No this is bad

No this is bad

Northern and Southern Narnia were basically harmless. They hardly ever got into a fight, and if they did, it was nothing huge. There was only one war between them, but it was never spoken of. Other than that, they never had to fight in a war with another country, there was never a need. There is a need now.

published on January 28, 2017not completed

Chapter Twelve

That night, they allowed Prussia to spend the night in their tent. He slept in the middle though, just in case there was to be an attack. The rain wasn't as light as South expected, she could hardly hear a thing over the strong winds and the pouring rain. She was half worried that the grounds would flood. That was a problem in Narnia, the weather. Mudslides, avalanches, storms so large it could and would destroy many homes, and more. Thinking she would never fall asleep, she began to silently count sheep. She soon fell asleep after trying to relax. North, on the other hand, couldn't sleep. She hardly ever did, even in the castle. The sounds of the storm outside slightly calmed her, as did holding Prussia. She slept on the far left, so she held the former nation, as he slept in the middle, so he held South.
North listened to the harsh blowing winds, and heavy rain. She wrapped her arms tighter around the past country and sighed as she nuzzled her head in his hair. Her hair was pulled into a tight bun, so it wouldn't be so hard to brush with her fingers in the morning. She listened to the soft breathing of the two people laying in front of her. One was slow, and relaxed. As the other was quick and short. North could feel Prussia's body move, and concluded that he was the soft breathing, as South was the rapid. She always did breath quick. North thought as she sighed. Accidentally causing Prussia to shutter. She slightly curled up, and looked up ever so slightly, sniffing the air. The smells of both the north and south flooded her nose. The smells of the mud and crops from the south, mixed with the pine and coal of the north.
It was calming. Soothing even. For a moment, only for a moment, North had forgotten that they were in war, and thought that they have been camping. Only for a moment. The white haired girl almost took another sniff, but jumped back when Prussia sneezed. She sat up, her mouth covered with her hand to keep from screaming. She watched as he slowly sat up himself, trying to not wake up South. Which was almost impossible, once she was asleep, there was no waking her. "Why are you awake?" North whispered when Prussia realized that they were both up. He looked over at Gilbird, who was peacefully resting in a small pile of unused bandages. "I sneezed." He whispered back, she tilted her head, small pieces of her hair getting in her face. "You sneezed yourself awake?" She asked, he smirked as he looked at her, even in the dark, she slightly see his crimson eyes.
"I'm bored of sleeping." North blinked many times, and slowly inhaled as she placed her hand on her forehead, and exhaled. "You...were bored of sleeping...because you sneezed?" She heard him nod and slightly shook her head. "No matter how long we hang out, you always somehow have something new to say that makes me question everything." She muttered, Prussia softly laughed. "You shouldn't be surprised anymore." He said, both of them jumped when a flash of extreamly bright lightning lit up the area. It was so bright, Prussia could make out the slight green in Norths eyes, he didn't question it out loud. A loud crack of thunder followed, to the enjoyment of North.
"I love storms." She said as she slightly leaned forward, and ever so slightly opened the flap of the tent. Looking out into the stormy night. The rain was pouring down like buckets. It was madness, you couldn't even see the other tents surrounding them. North slightly moved over when Prussia also tried to look outside. They stared out into the darkness. Occasionally, the land would be lit up by lightning. "Hey...did...did you see that?" Prussia asked, he could have sworn he saw someone in the shadows of the trees. North squinted. "Non, I don't have my contacts in." She said, squinting as hard as she could. "Is that why your eyes are slightly green?" Prussia asked, only to get a confused noise in return.
"There!" Prussia said, pointing to the trees, North slightly shook her head. "I can't see anything. You should know this." She said as she stuck her head back inside the tent, and regretted ever sticking it out. Her head was soaked, as was Prussia's. "What did you see?" She asked, he shrugged. "I don't know I'm blind too. Albinos have shit sight." He explained, North slumped her shoulders and waved her hand. "Then how did you see anything?" She asked, their voices still quiet. Prussia scratched his head. Wow is my hair that wet? I guess the rain is worse then I thought. Prussia then sat down Indian style. "Well it's not that hard to spot out white hair out when there is bright lightning." He said simply. North slightly leaned back. White hair? Only three nations had white hair. Herself, Prussia and....Iceland.
"Are you positive that it was white hair?" She asked, looking at him sharply, her never ending smile was faltering. "The awesome me is positive!" He said in his normal voice, the both of them tensed up and looked at South when she groaned and rolled over. Stealing the entire blanket in the process. Which made North sigh, she always does that. She turned her attention to Prussia once more. "Well...the only countries that have white hair are us, and Iceland." North said, forgetting that Prussia wasn't a country anymore. He didn't mind, he liked it when people thought he was still a nation. "Wait...you said..that you, even with your bad eyesight, could see him with the lightning, right?" North thought of something terrible when Prussia nodded.
"That means...he can see..that means, that he saw us. Right?" She said slowly, they stared at each other, then slowly looked at the flap of the tent. The wind caused it to move, not not enough to open it. The livid-green eyes darted to look at the deep red ones. "That's...unawesome." Prussia simply said, North nodded as she laid back down, and held open her arms. "South stole the blanket so looked like you're gonna be holding a caterpillar." She said, Prussia softly laughed his snake-like laugh as he laid down in the middle once more. Once he settled himself in between the two Narnians, he grabbed South and held her close, even though it was mainly him just holding a ball of blankets. North slithered her arms around him, and once again nuzzled in his now wet hair.
"You smell like beer, rain....and...cinnam- did you use my shampoo?" She mumbled, Prussia gave a small nervous laugh. "What? The awesome me would never use your shampoo for my awesome hair!" He said loudly, they both remained silent as South once against moved around in her sleep. "Well the 'awesome' you and shitface over there needs to shut their f*cking faces." South groaned as she rolled over, her back pressing against Prussia as she faced the tent wall. "Mission failed, we'll get em next time." North mocked a video game America's country made. "Shut..the f*ck up North, we are in...war, you can't joke." South muttered, only to get two albino idiots to start talking and joking about random things. The sounds of the storm were silenced by the sounds of soft laughing and jokes.
Prussia and North even forgot about the possibility of Iceland spying on them. South was miserable, she just wanted to sleep but no. She is sharing a tent with two insomniacs. She silently cursed everything, her brown hair was in her face. But it wasn't that brown anymore. Almost half of it was blonde. She did enjoy hearing Prussia's voice again though, she just wished it was Neverland. The Narnian's little brother. North and South weren't related, but they took care of Neverland when they found him, so he just called them both of them his sisters. He didn't care. Of course Neverland knew about the war, why else would the Queen and King be retreated to his island? North may have been his sister as well, but South had a stronger connection to the small boy then her.
She missed him. The last time he came to visit was almost a full year ago. It was November now. She missed having someone to cook for, that could rightfully stay in the kitchen and not blow up whatever she is cooking just by being there. South narrowed her eyes as she cursed Norths name. Souths eyes softened when she imagined Neverland once more. She missed her little brother. You know you could win this war and see him. A thought entered her mind, without her thinking. What? She asked herself, and listened to her thoughts. You could win this war, I said. The thought replied. South was baffled. A thought, was speaking to her directly. I'm not a thought. South shook her head, she knew who it was. It was her 2p. She remembered the voice. The voice that always tried to break her, always tried to make South say those two words.
Just let me out. Her 2p cooed, South shook her head. Leave me alone. She thought, only to hear the insane laugh, the laugh she never wanted to hear again. Oh come on, you want to see Neverland don't you? The 2p pushed it's way deeper into Souths thoughts. You snapped his neck in the Civil War. South hissed, the laugh was louder this time. Yes, but it helped our cause. The blonde 2p spoke gently, trying to sweet talk her way. We have to do what is right. And what is right at the moment, is winning. You want your country to prosper don't you? You want to be a country still, don't you? You don't want to end up like poor Prussia, or even poor Holy Roman Empire, now do you? South listened to the soft speaking 2p, and shook her head. Then let me out, allow me to take over. I've almost broken out already, just let me completely free. And this war, is won. You shall see your Queen and King and Neverland once more. Just, say, I Accept.
Her thoughts were interrupted when both Prussia and North were trying to get her attention. "There is something we need to tell you." North whispered as she shook Souths arm. South closed her eyes and slightly curled up. North was leaning over Prussia's body to shake her more. "We have unawesome news about Ice-" He was cut off when South shot up, untangling herself from the blankets, and shoved the two of them back forcefully.
She reopened her eyes, and glared at the two of them. Her hair was fully blonde, and her eyes were now a bright red. North widened her eyes, as did Prussia. They knew this person all too well. "Oh will you two just shut up!" South shouted harshly, then plopped back down. She listened as they moved back and sighed happily when they finally stopped talking. Idiots, they will get killed out here. And I'm not going to help them. As long as this war is over with quickly.
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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on May 26, 2017
this is a really good story
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You like it? : D
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yes it's so awesome :)
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on March 19, 2017
Yas
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The new chapter for Sun and Moon is awesome dude
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Liiiiiiies
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on March 11, 2017
It isssss
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on March 11, 2017
Not really
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on March 11, 2017
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on March 06, 2017
I feel like I nailed China's part XD
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on March 06, 2017
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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on March 06, 2017
Cool story
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Grazie
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
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on February 25, 2017
YEYEYEYEYEYEYYEYEYE
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It took forever and I noticed that the castle didn't even get nuked for the first time so I sped it up a bit XD
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S A LEGIT COMPLIMENT
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on February 25, 2017
Yay ^^ I made your 2p come out for a small bit
Prussia can cure the 2p cause he's so awesome
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on February 25, 2017
I can't tell if this is sarcasm or legit
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on February 25, 2017
Damn legit?
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOOD
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on February 25, 2017
This is utter amazingness! Also, I think your writing has improved a lot since, say, the SMIH story. (Not that it was bad then, it was great! It's just BETTER now. ^^) Seriously, this is perfection!
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Grazie
Yeah I noticed that I got way better in my writing
Which is why when someone reads one of my old stories I immediately cringe and say "Why don't you wait on that until I fix all of that..."
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on February 03, 2017
I'm typing a new chapter now
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on February 03, 2017
Yup. :3
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on February 03, 2017
Legit? :D
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on February 03, 2017
Well, I still think your old stories are good. Actually, I think your Black Butler SMIH story is one of my favorites overall on this site. ^^
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on February 02, 2017
Amazing!
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Ah.....it...is??????
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Search for Donald trump and see some protest cr*p
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on January 29, 2017
Lolol
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on January 29, 2017
AND QFEAST PROTEST S***
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on January 29, 2017
XD Lmao They are very weird indeed XD
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on January 29, 2017
IKR IKR IKR WE GET TO SEE WEIRD OC ****
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on January 29, 2017
Omfa right?
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on January 29, 2017
I'm going to narnia in august pls pls pls mom
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on January 29, 2017
Oh shit you agreed lmao
Yeah @Crazy_Otaku_Bitch and I like to fruk around with those two Ocs a lot
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on January 29, 2017
Ikr lolololol
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on January 29, 2017
Oh my....you did...?
I'm so sorry you read that utter bullcrap lolol
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on January 29, 2017
I saw another story based on your two countries
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on January 29, 2017
YAAAAAAAAS YAS YAS YAS
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Eh?
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Hm....
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on January 28, 2017
It's great
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on January 28, 2017
Are you sure? I'm not sure if it's good enough
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on January 28, 2017
Yep I love it ^^
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on January 28, 2017
The story is good??
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on January 28, 2017
It's okay dude the story is great but it's fine that you aren't that good at spelling ^^
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on January 28, 2017
NON I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FAIRLY NICE THIS TIME
GODDAMMIT
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on January 28, 2017
You have some errors so I'll have to fix them but I'm too lazy tonight
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on January 28, 2017
SHIT WHAT DSIEAOEHUFAERFERGARGHEDF
ESU;FHWESFG GOD DAMN IT I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FINE THIS TIME
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on January 28, 2017
WAIT WOT
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on January 28, 2017
Yep just let me correct spelling tomorrow morning
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on January 28, 2017
Is it good?
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