All Wrapped Up

All Wrapped Up

Kara Nuni only wants one thing for Christmas: Sesa Okomota. He's everything she's ever wanted. Too bad she takes what she wants.

published on November 01, 2017completed

The Snap

The Snap Kara shuffled all the way home.
In the rain.
With a broken heart.
And a broken mind.

"H-he was supposed to be mine... He was supposed to marry me... Our kids names were supposed to be Jackie, Andy, and little Blu..." She mumbles, heart in a million pieces right now.

Then a thought crosses her mind.
"Maybe someone has seduced him..!" She clenches her fists, red, hot blood dripping onto the concrete and grass.
She feels herself fill up to the brim with pure, raw rage.

Then her eyes change to that of a snakes; slitted, and a glowing blood red.

She reared her head back and screamed into the rain, then ran the rest of the way home.

And her blood left the concrete black.
And the grass was dying quickly.

She would have her senpai.
One way or another.
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Where'd you get the pic for chapter 2? I can't steal it! XD
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on November 09, 2017
Is it the end?
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Hell no!
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Okay, (=ↀωↀ=)
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on November 08, 2017
Lol watch this insane shit
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on November 08, 2017
YAASSSS!!! ≧(´▽`)≦
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on November 08, 2017
Inhales*
WOOHOOO
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on November 08, 2017
Sits on edge of seat*
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on November 08, 2017
A 10!!! ♬♫♪◖(●。●)◗♪♫♬
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on November 08, 2017
I would give it.....
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on November 08, 2017
1-10, how good is it?
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on November 08, 2017
OH! That's great! I can't wait to read more
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on November 08, 2017
Its gonna be my first official novel! There's a lot more to it! I'm working on two chapters now!
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on November 08, 2017
So there will be a continuation?
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on November 08, 2017
It's just the beggining!
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on November 08, 2017
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on November 08, 2017
Oh damn. Plot twist. lit
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on November 06, 2017
*Is shocked*
SHE BE A PRINCESS!!!
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Le gasp
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X3 Yas!
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on November 06, 2017
As seen in other stories. XD
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on November 06, 2017
Oh well, you should never make Kara mad
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on November 06, 2017
A LOT of people
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on November 06, 2017
She is going to kill some peoples
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on November 06, 2017
And..?
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on November 06, 2017
YES I DID!!!
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on November 06, 2017
Why thank you! Did you read the newest chapter?~
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on November 06, 2017
Me too @fnafan15

And bravo @xXEmo_KingXx
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on November 06, 2017
Why, yes she is!~
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on November 06, 2017
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on November 04, 2017
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on November 03, 2017
The song fits!
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on November 02, 2017
I loved it! Congratz on the drawing too!
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How did you make it? @xXEmo_KingXx
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No problem!
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on November 02, 2017
Why, tank chu
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on November 02, 2017
Well, it works, cause the picture was really nice!
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on November 02, 2017
I have an app on my phone that let's me modify pictures.
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on November 02, 2017
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on November 02, 2017
Thanks!
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on November 02, 2017
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on November 02, 2017
Write more!! Plz! I'm in love with your stories! Plz write more!
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Done
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thank chu!
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on November 02, 2017
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