No this is bad

No this is bad

Northern and Southern Narnia were basically harmless. They hardly ever got into a fight, and if they did, it was nothing huge. There was only one war between them, but it was never spoken of. Other than that, they never had to fight in a war with another country, there was never a need. There is a need now.

published on January 28, 2017not completed

Chapter Ten

"Good night?...It's daytime..She's lost it." South concluded as she threw the device back to the German, who caught it without any problems. "Permission to speak?" He asked, South looked up at him, her eyebrows knitted together as her upper lip slightly moved up, she waved her hand in a "why" motion. "Granted?" She finally said after some time, not understanding why she had to tell him that he could speak. "Thank you, Sir. It seems as if North has found a camp, but died trying to escape, maybe we should wait for her return, or go out and find her." He said, South laughed, hard. To the confusion of many. They were allies, were they not? No one seemed to notice, but small pieces of Souths hair turned into a lighter brown then her usually dark, almost black, brown hair.
"She's fine, just forget she existed until she comes back, got it? We are not going out to find her, it's her fault she died." She hummed as she turned around. "We attack China and Japans camp when the sun reaches it highest point, understood?" South said, slightly looking behind her, Eberhardt placed his hand over his forehead, saluting. "Understood." South smiled as she looked around the camp. Shame, I wish we were back at the castle, that'd be much better then this bullshit. But no, oh no, Germany had to start this shit. What's with him? I could have been playing the violin, or maybe even be sleeping, but no. South thought as she stretched out her arms, then dropped them by her side.
Her leg still slightly hurt still from the bullet, but her ax wounds have healed. What even happened to North? She obviously got into a fight with a country, no human could kill a country like that. Whatever, she'll get back up in the next few hours, maybe even ten or more. Who ever had killed her, couldn't have of made it so she couldn't return soon. It's not like she was killed by Russia. South chuckled.
The sun has risen at its highest point, and the troops were prepared for the attack. It was decided that this would be short, and quick. They would surprise them, kill off as many as possible, and then return quickly. "I am not losing a shit ton of men." South growled as she finished cleaning her gun. She shoved the dirty, white cloth into her pocket and stood up. "Alright, let's do this shit." The honey eye coloured girl said as she stepped outside of her tent, and into the warmth of the sun. She looked up at the bright blue sky, clouds covered only small parts of it, the soft breeze, the brightness and warmth of the sun. South closed her eyes and took a deep breath, smelling dirt and grass. And sweat. She opened her eyes and looked at the woman in front of her. "Are you ready, Sir?" South remembered her, she was the girl North yelled at when they came back from the first battle.
"Ja, I'm ready."
It was unexpected, to everyone. The moment the Narnians charged in, was the moment the Chinese and Japanese soldiers began to shoot and attack. Souths eyes widened. "How did they know." South asked herself as she shot a Chinese soldier in the leg, who was trying to stab her in the stomach with a long sword. Her confusion clouded her mind enough to confuse her to kill the human soldiers. She shot down ten men and women as she made her way over to China and Japan, who were apparently going to fight together. South ignored the sounds of the battle going on, she was upset and angry. The sounds of tree branches being snapped along with bones, the gun shots, the sound of metal clashing against metal, the screaming and crying. All went in on ear, and out the other to the brown haired, fuming nation. She shot another man down as she dodged Japans katana.
"How did you know!?" South hissed as she jumped back, avoiding China's knife. The blade was beautifully carved and sharpened. South had to say so. She kept on asking questions on how they knew that the Narnians were coming, but never go a response. They didn't even talk, like Denmark had. No jokes were said, no teasing, not even a mutter under their breaths. South managed to get a shot into China's leg. South wasn't shocked when he brushed it off after giving a small wince. He was over four thousand years old, he has been through more pain then anyone else in the world. His pain tolerance was extraordinary. The girl wasn't shocked either when China landed many hits to her, as Japan did few. The taste of blood filled Souths mouth when Japan somehow lunged forward and impaled her stomach.
The crimson liquid seeped through her lips, her narrowed eyes stared into Japans dark, soulless seeming eyes. She purposely coughed, causing her blood to splatter over his face and onto his white uniform, which was slightly bloody due to a few of her bullets. Japan jumped back, allowing the wound to spill out blood. The pain was bearable, but hardly. She held up her armed arm and shot at Japan, straight in the chest, only to have a Japanese soldier take the bullet instead. South watched as he fell to the ground, blood falling out of his chest and onto the grass. Her eyes widened. I just killed a man, a man, not a nation. She couldn't breath, her senses coming back to her. I killed many men, and women...how could I. As she was thinking, China decided that it was a great time to stab this knife through her chest, she was distracted by her thoughts. South allowed it, but not so simply. She spat the blood that filled her mouth into China's brown hair, causing a shutter.
Due to him being disgusted, he was detracted. South knew her heart was pierced, but held on a little longer. Her pistol was raised and aimed at his heart. Just as he tried to pull away, South latched her arm around him, holding her other pistol out at Japan, who tried to help China. If he moved a muscle, he was to be shot in the head, and he knew that all too well. South smirked as Japan tried to come up with a plan, China on the other hand, was digging his knife deeper into the other nations chest. "Just die." He hissed in her ear, South shuttered, hating the feeling of someone speaking directly into her ear. South pulled the trigger to the gun pointing at Japan, who easily dodged it by ducking. He tried to lunge forward as he did before, but stopped. She is using him as a shield...if I even try to hurt her, she will either shoot him, or I will hurt him. Japan widened his eyes.
I need to do something! She can't hold me forever, she was just shot in the leg by one of out soldiers, has stab wounds everywhere, she should fall! I have to do something and fast. China retracted his hand, leaving the knife in her chest. He shuttered once he heard another shot, her arm slightly moved back from the force of the shot. He quickly maned up, and plunged two fingers into her stomach wound. It immediately caused her to scream and grow weak at the legs. China cringed at the feeling of her warm blood soaking his hand, and sleeves. Japan took the opportunity and grabbed China by the ponytail, yanking him back, which caused him to fall to the ground, loosing his breath.
South covered her stomach area, her sleeves being soaked to the point of dripping blood in only seconds. She stumbled back, and screamed when a bullet went through her arm. The pain ripped through her body. This is too much..I can't breath. She looked at the once green ground, it was now a muddy red colour, the puddle around her slowly grew when she coughed up the warm blood onto the ground. The sounds of the battle surrounding her came back to her, registering. She looked at the two Asian countries, they were standing and prepared to attack if she even dared to move. Japans uniform was stained red in some places which had holes. China's green uniform looked brown in some places. They had no emotion in their eyes, they didn't care on what they did, as long as they won. South stepped back, tripping over a Chinese soldiers body. Her tailbone slammed against the dirt, to her great dismay.
The pain was growing worse and worse, her black uniform shone in the sun a dark red. The heat was slowly making her sick, the smell of blood as well as the taste. She tried to scream retreat, but her voice had left her. She scooted back, her sore tailbone rubbing against the ground. Japan sheathed his katana, knowing that she was trying to run back. China, however, walked up her her, his left leg was limping ever so slightly. South covered her mouth, blood seeping through her tan hand. Her eyes widened when China crouched in front of her. His expression was blank as he reached forward, and yanked his knife out of her chest, causing that wound to begin to pour blood out like a fallen paint bucket. The Chinese man cringed slightly when she made a deafeningly loud scream.
Her voice finally came back, hoarse and wet from blood, but loud. "Retreat! F*cking go back!" She shouted as she tried to stand, but had the help of a frantic Northern soldier who picked her up and carried her away. China watched as they all disappeared back behind the trees. Japan walked next to him, leaned down, and picked up a dirty white cloth, and handed it to China, who took it and sneered. South grinded her teeth together. "Shit." Was all she could say, her hand covering her stomach went limp, dangling to the side. She found herself staring into the sky, finding it calming. The birds flying above of them, the fluffy, white clouds slowly being pushed by a light breeze. She slightly smiled, and closed her eyes.
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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on May 26, 2017
this is a really good story
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You like it? : D
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yes it's so awesome :)
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on March 19, 2017
Yas
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The new chapter for Sun and Moon is awesome dude
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Liiiiiiies
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on March 11, 2017
It isssss
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on March 11, 2017
Not really
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on March 11, 2017
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on March 11, 2017
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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on March 06, 2017
I feel like I nailed China's part XD
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on March 06, 2017
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on March 06, 2017
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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on March 06, 2017
Cool story
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Grazie
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 28, 2017
WOWOWOWOWWOWOWOWOW
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on February 25, 2017
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
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on February 25, 2017
YEYEYEYEYEYEYYEYEYE
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It took forever and I noticed that the castle didn't even get nuked for the first time so I sped it up a bit XD
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S A LEGIT COMPLIMENT
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on February 25, 2017
Yay ^^ I made your 2p come out for a small bit
Prussia can cure the 2p cause he's so awesome
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
I can't tell if this is sarcasm or legit
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on February 25, 2017
Damn legit?
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOOD
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
This is utter amazingness! Also, I think your writing has improved a lot since, say, the SMIH story. (Not that it was bad then, it was great! It's just BETTER now. ^^) Seriously, this is perfection!
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Grazie
Yeah I noticed that I got way better in my writing
Which is why when someone reads one of my old stories I immediately cringe and say "Why don't you wait on that until I fix all of that..."
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on February 03, 2017
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on February 03, 2017
I'm typing a new chapter now
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on February 03, 2017
Yup. :3
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on February 03, 2017
Legit? :D
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on February 03, 2017
Well, I still think your old stories are good. Actually, I think your Black Butler SMIH story is one of my favorites overall on this site. ^^
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on February 02, 2017
Amazing!
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Ah.....it...is??????
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Search for Donald trump and see some protest cr*p
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on January 29, 2017
Lolol
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on January 29, 2017
AND QFEAST PROTEST S***
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on January 29, 2017
XD Lmao They are very weird indeed XD
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on January 29, 2017
IKR IKR IKR WE GET TO SEE WEIRD OC ****
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on January 29, 2017
Omfa right?
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on January 29, 2017
I'm going to narnia in august pls pls pls mom
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on January 29, 2017
Oh shit you agreed lmao
Yeah @Crazy_Otaku_Bitch and I like to fruk around with those two Ocs a lot
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on January 29, 2017
Ikr lolololol
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on January 29, 2017
Oh my....you did...?
I'm so sorry you read that utter bullcrap lolol
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on January 29, 2017
I saw another story based on your two countries
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on January 29, 2017
YAAAAAAAAS YAS YAS YAS
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Eh?
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Hm....
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on January 28, 2017
It's great
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on January 28, 2017
Are you sure? I'm not sure if it's good enough
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on January 28, 2017
Yep I love it ^^
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on January 28, 2017
The story is good??
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on January 28, 2017
It's okay dude the story is great but it's fine that you aren't that good at spelling ^^
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on January 28, 2017
NON I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FAIRLY NICE THIS TIME
GODDAMMIT
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on January 28, 2017
You have some errors so I'll have to fix them but I'm too lazy tonight
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on January 28, 2017
SHIT WHAT DSIEAOEHUFAERFERGARGHEDF
ESU;FHWESFG GOD DAMN IT I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FINE THIS TIME
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on January 28, 2017
WAIT WOT
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on January 28, 2017
Yep just let me correct spelling tomorrow morning
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on January 28, 2017
Is it good?
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