No this is bad

No this is bad

Northern and Southern Narnia were basically harmless. They hardly ever got into a fight, and if they did, it was nothing huge. There was only one war between them, but it was never spoken of. Other than that, they never had to fight in a war with another country, there was never a need. There is a need now.

published on January 28, 2017not completed

Chapter Three

"You can't!" Prussia shouted as he grabbed North by her hair, and South by her collar, yanking them back from the door. "Why not?! We need an explanation for this!" South said, her eyes were watering, her warm tears threatening to fall from her eyes. I can't hold my emotions well in situations like this. She thought as she wiped her eyes. North was silent, her smile was slightly faltered but not by much. Do we have to fight again? I don't want to fight again...not after last time. She thought as she looked at South. "You guys can't tell Germany about this! If you do, he'll know I was snooping in his room! And he's going to know that the awesome me stole this papers and showed you!" Prussia shouted as he let go of the Narnians. "If he even lays a finger on you, we'll kick his ass." North finally said as she grabbed South by the arm and went back over to the large door. "If I survive long enough for you to show up." Prussia muttered as they shut the door.
It wasn't a long ride to Germany's house, but it felt like the flight would never end. North and South sat across from each other, but refused to looked at one another. Souths mind was crowded with different thoughts. What is going to happen? Is Prussia going to be okay if we do this?..Are we? She shook the thoughts from her mind and looked over at North. She seems to be taking this very well. South thought to herself as she then looked at her hands.
I am not taking this well. North thought as she smiled off at a random wall. If I want anything, it's to be neutral. We were neutral before, why does the Axis want to hurt us? Well...eliminate us really. "We aren't going to fall oh so simply." North said, moving her gaze from the wall, to South. "I know, it's just this is bringing up memories I'd wish to forget." Their eyes locked together for a split second before looking somewhere else.
Once their jet landed, they gave each other a reassuring look before stepping outside. They looked up at Germany's house. It was just like the other nations, huge. They slightly glanced at each other, but continued to walk up the walkway and up to the large wooden door. "Should we..knock?" North asked, her voice was slightly higher than usual. South shook her head, her brown messy hair almost hit North. "No...let's just go into the house....maybe we can just..." She slowly grabbed the golden door handle and twisted it. Both girls let out the breath they were holding once the door opened silently. Their calmed nerve quickly ran away once they realized that they were going to go into Germany's house. It's not like they haven't randomly showed up to Germany's house before. It's just that they were going to confront him about wanting to start a war. Not something you'd want to talk to Germany about.
North slowly pushed herself inside the house and looked around. Clean as usual. Nothing seemed out of place. She slightly tilted her head up closing her eyes as she began to take small quick sniffs of the air. Nothing smelled different...wait. North quickly looked down and opened her icy livid coloured eyes. "What?" South asked, North pointed to a door down the hall. "I smell...." North blinked a few times and took another small sniff. "..that's not right. The Allies are here." North said, South made a confused face as she tried to sniff the air. She smelled nothing but cleaning supplies and the slight smell of chocolate cake and coffee. "What are you talking about?" She said as she gently closed the door. "I smell them, they're here." North said as she continued to stare at the door.
"You're insane, come on let's listen in on the conversation. You sniff 'em out to see if they're coming closer got it?" South joked, the joke slipped over Norths head. They slowly, and quietly made their way over to the door, hearing loud voices. South glanced at North the moment they heard China yelling. How did she sniff them..is she a bloodhound or something? South thought as they stopped outside the door. South pressed her ear to the door, as North placed her ear farther down the door.
"Alright! We have to plan this out and not act like this is a World Meeting! Someone stole my battle plans, Italy, Japan, you did not get the folders. Am I correct?" Germany asked, silence. South guessed that they nodded. "Ve...I don't want to start a war though." Italy said softly then sniffled. "What is Narnia good for? If we win the war, we could have more land. Prospering land. With that land we could get much more money." Germany said, soft words of agreement. "I believe Germany right. We do this, we get land with money." China said, a loud bang. "Dudes they didn't do anything, why don't we just leave them alone and don't fight them. That also sounds good doesn't it? No lives lost, no money lost due to battle costs, no harm done!" America shouted, more soft words of agreement.
"Hai, but, it would be nice to have more land." Japan said, China laughed followed by a slapping sound. "Japan you always want more land!" China said, a small clink sound. "I do agree with America, but also with Japan and Germany. Money does seem tight now since 2020. My country, and I'm sure your countries as well, need money. Sure it will cost money to fight, but in the end, there will be money to go around. The southern part of Narnia has one of the highest market sales. As the north has the most natural resources I've ever seen in a country." England said, silence. North pressed her ear closer to the door, trying to hear every little thing going one. Someone was tapping their foot on the ground, someone else was drinking something, pens tapping and papers shuffling.
"I hate to say this, but I have to agree with the black sheep." France said, the sound of a chair creaking back was heard. "Waah! I don't wanna fight them! They're so nice and they help Italy sometimes with resources!" Italy cried. Germany sighed deeply. "I know they help, but how much have they done? They are just asking to be taken over. They don't have an army, cars, roads, or anything else. They have no fighting spirit, as you can tell from the Narnian Civil War of 1990. Neither the north, or south won." Germany said, obviously annoyed. The two girls tensed up at the mention of the war. "Dudes dudes dudes, come on now. We don't have to start a war okay?" America said, that set everyone off. A few hitting sounds were heard as were many other sounds. South slightly cringed when she head a loud slap noise and heard Italy cry out after. South gently grabbed Norths shoulder, making sure that she wouldn't barge into the room and start fighting everyone for hitting Italy.
Someone slammed their hands on the table. "Everyone shut up! We need to start planning! No fighting in this room! If you want to speak raise your hand!" Germany shouted over Italy crying. A soft patting sound followed by some sniffling was heard. "Grazie Japan." Italy said softly. "Russia you may speak." Germany said. North and South tensed up. He was there? He hasn't even said a word! Mental note: He is very silent when needed. North noted. "Да of course I can speak, other wise I would bash your face in~ Now I believe that we should start the war as soon as possible. I want most of the North." Russia said, no one objected. North held her breath. "I agree with him. This war better be short though." France stated, noises of agreement. "It not last long! Narnia weak!" China said, Italy made a small whimper.
North smiled widely as she heard someone speaking softly. "Come on guys. I don't think we should fight eh? Why not just settle this calmly and not try to kill the two girls eh?" Canada said, no one noticed what he said as they kept on talking over him. "We should make a very detailed plan. We should not just rush into this if we are going to fight." Japan said, South bit her lip. "Screw this, I'm going to go get something to drink, who's coming?" America said, a few other nations agreed. "Shit hide!" North hissed, South quickly raced over to the TV sitting on the large wooden stand. She squeezed behind it, getting twisted up in the wires. She almost tried to move, but couldn't move in time. The door opened, and she was crushed against the wall covered in wires.
North ran and slid under the couch the second the door opened. She saw her white hair showing out from under the couch and quickly pulled it under with her. Hoping to who ever was up there that they didn't see."What was that?" France asked, her hope was crushed. America laughed. Norths breath hitched as he began to walk over to the couch. He crouched down and laughed again. "It's just one of Germany's dogs." He said as he reached under the couch, South covered her mouth and tightly closed her eyes, as did North. She felt Americas hand brush over her hair and up to her glasses. He stopped moving. I'm going to die, he's going to call me out and I'm going to die. North repeated in her head over and over. South felt her eyes prickle with tears. Her heart pounding against her rib cage.
"Yeah dudes it's just one of his dogs." America said as he stood up and walked back over to the other countries. "Ah, yes he does have many dogs." Japan said as they began to walk over to the kitchen. "Totally dudes. Hey we should. Get. Out. Of. Here. And go outside for some fresh air!" America said, South recognized what he was doing and slowly opened her eyes. He was helping them. She took a deep breath and slowly looked out from behind the TV with wide, horrified eyes. America, France, Japan, and Italy were all in the kitchen. She bit her lip as Italy looked at France, she saw the red mark on his face. She darted her eyes to under the couch, North was looking out from under it. It was slightly hard to see her due to her being covered by a coffee table, but South could see her mouthing "Is it safe?"
Why are we freaking out? We're countries, we can't die. I guess it's just if they know we're here, either Prussia would get it, or we will get it more worse than they were planning. North thought as South nodded. They both quickly and silently emerged from their hiding places, and tried to escape. Souths foot was caught in the wires, she fell to the ground but silenced her fall by pressing her hands down on the carpet before the rest of her body. She was in plain sight. North was at the door, quickly motioning for her to hurry up, she moved her arms out the open door and made a terrified face. South turned around and looked at how tied up she was. It wasn't bad. She quickly untied the wires, every second felt like an hour. She heard China complain about being hungry and hurried up her movements.
After she undid the wires, she raced to the door on her toes, darting out the door. North followed and quickly and quite loudly shut the door. They raced back into the jet, and refused to talk or make a sound for almost a full seven hours after.
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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on May 26, 2017
this is a really good story
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You like it? : D
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yes it's so awesome :)
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on March 19, 2017
Yas
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The new chapter for Sun and Moon is awesome dude
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Liiiiiiies
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on March 11, 2017
It isssss
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on March 11, 2017
Not really
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on March 11, 2017
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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on March 06, 2017
I feel like I nailed China's part XD
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on March 06, 2017
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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on March 06, 2017
Cool story
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Grazie
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 28, 2017
WOWOWOWOWWOWOWOWOW
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on February 25, 2017
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
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on February 25, 2017
YEYEYEYEYEYEYYEYEYE
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It took forever and I noticed that the castle didn't even get nuked for the first time so I sped it up a bit XD
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S A LEGIT COMPLIMENT
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on February 25, 2017
Yay ^^ I made your 2p come out for a small bit
Prussia can cure the 2p cause he's so awesome
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on February 25, 2017
I can't tell if this is sarcasm or legit
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on February 25, 2017
Damn legit?
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOOD
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on February 25, 2017
This is utter amazingness! Also, I think your writing has improved a lot since, say, the SMIH story. (Not that it was bad then, it was great! It's just BETTER now. ^^) Seriously, this is perfection!
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Grazie
Yeah I noticed that I got way better in my writing
Which is why when someone reads one of my old stories I immediately cringe and say "Why don't you wait on that until I fix all of that..."
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on February 03, 2017
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on February 03, 2017
I'm typing a new chapter now
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on February 03, 2017
Yup. :3
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on February 03, 2017
Legit? :D
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on February 03, 2017
Well, I still think your old stories are good. Actually, I think your Black Butler SMIH story is one of my favorites overall on this site. ^^
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on February 02, 2017
Amazing!
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Ah.....it...is??????
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Search for Donald trump and see some protest cr*p
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on January 29, 2017
Lolol
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on January 29, 2017
AND QFEAST PROTEST S***
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on January 29, 2017
XD Lmao They are very weird indeed XD
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on January 29, 2017
IKR IKR IKR WE GET TO SEE WEIRD OC ****
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on January 29, 2017
Omfa right?
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on January 29, 2017
I'm going to narnia in august pls pls pls mom
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on January 29, 2017
Oh shit you agreed lmao
Yeah @Crazy_Otaku_Bitch and I like to fruk around with those two Ocs a lot
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on January 29, 2017
Ikr lolololol
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on January 29, 2017
Oh my....you did...?
I'm so sorry you read that utter bullcrap lolol
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on January 29, 2017
I saw another story based on your two countries
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on January 29, 2017
YAAAAAAAAS YAS YAS YAS
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Eh?
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Hm....
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on January 28, 2017
It's great
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on January 28, 2017
Are you sure? I'm not sure if it's good enough
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on January 28, 2017
Yep I love it ^^
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on January 28, 2017
The story is good??
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on January 28, 2017
It's okay dude the story is great but it's fine that you aren't that good at spelling ^^
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on January 28, 2017
NON I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FAIRLY NICE THIS TIME
GODDAMMIT
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on January 28, 2017
You have some errors so I'll have to fix them but I'm too lazy tonight
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on January 28, 2017
SHIT WHAT DSIEAOEHUFAERFERGARGHEDF
ESU;FHWESFG GOD DAMN IT I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FINE THIS TIME
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on January 28, 2017
WAIT WOT
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on January 28, 2017
Yep just let me correct spelling tomorrow morning
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on January 28, 2017
Is it good?
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