No this is bad

No this is bad

Northern and Southern Narnia were basically harmless. They hardly ever got into a fight, and if they did, it was nothing huge. There was only one war between them, but it was never spoken of. Other than that, they never had to fight in a war with another country, there was never a need. There is a need now.

published on January 28, 2017not completed

Chapter Two

The Narnian's ate in silence. Queen Korma, the fourth queen of Narnia who came from the South, found that strange. Usually the two of them are screaming at each other, or at least doing something. She thought as she gently placed her fork full of chicken into her mouth. Her green eyes glanced over at the king. King Charles from the northern part of Narnia. This was how the kingdom went. One of the royalty from the north, the other from the south. Unless you were born in royalty. England was proud when he realized how much Narnia was like the old England, and new England.
"Ahem...are you two girls alright? We haven't heard anything from you all day!" The king exclaimed. South looked at him and smiled. "We're awesome!" Someone else shouted, everyone jumped and looked at the end of the table. Prussia smirked as everyone stared at him. Not at all feeling uncomfortable, as he was used to being in the castle. "Yo." North blinked a few times before dropping her fork onto her almost empty plate, and began to stand up. "I'll get him a plate." North said, smiling as usual, only to be glared at by South. "No, you can't step foot into my kitchen, I'll get the plate." South said as she stood up and quickly left into the kitchen. North scoffed as she picked up her plate, set it next to Prussia, and sat down. "So what brings you here?" She asked as she picked up her fork once again. Prussia slightly looked at her, his grin was still there, but his eyes held something sorrowful.
A loud clatter echoed throughout the dinning room as South placed the plate in front of Prussia, it wasn't unusual of him to randomly pop up into the castle out of no where, he actually does this quite often. South also moved her plate next to him, and comfortably sat down. "Ah, we'll leave you guys alone." Korma said as she quickly grabbed her plate and stood up. The king looked at her, obviously confused. Queen Korma huffed as she quickly yanked his ear lob, and harshly whispered something about the Narnian's looking much more calm with their friend being there. The king pouted as he rubbed his ear, grabbing his plate and nodding his head to Prussia and the two nations.
"Shouldn't you be at the World Meeting?" South asked but almost immediately regretted what she said, Prussia grabbed his fork and looked at her with his ruby red eyes. His eyebrow raised. "Are you serious? You think they'll ever allow me in there?" Prussia used to be allowed into the meetings, but after 1947, he was not allowed anymore. If he even stepped foot into the conference room when a meeting was going on, he would imminently be kicked out. No questions asked, but a lot of yelling. Once, he tried to enter a meeting in Berlin. The moment he opened the door, he was yelled at by Germany for a long while. He then ran out and wasn't heard from in a week, which scared both the Narnian's and Germany almost to death.
"She meant shouldn't you be doing something more awesome than hanging out with us?" North said, stabbing her last piece of chicken and shoved it in her mouth. Prussia did his snake-like laugh and slapped the both of them on their backs. Which made North start chocking on her chicken. "You guys are awesome though!" He said as he began eating. After North finally stopped chocking on the chicken, she took a deep breath and shook her head. Giving a weak thumbs up. "Thanks." She said hoarsely.
South felt something strange in the air. A veil of a negative emotion hung around Prussia. The feeling was strong, he wasn't acting as he normally does. He'd usually ask for beer, or he would have kicked his chair back and placed his feet on the table, or he would have even sat between Queen Korma and King Charles. He has never sat at the end of the mahogany table before. Something was wrong.
North, however, didn't seem to notice Prussia's strange behavior, she just chatted away with him about playing hide-and-seek in the northern part of Narnia, laughing about how people would be trying to find them for an eternity. South tried to get Norths attention by kicking her, and slightly smiled to herself when it worked. They locked eye contact. A warm honey colour and a icy blue colour stared into each other. She nodded her head down at the table, North ohed softly and nodded. They both shot under the table and almost collided heads. "Whoa! What are you two doing!?" Prussia shouted as he tried to join, only to be politely told not to. He softly sighed as he knew what they were going to talk about, and decided to not try to barge in.
"Something is wrong with him." South whispered, North made a face, her cold breath mixing with Souths warm breath. "What do you mean?" She asked, South explained her thoughts, then waited for Norths reaction. Her expression was a mix of confusion, and disbelief. "You think he has bad news..?" North finally said after a long silence, deciding to just say something simple. South nodded, pushing her brown hair behind her ear. "I think so...he just...we should ask." She said, North shook her head, her long white hair moving wildly. "We have to wait, we can't just ask him 'Hey! You look down in the dumps! What's on your chest eh?' it's just not right." The two nations nodded in agreement as they shot back out from under the table. Prussia wasn't eating anymore. "Yo, you all good my man?" North asked, snapping her fingers and making finger guns.
He was no longer smiling, nor smirking. His eyes were dull and staring at the half finished plate of food. "I...heard you guys talking." North and South looked at each other, but shrugged it off. They were under the table, how could they expect him to not hear anything? "Oh, and was I right?" South asked bluntly, Prussia sighed as he reached under his blue uniform, pulling out vanilla coloured, almost exploding folders. He pushed the plate forward and placed the folders in its place. "You guys...should read these. I was looking around in Wests work room and found these in his drawer." Prussia said in a strangely uncomfortable softness. The two Narnians looked at each other, eyebrows raised as they both grabbed one of the folders for themselves.
South looked at the filled to the max folder, and opened it. The first thing she saw was a letter written in Germany's neat hand writing. North did the same.
Dear Italia and Japan,
I do not think that this can last much longer. You and Japan cannot keep holding off on signing the papers. I need your approval to fight with me. We are the Axis Powers, are we not? That means we fight together. I understand you don't like war, and neither does Japan, but my boss is wanting to start this war as soon as possible. I absolutely need your signature on these papers. The documents in the back are the plans, and equipment we have to use. I have sent this same letter to the both of you. Japan, I understand that you highly dislike bombs and other things in that category, but I regret to inform you that those types of weapons will be used during the war. Italy, I know that you dislike fighting at all. I understand that you don't want anyone to be hurt or worse. But this is going on too long.
Narnia must fall.
From, Germany
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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on May 26, 2017
this is a really good story
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You like it? : D
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yes it's so awesome :)
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on March 19, 2017
Yas
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The new chapter for Sun and Moon is awesome dude
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Liiiiiiies
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on March 11, 2017
It isssss
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on March 11, 2017
Not really
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on March 11, 2017
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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on March 06, 2017
I feel like I nailed China's part XD
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on March 06, 2017
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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on March 06, 2017
Cool story
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Grazie
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
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on February 25, 2017
YEYEYEYEYEYEYYEYEYE
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It took forever and I noticed that the castle didn't even get nuked for the first time so I sped it up a bit XD
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S A LEGIT COMPLIMENT
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on February 25, 2017
Yay ^^ I made your 2p come out for a small bit
Prussia can cure the 2p cause he's so awesome
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
I can't tell if this is sarcasm or legit
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on February 25, 2017
Damn legit?
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOOD
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
This is utter amazingness! Also, I think your writing has improved a lot since, say, the SMIH story. (Not that it was bad then, it was great! It's just BETTER now. ^^) Seriously, this is perfection!
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Grazie
Yeah I noticed that I got way better in my writing
Which is why when someone reads one of my old stories I immediately cringe and say "Why don't you wait on that until I fix all of that..."
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on February 03, 2017
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on February 03, 2017
I'm typing a new chapter now
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on February 03, 2017
Yup. :3
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on February 03, 2017
Legit? :D
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on February 03, 2017
Well, I still think your old stories are good. Actually, I think your Black Butler SMIH story is one of my favorites overall on this site. ^^
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on February 02, 2017
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on February 02, 2017
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on February 02, 2017
Amazing!
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Ah.....it...is??????
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Search for Donald trump and see some protest cr*p
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on January 29, 2017
Lolol
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on January 29, 2017
AND QFEAST PROTEST S***
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on January 29, 2017
XD Lmao They are very weird indeed XD
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on January 29, 2017
IKR IKR IKR WE GET TO SEE WEIRD OC ****
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on January 29, 2017
Omfa right?
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on January 29, 2017
I'm going to narnia in august pls pls pls mom
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on January 29, 2017
Oh shit you agreed lmao
Yeah @Crazy_Otaku_Bitch and I like to fruk around with those two Ocs a lot
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on January 29, 2017
Ikr lolololol
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on January 29, 2017
Oh my....you did...?
I'm so sorry you read that utter bullcrap lolol
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on January 29, 2017
I saw another story based on your two countries
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on January 29, 2017
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on January 29, 2017
YAAAAAAAAS YAS YAS YAS
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Eh?
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Hm....
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on January 28, 2017
It's great
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on January 28, 2017
Are you sure? I'm not sure if it's good enough
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on January 28, 2017
Yep I love it ^^
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on January 28, 2017
The story is good??
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on January 28, 2017
It's okay dude the story is great but it's fine that you aren't that good at spelling ^^
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on January 28, 2017
NON I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FAIRLY NICE THIS TIME
GODDAMMIT
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on January 28, 2017
You have some errors so I'll have to fix them but I'm too lazy tonight
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on January 28, 2017
SHIT WHAT DSIEAOEHUFAERFERGARGHEDF
ESU;FHWESFG GOD DAMN IT I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FINE THIS TIME
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on January 28, 2017
WAIT WOT
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on January 28, 2017
Yep just let me correct spelling tomorrow morning
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on January 28, 2017
Is it good?
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