No this is bad

No this is bad

Northern and Southern Narnia were basically harmless. They hardly ever got into a fight, and if they did, it was nothing huge. There was only one war between them, but it was never spoken of. Other than that, they never had to fight in a war with another country, there was never a need. There is a need now.

published on January 28, 2017not completed

Chapter One

No one spoke. The room was soundless, even the outside world seemed silent. Just about one hundred people in that room, the room that once had so much going on at once, and there wasn't a sound. No paper shuffling, no sneezing, no moving in the chairs. No noise was made, everyone was staring blankly at each other.
"It's all our fault." Someone finally spoke.
It was long ago, back in 2025, that the war broke out. It wasn't a normal war, no. It wasn't like WWI and II were. It was most of the countries, against one.
"Oi! If you would all shut up and listen-" Northern Narnia spoke, but was cut off by Southern Narnia. The Narnian's. Two of the most harmless nations. Neither of them ever went into war with another country. Once, they fought against each other. But that was never spoken of, no one dared to remind them of the horrors. They did workout every now and then just in case someone started war, but rarely. They never thought they would have to fight anyone besides a small fist fight. Nothing serious. "No one wants to listen to your theory that art can stop fighting." South interrupted. North glared her blue-grey eyes at her, but backed down.
They weren't strong, nor weak. They never really tried to fight, seeing how peaceful Narnia was. There was only one war between the North and South, but again no one dared to remind them. "I was only trying to calm everyone down." North muttered under her breath, South ignored her.
They were seated in regular dark wood chairs, with rough red cushion on the back and seat. Nothing special, no interesting deign, to their dismay. South rested her elbows on the large wooden table, and placed her chin in one open palm. Her expression was bored and tired. It was late afternoon in Spain, where the World Meeting was taking place. The room was hot, to North and Canada's distress. The light of the sun beamed into the room, and the smells of the farm land outside wavered inside. Not that anyone seemed to mind. Everyone was still bursting with energy, how? North and South would question, but never knew. North slightly tilted her head as she witnessed the personification of France and England fighting once more.
"That's the fifth time in under an hour. They broke their record." South whispered, North nodded, her smile plastered on her lips, never leaving. It was almost impossible to make her frown. As for South, if she was touched unexpectedly, she would let out a scream and frown, easily.
The room was in chaos. Bullet holes in every wall, two shattered windows, some chairs didn't even look like chairs anymore, plants were crushed on the ground, the flowers that once looked so nice on the table were gone and smashed on the floor. Everywhere you looked, someone was either going to be hurt or killed, or already was hurt or killed. Australia was shoved out the first window that shattered thirty minutes ago. He still hasn't shown back up. Hungary was smacking every living, breathing soul in that room with her frying pan, successfully knocking out at least five other nations. Southern Narnia averted her gaze from Belarus and Denmark fist fighting in the corner of the room and looked at America with her amber coloured eyes.
"There he goes again..I bet you five dollars that he's going to say-" South was speaking to North, at the same time, both her and America pointed their thumbs at their chest, and loudly said, "I'm the hero!"
North softly sighed as she lifted herself up off the uncomfortable chair. "I'm going to leave early, it just looks like we've wasted another meeting." She said pushing her white hair behind her ear, only for it to fall back in her face. "You can't, England will slaughter you for leaving early again." South said, vividly remembering the last time they left early, slightly shuttering. "Well it's not like they need us anyways." North said as she grabbed her bag and pushed in her chair.
"Nobody likes us here, and nobody wants us here. As far as we know."
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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on May 26, 2017
this is a really good story
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You like it? : D
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yes it's so awesome :)
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on March 20, 2017
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on March 19, 2017
Yas
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Ye
The new chapter for Sun and Moon is awesome dude
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Liiiiiiies
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on March 11, 2017
It isssss
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on March 11, 2017
Not really
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on March 11, 2017
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on March 11, 2017
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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on March 06, 2017
I feel like I nailed China's part XD
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on March 06, 2017
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on March 06, 2017
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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on March 06, 2017
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on March 06, 2017
Cool story
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Grazie
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on February 28, 2017
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on February 28, 2017
WOWOWOWOWWOWOWOWOW
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on February 25, 2017
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
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on February 25, 2017
YEYEYEYEYEYEYYEYEYE
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It took forever and I noticed that the castle didn't even get nuked for the first time so I sped it up a bit XD
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S A LEGIT COMPLIMENT
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on February 25, 2017
Yay ^^ I made your 2p come out for a small bit
Prussia can cure the 2p cause he's so awesome
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
I can't tell if this is sarcasm or legit
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on February 25, 2017
Damn legit?
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on February 25, 2017
IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOOD
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
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on February 25, 2017
This is utter amazingness! Also, I think your writing has improved a lot since, say, the SMIH story. (Not that it was bad then, it was great! It's just BETTER now. ^^) Seriously, this is perfection!
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Grazie
Yeah I noticed that I got way better in my writing
Which is why when someone reads one of my old stories I immediately cringe and say "Why don't you wait on that until I fix all of that..."
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on February 03, 2017
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on February 03, 2017
I'm typing a new chapter now
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on February 03, 2017
Yup. :3
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on February 03, 2017
Legit? :D
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on February 03, 2017
Well, I still think your old stories are good. Actually, I think your Black Butler SMIH story is one of my favorites overall on this site. ^^
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on February 02, 2017
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on February 02, 2017
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on February 02, 2017
Amazing!
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Ah.....it...is??????
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Search for Donald trump and see some protest cr*p
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on January 29, 2017
Lolol
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on January 29, 2017
AND QFEAST PROTEST S***
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on January 29, 2017
XD Lmao They are very weird indeed XD
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on January 29, 2017
IKR IKR IKR WE GET TO SEE WEIRD OC ****
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on January 29, 2017
Omfa right?
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on January 29, 2017
I'm going to narnia in august pls pls pls mom
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on January 29, 2017
Oh shit you agreed lmao
Yeah @Crazy_Otaku_Bitch and I like to fruk around with those two Ocs a lot
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on January 29, 2017
Ikr lolololol
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on January 29, 2017
Oh my....you did...?
I'm so sorry you read that utter bullcrap lolol
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on January 29, 2017
I saw another story based on your two countries
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on January 29, 2017
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on January 29, 2017
YAAAAAAAAS YAS YAS YAS
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Eh?
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Hm....
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on January 28, 2017
It's great
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on January 28, 2017
Are you sure? I'm not sure if it's good enough
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on January 28, 2017
Yep I love it ^^
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on January 28, 2017
The story is good??
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on January 28, 2017
It's okay dude the story is great but it's fine that you aren't that good at spelling ^^
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on January 28, 2017
NON I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FAIRLY NICE THIS TIME
GODDAMMIT
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on January 28, 2017
You have some errors so I'll have to fix them but I'm too lazy tonight
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on January 28, 2017
SHIT WHAT DSIEAOEHUFAERFERGARGHEDF
ESU;FHWESFG GOD DAMN IT I THOUGHT I ACTUALLY DID FINE THIS TIME
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on January 28, 2017
WAIT WOT
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on January 28, 2017
Yep just let me correct spelling tomorrow morning
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on January 28, 2017
Is it good?
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