Alexis version: Everything Wrong With.

Alexis version: Everything Wrong With.

Yes I made an everything wrong with story because I'm to lazy to use my voice for videos.

published on March 18, 2015not completed

Everything Wrong With Sonic And The Secret Rings.

Everything Wrong With Sonic And The Secret Rings. 1. "Sleeping with reading material on face" cliché.
2. The fact that Shara sounds like Wave.
3. How DARE you say that Aladdin isn't the best.
4. Erazor Djinn's name.
5. How would the Erazor be teleported to Sonic's world? I know there's a reason Sonic has to care except its false. If Erazor did erase the story he'd basically commit suicide.
6. "Only you can do it" cliché.
7. How would a ring shock him? Especially if he's wearing gloves.
8. That contract lies. You do NOTHING to protect him you worthless genie.
9. Sonic asks for only a few hankerchiefs but gets a whole mountain.
10. Erazor (like many people in Sonic) is apparently blind and can't tell that Sonic is Hedgehog.
11. Sonic should work for Cinemasins.
12. That joke was stupid, Sonic.
13. Seven World Rings = Chaos Emerald Rip Offs.
14. Why does Shara have to pay Erazor anyway?
15. Do you really think he believes they don't exsist.
16. "Your life is forfeit" cliché.
17. Why do some of the characters in the story look like people that Sonic know?
18. You seriously forgot your guards were there Egghead?
19. The fact that Tails is Aladdin.
20. Doesn't mean you can't try to help Shara. (I don't care if I've been saying her name wrong.)
21. "Promise" cliché.
22. Why did the ring shock Sonic? Again.
23. Sonic uses logic by using the jet stream.
24. Sonic 06 and Sonic Boom would like a word with you Sonic.
25. The chant that Erazor says when summoning the fire demon has been repeated both in 06 and in Black Knight but with differences.
26. Does this Iblis count as copying or foreshadowing? I think its copying so I'll go with that.
27. "Its no use" cliché.
28. Sonic went to the Shadow school of using chaos control to stop time.
29. Knuckles is smart.
30. Its true how right Knuckles is.
31. Splashing water on the Iblis? Now why didn't I think of that? -_-
32. Did they really have to capital: Enough?
33. Why didn't Sonic get that same emotion effect with the first ring?
34. I'm taking off a sin since Sonic said "hell".
35. How does that time bomb work?
36. How does Sonic know what light feels like?
37. The moon shouldn't be that close.
38. Sonic Twister ex machine.
39. Also Sonic is an airbender.
40. Shara doesn't have to listen to Erazor.
41. "I have no choice" cliché.
42. "I just want to be back with him" cliché.
43. Third game where they make us think that Sonic is gonna die.
44. Erazor's final form is stupid.
45. Sonic's form in this game.
46. I KNEW GENIES WERE IMMORTAL! SHARA YOU LIER!
47. "I am immortal" cliché.
48. "I cannot be destroyed" cliché.
49. Pixie dust brings Shara to life.
50. Also he gave Shara a second chance after he betrayed her?!
51. "We can start over again" cliché.
52. "The world is mine" cliché.
53. "Something used in the beginning will be used at the end" cliché.
Total sin: 52.
Sentence: Handkerchiefs pile higher than Everest. (The wish.)
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"WHERE'S THE BLACKSMITH?!"
The most obvious Markiplier reference ever...
LOVE IT!
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on February 03, 2017
Sonic Lost World, sin 42.
Well, she may as well be Elsa if this is now Frozen, amirite?
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on June 21, 2015
Also, Sonic Generations.
Tails doesn't even KNOW Green Hill cuz it's the very first stage in the very first game.
Tails didn't make an appearance in the 2nd game, and that was EMERALD Hill.
Minus a sin from Sonic Generations.
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Yes he does since he's been there in Sonic and the dark brother hood, and in the end of Sonic generations classic Sonic AND classic Tails BOTH enter the enterance to green hill.
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Its Sonic lore, no one is suppose to understand it.
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on September 11, 2015
...
I NEVER UNDERSTOOD THAT!!!!
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on September 11, 2015
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on September 11, 2015
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on June 21, 2015
Wait wait wait...
CRUSH 40 QUIT?!?!?!
OH WELL F*CK YOU SEGA!!
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They didn't really quit, it was a joke.
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on June 21, 2015
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on June 21, 2015
It's bouytiful :3
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on March 20, 2015