Darkness Falls (1)

Darkness Falls (1)

Skittle Aradito has a hard life. She has no friends, is hated by everyone and, worst of all, she is bullied by Casper Arterton, the most popular boy in school. Casper thinks he is all that, and tries to make Skittle's life a misery in every way possible, to make her tragic life even more tragic. When she goes to high school, she meets her English teacher, Mr Winter, who helps her through her tragic life. But when changes come to Skittle's life, things take a turn for the worse, and she has to find a way to get through.

published on July 12, 2014completed

Chapter 5 - I Guess This Is Goodbye

Chapter 5 - I Guess This Is Goodbye Once Skittle heard those words, her whole world was shattered to pieces. Her best friend Tara, her other half, her only friend, was leaving her. If Tara was gone, who would she play with at playtime in the schoolyard? All the other children her age despised her and wouldn't go anywhere near her, and when they did, it was usually to mock her.
Skittle burst into tears and ran out of the classroom, slamming the door behind her.
"Skittle, where are you going?" the teacher called after her, but she took no notice.
She stormed into the girls' bathroom, locked herself in a cubicle and let all her emotions out. She cried quietly, but she had almost used up a whole toilet roll with her tears. Then suddenly Skittle heard a voice.
"Skittle, are you okay in there?"
It was Tara. The teacher had obviously sent her to look for her.
"Go away!" the eight-year-old girl sobbed.
"But, Skittle..." Tara started.
"No! You left me! And now I'm going to have to be on my own for the rest of my life!"
"But, Skittle, you don't understand. I don't want to move to the countryside."
"Yes, but you are doing. And you can't change that."
Skittle then stormed out of the cubicle and back into the classroom.
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This story made me cry, but it was good. I feel bad for Skittle. And if your life is like that, I feel bad for you. T.T I think Skittle haunts the school now.
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on January 31, 2016
So sad!:((:((
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on July 26, 2015
This is the scariest and most terrifying story I ever read, the 2 main reasons are that they involved;
school with out friend and with bullies, and cauze it's not fiction so in real life
It's also a awesome story and hope you'll make more stories but with a bit more fiction.
5 stars though ^-^
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on April 09, 2015
I read it from 9:55 PM to 11:40PM without stopping! It was so amazing!
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DEFINETALY 5 STARS OR 100! <3
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on February 12, 2015
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on February 12, 2015
:(( This is so sad!! But it's so well written!
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on January 16, 2015
....
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This so much like my life...my entire life was literally just written right here...
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I know that. We obviously have pretty much the same lives
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on December 22, 2014
But this is my life story. My literal autobiography. I just gave everyone different names.
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on December 22, 2014
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on December 22, 2014
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on December 22, 2014
Cr*p, what a lovely bedtime story. I actually cried at one point.
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Blo*dy hell, your school is generous.
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Not a lot of the time. It's horrific.
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on December 19, 2014
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on December 19, 2014
I can now say that I have written an award-winning story, because Darkness Falls won the story writing competition today and I got a trophy and a trip to meet famous authors.
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@PrincessToast

But I don't think you've seen the wall post about what happened on the trip. It was absolutely horrible. The teacher brought 20 other people on the trip who hadn't done anything at all. On the way there in the coach, I was forced to sit in a spare seat in a cramped area next to the door, and everyone else got proper seats, even though I was the See More
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on December 19, 2014
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on December 19, 2014
... :(( :(( :(( :((
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Aww. ;_; This is a shortened version of a true story up until I meet Mr Winter, except that nine friends actually left me and a lot more happened before that.
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It's okay. :/
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on October 06, 2014
I'M SO SORRY!!!! :(( :(( :((
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
FINALLY FINISHED! Phew!!! I loveeee it! I found a new bedtime story >.< Though, it was sad :c
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Thanks! :D
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on August 23, 2014
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on August 23, 2014
Amazing :((:((
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Thank you! :D
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The sequel will take about two months.
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on July 29, 2014
I NEED THE SEQUEL I NEED THE SEQUEL
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on July 29, 2014
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on July 29, 2014
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on July 29, 2014
I just finished. At least someone cared for Skittle!
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Yeah, Skittle is a representation of me and Mr Winter is a representation of my favourite teacher. This story was a true story up until the part where Skittle starts visiting him at breaktime. And glad you enjoyed it! :D
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
That was so saddddddddd :((
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I know. :((
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 13, 2014
so sad Good work
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on July 13, 2014
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