No this is bad

No this is bad

Northern and Southern Narnia were basically harmless. They hardly ever got into a fight, and if they did, it was nothing huge. There was only one war between them, but it was never spoken of. Other than that, they never had to fight in a war with another country, there was never a need. There is a need now.

published on January 28, 2017not completed

Chapter Eleven

When South reopened her eyes, she found herself being treated by someone who she didn't even know could be in the army. "Ah, y-you're awake!" He said as he removed the damp cloth from her forehead. "And, just might who you be?" She asked, sitting up, but imminently regretting it. Pain shot throughout her body. She looked down, bandages were wrapped around her body like a child would do with paper to look like a mummy.
My wounds, most of them should have healed by now...they weren't taken care of in the way they should have been. She thought as she pulled off the light sheet covering her. "You should stay in bed....Sir!" The boy said, pushing up his glasses. "I asked, who are you?" She hissed, the boy obviously wasn't a citizen of Narnia. For everyone that is, gets a dog tag. North had two, her Narnia tag, and a band one. She's never removed either of them.
South had one, but she hardly wore it.  This man, doesn't have a tag. "A-ah! I'm Mark Meuth!...Sir!" He said, hitting his head quite hard with a salute. South almost asked where is tag was, but didn't do so. Maybe he just lost it in battle...but he doesn't have wounds..his uniform is way too big for him as well. South was trying to piece everything together, but couldn't figure it out. She sighed as she stood up, which clearly shocked the black haired boy. "Y-you were stabbed in the heart though! You should not stand..H-how can you-" South cut him off, glaring at him, he took notice that her eyes slightly flashed a red colour. "I'm a country, bitch. Do not tell me what to do." She hissed as she walked out of the medical tent, and stormed around.
"How could we lose that battle? How did they even know?" She questioned many things, shoving past soldiers, and forcing her way over to the Castle Canal. She looked down into the rushing water way, and sighed. She then looked up at the north, watching the soft breeze gently make the trees dance. Where is she? She was supposed to be here but no, oh no, she had to try to find a camp. South cursed North, over and over and over. She finally stopped, and spit into the canal. "F*ck you, North." She muttered as she turned around, and glanced at the castle. "I'll be home soon, and I'll be able to cook my lovely sweets and I'll be able to rest in a nice and comfortable bed." Little did South know, her hair slowly was turning into a lighter and lighter brown, and her honey eyes had a red tint to them.
She made her way back to the camp, refusing to look at anyone just the sky. She groaned. The skies had grey clouds, it was going to rain. It's not that she didn't like the rain, it's just that they are in war. Rain and war don't mix well. She took a deep breath, but only smelled the soldiers blood and sweat. She then looked at the soldiers, they were surrounding someone. "Get out of my way!" She shouted as she ran up, her boots thudding loudly against the ground as she shoved past everyone. "Where are they!? I need to talk to North and South!" Prussia shouted, South skidded to a stop and looked up at him. His eyes were wide, noticeable dark begs were under them as well. His snow white hair was more messy then normal, sticking in every direction. His expression was frantic and terrified, his breathing was also rapid, as if he ran all the way here.
"South!...Why are your eyes-...never mind that, where is North I need to talk to you two!" He shouted as he gripped her arms and slightly shook her. "The awesome me has unawesome news." South blankly looked at him, and stepped back. "North is dead." She said coldly, why was he here? He should be in the castle, but no. There was work that needed to be done, but he's not doing it. Her sour thoughts grew more dark by the second. Prussia, on the other hand, his thoughts were more scared then anything. "S-she's dead?! Well where is her body we can wait by her side till she wakes up!" He said, finding that to be the best way. What he had to tell needed to be told to the both of them. "Why are you out of the castle?" She asked, crossing her arms over her chest, and tapping her foot in the ground. By this time, the soldiers have went their own way.
"Gilbird told me-" He was cut off by South making a disgusted face. "You still listen to that bird? No wonder you're not a cou-" This time, South cut herself off. Realizing that what she was about to say was way out of line, even for her darker part of her. Prussia sharply exhaled, and took a small step back. Gilbird chirped, and emerged from his hair. Silence fell between them. Prussia finally found his voice, and softly said. "Where is her body?" South did not reply, instead, she dropped her arms by her side and pointed one behind her. Into the north. "We never got her body." South grumbled, and looked up at Prussia. He was horrified. "How long?" The words were so quiet, she almost didn't hear them. She placed a hand over her heart, it still hurt from being stabbed at, not from pity.
"Soldier! How long was I passed out?" She yelled at a soldier walking by, carrying a crate. He jumped and looked at her. "Um...m-maybe four days?" He questioned, and quickly began to walk away, obviously not wanting to be yelled at. "Four days, so five. She's been dead for five days." South confirmed, and looked back at the albino in front of her. They both blankly stared at each other, before both of their eyes widened. "FIVE DAYS?!" They shouted at the same time, and began to talk at the same time.
"Five days and you didn't do anything?!"
"It wasn't my fault I was dead too!"
"Who killed her?!'
"Probably Russia or some shit!"
"Why didn't you help her!?"
"She was being an idiot!"
"Oh god damn it!" They shouted in unison. South kicked the dirt, and pouted like a child as Prussia gripped his hair, being careful as to not squish Gilbird in the process. "How about we just wait in the goods tent, and both relax." South offered, Prussia's eyes darted to her, but he nodded. They found themselves in the goods tent, which was really just the foods tent. South opened a crate, and looked inside. Bread. She groaned as she picked up two small loafs of the dry food and threw one at Prussia, who was sitting on top of a crate. He caught it and grinned. "Ah good shit." He muttered as he pulled small pieces off, and held them up to his hair. Gilbird emerged once more and chirped as he pecked at the crumbs.
They ended up eating and talking for a few hours, they talked about mainly how the country was doing. "So how are out sales?" South asked, Prussia noticed that her hair in some placed was turning into a dark brown, back to normal. "Sales are awesome, resources are awesome, war is not so awesome." He said, South rolled her eyes. "Well no shit." She sighed as she slightly moved back and forth, sitting on a crate hurts after some time. She then removed herself off of the crate, and was about to sit on the ground, until Eberhardt ran into the tent, scaring the both of them. Souths hands slipped and she fell on the ground, as Prussia thought that Eberhardt was his brother, and jumped, falling off the crate.
"She is back." He said, South scampered to her feet and looked at the German in disbelief. She then looked at Prussia, who realized that Eberhardt wasn't his brother, and relaxed as he stood up. "You had something you wanted to tell us?" She said as she grabbed his arm and shoved past Eberhardt. He didn't mind, their comrade just came back. He followed them. The sound of boots thumping on the ground was quite loud. South quickly ran out of breath, she looked around and saw a flash of white hair. "Over here!" She said as she pointed to a crowd of soldiers. Prussia, Eberhardt, and South all ran over, only Prussia and South shoved past everyone to try to get up to her.
"Then he just stabbed me in the back, it still hurts like hell but here I am!" North shouted as she pointed her thumb at her chest, grinning widely. South raised an eyebrow once they were in the front. Since when did she dye some of her hair black? She questioned, but pushed that aside. Everyone noticed how bad her uniform was in shape. Gashes were everywhere, and her white uniform hardly looked white anymore. It was almost a brown colour now. "North!" She shouted, North looked at South and smiled. "Yo, why didn't you get me? I way laying in the snow for days. It was cold as hell, especially when you have your whole body ripped open." She shuttered slightly, but looked at Prussia. "Say hey! When did he get here?!" She shouted as she hugged him, South rolled her eyes.
"Come on now, what did you have to tell us?" South said. They were all in the tent that North and South shared, strangely enough, no one else filled up the last space. "Well, I don't know if this is true...but I needed the both of you here to talk to. It involves the war." He said as he reached up, placing his fingers in his hair. Gilbird hopped on his fingers, and Prussia held him out. "Because you two wont let me fight....can-" He was cut off by the two saying no in unison. They didn't want him to die, because if he dies...he dies. He grinned and shrugged. "I'm too awesome for this war...anyways, because you two refuse to let me fight. I have Gilbird go out every day to catch me up on things." The two girls looked at each other, questioning how he could talk to his birds. The didn't ask out loud.
"So, you know of my attack against China and Japan?" South asked, Prussia nodded, North on the other hand was baffled. "You fought them!?" She asked, South nodded. "Yeah and I-" Prussia cut her off. "Lost." South glared at him, but didn't do anymore. He was right, she couldn't lie about winning. "Okay, and?" South changed the subject, North was rocking back and forth and was humming. "Well, after South died, I had Gilbird find Germany's camp, he shares one with Italy you know, it's not too far from China and Japan's camp." He said, South remembered when she was shot in the leg, and shook her head. "Okay, and?" She repeated, trying to get to the point. Prussia sighed. "Well, once he was close enough to hear both of them talking, he got some...information..that even I didn't expect." He said, gently stroking Gilbirds head. "Your point being!?" South shouted, North glared at her. "Relax man, just give him time. Now what was it, Prussia?" She asked, he took a deep breath.
"They plan on using bombs and maybe even...maybe even nukes."
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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on May 26, 2017
this is a really good story
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You like it? : D
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yes it's so awesome :)
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on March 19, 2017
Yas
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The new chapter for Sun and Moon is awesome dude
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Liiiiiiies
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on March 11, 2017
It isssss
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on March 11, 2017
Not really
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on March 11, 2017
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on March 11, 2017
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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on March 06, 2017
I feel like I nailed China's part XD
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on March 06, 2017
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on March 06, 2017
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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on March 06, 2017
Cool story
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Grazie
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 28, 2017
WOWOWOWOWWOWOWOWOW
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on February 25, 2017
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
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on February 25, 2017
YEYEYEYEYEYEYYEYEYE
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It took forever and I noticed that the castle didn't even get nuked for the first time so I sped it up a bit XD
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S A LEGIT COMPLIMENT
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on February 25, 2017
Yay ^^ I made your 2p come out for a small bit
Prussia can cure the 2p cause he's so awesome
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
I can't tell if this is sarcasm or legit
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on February 25, 2017
Damn legit?
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOOD
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on February 25, 2017
This is utter amazingness! Also, I think your writing has improved a lot since, say, the SMIH story. (Not that it was bad then, it was great! It's just BETTER now. ^^) Seriously, this is perfection!
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Grazie
Yeah I noticed that I got way better in my writing
Which is why when someone reads one of my old stories I immediately cringe and say "Why don't you wait on that until I fix all of that..."
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on February 03, 2017
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on February 03, 2017
I'm typing a new chapter now
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on February 03, 2017
Yup. :3
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on February 03, 2017
Legit? :D
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on February 03, 2017
Well, I still think your old stories are good. Actually, I think your Black Butler SMIH story is one of my favorites overall on this site. ^^
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on February 02, 2017
Amazing!
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Ah.....it...is??????
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Search for Donald trump and see some protest cr*p
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on January 29, 2017
Lolol
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on January 29, 2017
AND QFEAST PROTEST S***
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on January 29, 2017
XD Lmao They are very weird indeed XD
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on January 29, 2017
IKR IKR IKR WE GET TO SEE WEIRD OC ****
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on January 29, 2017
Omfa right?
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on January 29, 2017
I'm going to narnia in august pls pls pls mom
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on January 29, 2017
Oh shit you agreed lmao
Yeah @Crazy_Otaku_Bitch and I like to fruk around with those two Ocs a lot
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on January 29, 2017
Ikr lolololol
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on January 29, 2017
Oh my....you did...?
I'm so sorry you read that utter bullcrap lolol
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on January 29, 2017
I saw another story based on your two countries
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on January 29, 2017
YAAAAAAAAS YAS YAS YAS
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Eh?
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Hm....
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on January 28, 2017
It's great
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on January 28, 2017
Are you sure? I'm not sure if it's good enough
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on January 28, 2017
Yep I love it ^^
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on January 28, 2017
The story is good??
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on January 28, 2017
It's okay dude the story is great but it's fine that you aren't that good at spelling ^^
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on January 28, 2017
NON I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FAIRLY NICE THIS TIME
GODDAMMIT
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on January 28, 2017
You have some errors so I'll have to fix them but I'm too lazy tonight
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on January 28, 2017
SHIT WHAT DSIEAOEHUFAERFERGARGHEDF
ESU;FHWESFG GOD DAMN IT I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FINE THIS TIME
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on January 28, 2017
WAIT WOT
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on January 28, 2017
Yep just let me correct spelling tomorrow morning
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on January 28, 2017
Is it good?
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