down. A noise escaped my throat as one of the steps fell from underneath me, making me fall down with it.
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Hm so I was reading this and then I thought to myself you should update this oh and I'm going to fix some grammatical errors
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And are you Drocell now? Lololol
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XD YES
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on November 03, 2016
And Drocell is cute so there is no downside XD
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
I'm saying fück cause I don't wanna be Drocell
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on November 03, 2016
Nope I made it on time
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on November 03, 2016
Did you miss the bus mate?
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on November 03, 2016
FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
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on November 03, 2016
Sucks you're Drocell now
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on November 03, 2016
No I just say that sometimes
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
Danke
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
I <3 it!!!!! XD
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Heheh yay! X3
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on March 18, 2016
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on March 18, 2016
Yo bitch you should update this or I will slap you at school
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Yay ^.^
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on March 03, 2016
Oh my...alright I'll update it
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on March 03, 2016
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on March 03, 2016
KEEP GOING!!! It's AMAZING!!
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Aw thanks! alright! X3
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on January 22, 2016
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on January 22, 2016
I love this!! Please continue!
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I messed up XD I tried fixing the title and it posted before I finished it
Its done now XDXDXD
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on January 09, 2016
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on January 09, 2016
Nice new chapter! It's freaking amazing! Keep goin'!
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Aw thanks! X3
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You're welcome!
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
This story is.....Fuckking awesome!Well technically its just currently a chapter....But its still great :D
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Aw thanks Ciel!
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*squints* The line between those is blurry...
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on December 30, 2015
D: D: D: D: D: D:
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on December 30, 2015
He didn't hate him he just thought he was a brat with anger issues
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on December 30, 2015
(XD meant down point.)
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on December 30, 2015
Johnathon was a good llama.....who hated Alois. His only doenpoint.
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
Johnathon never liked you though
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on December 30, 2015
May Johnathon rest in pieces...I MEAN PEACE
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on December 30, 2015
Alois do you have any words to say about Johnathon
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on December 30, 2015
RIP, Johnathon. *waves at his grave with a handkerchief*
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on December 30, 2015
His name was Johnathon and he will be missed dearly
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on December 30, 2015
XD poor llama
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on December 30, 2015
@AlliceTeea
Poor llama....
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on December 30, 2015
Don't laugh llama death is a very serious matter!!!!
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on December 30, 2015
Pffft HAHAHA
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on December 30, 2015
It would have gotten six out of five but a llama got hit by a car
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on December 30, 2015
XD That works X3
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on December 30, 2015
It gets five out of five llamas
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on December 30, 2015
Of cores! But is it really that good?
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on December 30, 2015
You know Alice in Wonderland is one of my many obsessions
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
Can you make another chapter? This is really good, and you should make more.
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Aw thank you!!
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on December 30, 2015
Alright :D
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on December 30, 2015
You're welcome. But I'm serious, though. You should continue it.
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
ITS FUKN BEAUTIFUL!
I want moar! =0
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I love it.xd
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My first chapter is doooone! ^_^
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on December 29, 2015
Alright have fun! X3
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on December 29, 2015
XD I would actually do that, too.
I'm going to work on mine. Soooo =/
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on December 29, 2015
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on December 29, 2015
The part she asks 20 questions. X3
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on December 29, 2015
X3 what's the best part so far?
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on December 29, 2015
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on December 29, 2015
Aw really? X3
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