No this is bad

No this is bad

Northern and Southern Narnia were basically harmless. They hardly ever got into a fight, and if they did, it was nothing huge. There was only one war between them, but it was never spoken of. Other than that, they never had to fight in a war with another country, there was never a need. There is a need now.

published on January 28, 2017not completed

Chapter Five

South shoved passed more boxes, looking into them. "That's not it..that's not it either..." She stopped when she saw a blood covered box. She slowly made her way over to the small box and kneeled down. "This...this is it." She said as she saw a black sleeve poke out of the box. She slowly lifted the box and placed it on her lap. She picked at the crusted blood with her short nails and slowly opened the box. She pulled out the black uniform and bit her lip. Stab marks were still scattered around the uniform. She never had it fixed. It still reeked of blood, soil, and metal. She poked her finger through all of the knife cuts, remembering how bad they hurt. "I'll stitch it up..." She said as she grabbed the bottom part of her uniform, and quickly exited the closet.
North pulled out the bloody box out from the secret hole cut into the wall. She hid away her uniform, never wanting to see it again. "I never wanted to see you again." She muttered as she opened the box, looking at her white uniform. She lifted the shirt and looked at the bullet hole through the heart. "Guess I never stitched you..." She said as she looked at the other bullet holes, giving a soft, weak chuckle. At least they weren't stained with blood. She bleached them long ago. She stood up with the uniform in her hands, and turned around. She stood silently in the closet for a long while before continuing walking out into her room.
They met up in the empty dinning room. Prussia was already in his uniform. "Alright...you two ready to lead your awesome army?" He asked, North shook her head. Her smile, still on her face. "I don't want to do this again." She said softly, shifting uncomfortably in her uniform. It felt a little tighter then the last time she wore it. South sighed as she placed her rifle over her shoulder. Her AK-47, Model 1987, and Armalite AR-7 were on her body. Anything with a seven in it, was her lucky gun. How did she strap all of those guns on her body? North asked, but she never knew.
"I'm not ready either, but come on North. We have to do what we have to do. Our job right now, is to protect our country." She said to the frizzy haired, pail girl. North sighed. "I know it's just..." She looked in her hands and at her jacket. Knives everywhere. She had special pockets in her uniform jacket, shirt, and even pants to hold as many knifes as possible. She had a sword strapped to her hip and back. She didn't like guns. "I haven't fought in a long while. I don't think we're going to do so well...we might di-" Prussia covered Norths mouth. "Don't say that! That's not awesome at all. Now come one, your troops are waiting for you outside by the canal."
North and South reminded Prussia to stay in the castle, they weren't trying to protect him by doing that. They had paperwork that needed to be done, and he'd the only one who could do it. They said their last goodbyes, held each other, then saluted goodbye. "Are you ready?" South asked once they stood in front of the door. North shook her head. Both of their hair was pulled back into tight ponytails. Norths dog tag was hidden in her shirt. Both of them wore contacts, and were standing up straight. Neither of them could breathe. Their hearts felt like they were going to stop, rapid and uneasy breathing, and slightly sweating. "We have to keep it together." South reminded North. North nodded as she clenched her knife, controlling her breathing. "Are you ready, South?" She asked, glancing at her from the corner of her eye. South shook her head. "Oh hell no."
North pushed open the door, the moment they stepped outside of the castle, they were greeted by the roars of the solders. They held up their swords, spears, axes, guns, and other weapons as they made their battle cry. South raised her Armalite as North raised her rapier in the air. They waiting until the battle cry went silent. "Take it away, North." South said, knowing that North was better at planning due to her getting the experience from Sweden and Denmark. "Alright! Ladies and gentleman...you are no longer ladies and gentleman. You are now full, battle machines. You will fight with every ounce of power you have in you! You have no more mercy. You have no time to think about what will or might happen!" North motioned to the flag that was waving in the wind on top of the castle. The flag was white on the top with a crescent moon design, as the bottom was green and had a sun on it. The left side was yellow, and had a star.
"You will die protecting that flag. I am Narnia. South is Narnia. You will be protecting my country. You will die protecting Souths country. You will die protecting your country. Our country. And South and I will be fighting by your side!" South smiled at the speech. Knowing well that every word was true. "We are Narnia, we live and die for the protection of others, even if it means we lose our lives during the war! We are Narnia, we live for the freedom of our people! South and I are Narnia, we are the personification for the country of justice, unity and protection! We are Narnia, we believe that everyone is good, even if they don't think nor show it! We are Narnia, and we protect our country at the cost of our lives!" North shouted, earning another war cry. South held up her gun and shot one time. "Everyone! Are you, willing to die for that flag?" A battle cry. Wow this is how it feels having so many people yelling for you. South thought.
"Are you willing to fight for that flag?" South asked, another cry. "Will you die by our sides, for that flag?!" Another cry. South grinned, as did North. "You are going to go into battle, most of you will die. I am not sugar coating it!" South shouted, North noticed many people tear up. "Gott mit uns." North muttered under her breath. There must have been hundreds of thousands of people there. Willing to fight to keep this country safe. "We are going into war with the Nordics, Allies, and Axis Powers! Oh now don't look down! Look up! I know we're fighting against many countries, but we can do it! Remember the America Revolutionary War? America sucked. But they won. We can win too! No matter how much we fall, we will always stand up more then we fall!" South encouraged the soldiers.
North placed a hand on Souths shoulder. "It's almost time. We must go to the battle area." She said, South nodded. She held up her gun and fired another time. South sighed as she watched everyone march away. I can't believe this is happening. It's not fair. Why do we have to fight so many countries? South thought as she looked at North. "Get the horses." She said, North nodded as she ran to the ride of the castle. She was gone for almost ten minutes before returning with both of the horses. She was riding her own. "Sorry it took so long eh? I had to saddle them." She said as she rode up to South, throwing the reins down at her.
Norths horse was pure white, with red eyes. She named him Pride. South looked at her own horse, gently rubbing its muzzle before hopping on its back. She gripped the reins and nodded to North. Her horse was a chocolate brown with dark brown eyes, she named her horse Korma, after their queen. I hope they are okay. South thought as they quickly dashed up the the army of soldiers. They rode to the front of the extreamly large group and continued until they reached their destination. North pulled out her sword, her grin was twitching. "I don't want to do this." She said softly. South nodded. "Me neither."
They looked out on the empty field, which was to be their first battle ground.
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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on May 26, 2017
this is a really good story
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You like it? : D
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yes it's so awesome :)
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on March 19, 2017
Yas
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The new chapter for Sun and Moon is awesome dude
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Liiiiiiies
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on March 11, 2017
It isssss
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on March 11, 2017
Not really
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on March 11, 2017
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on March 06, 2017
I feel like I nailed China's part XD
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on March 06, 2017
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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on March 06, 2017
Cool story
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Grazie
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
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on February 25, 2017
YEYEYEYEYEYEYYEYEYE
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It took forever and I noticed that the castle didn't even get nuked for the first time so I sped it up a bit XD
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S A LEGIT COMPLIMENT
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on February 25, 2017
Yay ^^ I made your 2p come out for a small bit
Prussia can cure the 2p cause he's so awesome
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on February 25, 2017
I can't tell if this is sarcasm or legit
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on February 25, 2017
Damn legit?
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOOD
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on February 25, 2017
This is utter amazingness! Also, I think your writing has improved a lot since, say, the SMIH story. (Not that it was bad then, it was great! It's just BETTER now. ^^) Seriously, this is perfection!
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Grazie
Yeah I noticed that I got way better in my writing
Which is why when someone reads one of my old stories I immediately cringe and say "Why don't you wait on that until I fix all of that..."
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on February 03, 2017
I'm typing a new chapter now
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on February 03, 2017
Yup. :3
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on February 03, 2017
Legit? :D
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on February 03, 2017
Well, I still think your old stories are good. Actually, I think your Black Butler SMIH story is one of my favorites overall on this site. ^^
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on February 02, 2017
Amazing!
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Ah.....it...is??????
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Search for Donald trump and see some protest cr*p
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on January 29, 2017
Lolol
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on January 29, 2017
AND QFEAST PROTEST S***
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on January 29, 2017
XD Lmao They are very weird indeed XD
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on January 29, 2017
IKR IKR IKR WE GET TO SEE WEIRD OC ****
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on January 29, 2017
Omfa right?
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on January 29, 2017
I'm going to narnia in august pls pls pls mom
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on January 29, 2017
Oh shit you agreed lmao
Yeah @Crazy_Otaku_Bitch and I like to fruk around with those two Ocs a lot
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on January 29, 2017
Ikr lolololol
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on January 29, 2017
Oh my....you did...?
I'm so sorry you read that utter bullcrap lolol
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on January 29, 2017
I saw another story based on your two countries
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on January 29, 2017
YAAAAAAAAS YAS YAS YAS
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Eh?
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Hm....
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on January 28, 2017
It's great
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on January 28, 2017
Are you sure? I'm not sure if it's good enough
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on January 28, 2017
Yep I love it ^^
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on January 28, 2017
The story is good??
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on January 28, 2017
It's okay dude the story is great but it's fine that you aren't that good at spelling ^^
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on January 28, 2017
NON I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FAIRLY NICE THIS TIME
GODDAMMIT
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on January 28, 2017
You have some errors so I'll have to fix them but I'm too lazy tonight
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on January 28, 2017
SHIT WHAT DSIEAOEHUFAERFERGARGHEDF
ESU;FHWESFG GOD DAMN IT I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FINE THIS TIME
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on January 28, 2017
WAIT WOT
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on January 28, 2017
Yep just let me correct spelling tomorrow morning
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on January 28, 2017
Is it good?
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