No this is bad

No this is bad

Northern and Southern Narnia were basically harmless. They hardly ever got into a fight, and if they did, it was nothing huge. There was only one war between them, but it was never spoken of. Other than that, they never had to fight in a war with another country, there was never a need. There is a need now.

published on January 28, 2017not completed

Chapter Four

It's been five months, and Prussia refused to go home until he was positive Germany didn't suspect him. He may have been outgoing and would do the most stupid things, but he knew that if he stepped foot in that house and his brother knew it was him who stole the folders, he would be shot on spot. Neither the Narnians, nor the queen and king minded. They understood. If he gets shot, he would most likely die, or be put in the hospital for more than a month. Due to him not being home, Prussia was in a bad mood most of the time. He was homesick. North found Gilbird perched at a window, and told Prussia about it. Which boosted his mood and calmed his nerve.
The Narnians, on the other hand, weren't in as good of a mood. South was busy trying to finish all of her paperwork, but also trying to figure out plans to get the people together to have an army. North only emerges from her room for five hours every day, if someone wanted to see her, they'd have to go inside her room.
North looked around her room. The only light she had was a few Japanese lanterns and a candle. Her room was almost empty, even though it used to be filled with so many different things. Japanese lanterns, Chinese statues, different country flag hung up on the walls, books from England, and other different things. She loved to collect different items from different countries. The walls used to be covered with flags and moon paintings. Now the room only had four lanterns, a candle, and the metal moon symbol on her door. Everything else was in her basement back in her house in the north. South has done the same with her room, and the rest of the castle. The only things left was food and other small items. Prussia, North and South all slept in the same bed, due to the fact that they had to sell most of their items for weapon money. The queen and king evacuated to Neverland. They had to make sure that no matter what, their queen and king wouldn't get hurt.
Queen Korma was like a mother to them. They even called her mom, sometimes Prussia did as well. Queen Korma would cook for them, tuck them in bed, sing and tell them stories. Just like a mother would. North called her mom first during dinner. She expected Korma to laugh or make fun of her, but she just smiled and said "Please, call me that all you wish." After she said that, South and North had no shame in calling her mother. If anything happened to her, or her husband, then they wouldn't know what to do. Even Prussia found a special place in his heart for her.
North decided that was enough of feeling so many emotions and emerged from her room, shocked to see that it was already night. She walked up the the window that was right in front of her room and looked out. The window was pointed to the north, so she could see the white snow and icy canals. She looked up at the moon and smiled. Remembering when she was born. The moment she popped out of that black rose, the first thing she saw was the darkness of the sky, and the bright moon greeting her. South had the same thing happen to her, but with the brightness of the sun and the bright blue skies.
North took one last look at her land, and decided it was time for her to go to bed with the others. They were probably still talking. It wasn't that late into the night. North brushed her hand against the cold stone wall, her bare feet gently hitting the ground without a sound. Her white hair brushed against her ankles as she made her way to the shared room. She heard Prussia's snake-like laugh followed by Souths loud laugh. It echoed through the almost empty halls. Her smile grew more. It was nice hearing them laugh.
She opened the door and grinned. "Say hey, what did I miss?" She asked, South looked over at her and smiled back. "We're just talking about different times we did something stupid." She said, North ahed and walked over to them. "Can I join? Too late, I already did." She said as she sat down next to South. North noticed that Gilbird was resting in Prussia's hair. "Don't mention it it's adorable." South whispered to her, North nodded. South looked around the room. This was the Share Room. Because South and North had separate rooms, they decided to have one specific room set for them to hang out together. Which is why half of the room was black with moons on it, and the other half was white with the sun.
South smiled when she remembered when the room was first made. North spent a whole day designing the place, and painting the suns and moons just right. "Remember that time, we were all in America, and you grabbed a shopping cart and bought fireworks?" South asked, Prussia laughed. "And I pushed you guys down a hill after setting the f*ckers on fire and then jumped in?" North giggled. "Then you got your legs stuck in the baby leg holes?" South covered her mouth, remembering how awkward he looked. "I thought we would never speak of that!" He shouted as he lightly shoved North.
"Well this might be the last time we ever talk about it." South said, everyone looked at her sadly. It was true. The war was planned out, Prussia had Gilbird listen in on the meetings. Somehow, Gilbird told him what they were planning. Prussia told them that the Nordics were in on it as well. Apparently, they just wanted more natural resources. They entered the agreement about three months after the Narnians went into the first meeting, and almost got caught. They couldn't believe it at first. "Finland taught me how to shoot! Iceland taught us how to run fast! Why would they attack us?" South asked, North made a face. "I learned how to make strategies and plans from Denmark and Sweden. I'm sure they aren't going to fight us." Both of them were proven wrong when Gilbird returned from another mission with Mr. Puffins bow in his mouth.
The final mission was sent out a week ago. The first battle was planned to be in October 25th. Which wasn't good for Narnias moral. October was the most cheerful month. It's the most celebrated month in all of Narnia. Halloween was the national holiday, children had the whole week off of school, as adults had the week off of work. Halloween was Norths and Souths shared birthday, so they made the month of October the most important month. Festivals used to cover the streets, as music used to fill the air. But this year, was silent. No one was celebrating. Families weren't on the streets. Instead they were inside, saying goodbye to loved ones. Teenagers telling their last jokes. Fathers hugging their sobbing children. Mothers kissing their children goodbye and sending them to their grandparents. More tears were shed then there were stars in the sky. Enough tears to fill the deepest ocean. Sobs echoed through the streets during the day, and prayers through the night.
Narnia used to be the most cheerful country. Everyone was so exuberant that you wouldn't dare try and fight. Now Narnia is lost in an abyss of despair and prayers to live long enough to see the sunlight of tomorrow.
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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on May 26, 2017
this is a really good story
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You like it? : D
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yes it's so awesome :)
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on March 19, 2017
Yas
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The new chapter for Sun and Moon is awesome dude
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Liiiiiiies
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on March 11, 2017
It isssss
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on March 11, 2017
Not really
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on March 11, 2017
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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on March 06, 2017
I feel like I nailed China's part XD
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on March 06, 2017
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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on March 06, 2017
Cool story
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Grazie
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 28, 2017
WOWOWOWOWWOWOWOWOW
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on February 25, 2017
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
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on February 25, 2017
YEYEYEYEYEYEYYEYEYE
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It took forever and I noticed that the castle didn't even get nuked for the first time so I sped it up a bit XD
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S A LEGIT COMPLIMENT
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on February 25, 2017
Yay ^^ I made your 2p come out for a small bit
Prussia can cure the 2p cause he's so awesome
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on February 25, 2017
I can't tell if this is sarcasm or legit
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on February 25, 2017
Damn legit?
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOOD
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on February 25, 2017
This is utter amazingness! Also, I think your writing has improved a lot since, say, the SMIH story. (Not that it was bad then, it was great! It's just BETTER now. ^^) Seriously, this is perfection!
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Grazie
Yeah I noticed that I got way better in my writing
Which is why when someone reads one of my old stories I immediately cringe and say "Why don't you wait on that until I fix all of that..."
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on February 03, 2017
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on February 03, 2017
I'm typing a new chapter now
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on February 03, 2017
Yup. :3
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on February 03, 2017
Legit? :D
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on February 03, 2017
Well, I still think your old stories are good. Actually, I think your Black Butler SMIH story is one of my favorites overall on this site. ^^
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on February 02, 2017
Amazing!
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Ah.....it...is??????
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Search for Donald trump and see some protest cr*p
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on January 29, 2017
Lolol
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on January 29, 2017
AND QFEAST PROTEST S***
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on January 29, 2017
XD Lmao They are very weird indeed XD
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on January 29, 2017
IKR IKR IKR WE GET TO SEE WEIRD OC ****
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on January 29, 2017
Omfa right?
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on January 29, 2017
I'm going to narnia in august pls pls pls mom
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on January 29, 2017
Oh shit you agreed lmao
Yeah @Crazy_Otaku_Bitch and I like to fruk around with those two Ocs a lot
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on January 29, 2017
Ikr lolololol
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on January 29, 2017
Oh my....you did...?
I'm so sorry you read that utter bullcrap lolol
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on January 29, 2017
I saw another story based on your two countries
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on January 29, 2017
YAAAAAAAAS YAS YAS YAS
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Eh?
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Hm....
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on January 28, 2017
It's great
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on January 28, 2017
Are you sure? I'm not sure if it's good enough
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on January 28, 2017
Yep I love it ^^
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on January 28, 2017
The story is good??
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on January 28, 2017
It's okay dude the story is great but it's fine that you aren't that good at spelling ^^
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on January 28, 2017
NON I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FAIRLY NICE THIS TIME
GODDAMMIT
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on January 28, 2017
You have some errors so I'll have to fix them but I'm too lazy tonight
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on January 28, 2017
SHIT WHAT DSIEAOEHUFAERFERGARGHEDF
ESU;FHWESFG GOD DAMN IT I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FINE THIS TIME
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on January 28, 2017
WAIT WOT
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on January 28, 2017
Yep just let me correct spelling tomorrow morning
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on January 28, 2017
Is it good?
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