Chosen

Chosen

Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.

published on May 04, 2014completed

Silence

Silence AMETHYST'S POV

I was so relieved as I put the parachute on Airion. After that, we all touched down safely, thanks to Zane's earth. Airion was in no good condition. Dawn was still scared from the plane experience. "Never trust Airion with planes." I said. The council meeting was in sight. We pulled Airion behind the outdoor stage and I walked forth. "I'll explain, Airion's in no condition." I said. Just then Airion opened one eye. "I can do it." He said hoarsely. With Dawn's help, he got onto the stage, as a council member was explaining how it was better without the element controllers. They said with only four, leaders (them of course) who controlled elements, the world could be more balanced etc. etc. Then, Airion walked in the middle of the stage and took away the microphone. "They... Are lying!" He said. The crowd gasped. "Everyone can control an element. The only separate us because they are afraid!" Airion yelled. "Nonsense! A council man yelled back, but the crowd was listening to Airion. The Earth Council man made a giant stone pillar, taking Airion into the air. Airion laughed and made earth steps down, then he shot a blast of air at the council man.

ARIA'S POV

It had been a day after my duel or something like that. The Elementors where nowhere in sight. When I finally stepped out of my dorm for the first time since my duel, I was surprised. Everyone was frantically running around. "What's wrong?" I asked a random guy. "Air-Airion Brite is a monster!" He ran away quickly. "What?" I thought. I thought that was Dawn's boyfriend or something. I shrugged. I saw a girl. She looked around my age. She had blonde hair and really dark brown eyes. She stood in a dark corner watching all the people passing by. I guess she seemed lonely, so I walked up to her. She noticed me and stuttered. "Th-They left..." She said. "Who left?" I asked. " She laughed. "The Brites. And the others." She laughed. I stepped back and broke into a run.

AIRION'S POV

"We can change this!" I yelled. "We just need to get rid of them!" I pointed towards the council. Everyone looked at them. I looked at the crowd again. "If you think you can control an element, you can!" I yelled. I signaled at Zane. He threw the element pills at the crowd. They where caught and eaten. Everyone could now control an element for 10 minutes. I saw fire, water, wind, and earth. We all attacked the council. "Come on everyone!" I screamed. The council men where good. They used all their elements against us, parrying our attacks and all. Most of the people had run out of power at this point. I was drained.  Dawn was tired, hardly fighting off the Water council guy. Amethyst was gasping for breath along with Zane. I was the only person still fighting. All council men shot their elements at me, and I blocked it off with a purple flame. Then, they did it again, this time I wasn't quick enough. They where about an inch from my face when Amethyst jumped in front of me. Silence.
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Is anyone else reminded of Divergent?
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I wrote this before I knew divergent existed
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on September 29, 2014
not anymmore. its marked as completed
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on September 28, 2014
You know you can actually edit what's alredy there, right?
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on September 28, 2014
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on September 28, 2014
thanks! i'm gonna make an edited version that's longer and has no pov switches and is less cheesy
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on September 28, 2014
Wow. So basically you came up with a storyline as good as one that millions of people have read, that's really amazing. Great job! All the switching POVs are kind of confusing
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on September 28, 2014
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on September 28, 2014
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on September 28, 2014
-CHOSEN-
remembering Chosen with 72 readers, but only 20 chapters. Released's first chapter is in!

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yay!who thumbed this down btw
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on August 31, 2014
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on August 31, 2014
Awesome story! Though you might want to add some paragraph breaks in the first chapter ;)
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:3 thanks and yea
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
Love this story!
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Reply to comments here. You can even reply to replies, but it will look weird. Qfeasters have to get used to it.
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Ok then...
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on July 12, 2014
sorry. recording this
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on July 12, 2014
What? I'm confused
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on July 12, 2014
see?
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on July 12, 2014
Like this
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on July 12, 2014
I Loved the Whole Thing, its so fascinating and like a proper book. I hope you become an author when you become older because I would surely read your books
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Aww!! Thanks
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on June 30, 2014
Awesome
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on June 24, 2014
I really like this! This is pretty much exactly what I want in a book!
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Thanks :D
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Super cool! It was awese from the beginning!
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*awesome
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Thanks! :)
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on June 13, 2014
:D I hope you enjoyed it
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on June 08, 2014
Awesome!
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on June 04, 2014
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on May 31, 2014
I must say, that you had a amazing beginning makingdreaders(like me) want to read more, the chapters between were full of actions si readers didnt get bored. The chapters were quite long (which I like) and you also had a amazing finish
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My first ones are about my roleplay characters/my friends' characters, biographies, last known locations, that sort of thing. Then after I'm done with all that, I will be writing the roleplay out (Some character's names were forgotten, so I had to create new names for the forgotten ones, lol)
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on May 26, 2014
yay Magic is there!!! :D
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on May 26, 2014
amazing finish!
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on May 24, 2014
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on May 22, 2014
Honestly crystal, these are amazing!
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on May 22, 2014
Wow o_o Take me a couple of days to read then x
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on May 22, 2014
20 it think
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on May 21, 2014
How Many Chapters Is There Crystal? x
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on May 21, 2014
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on May 21, 2014
Amazin' x
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on May 21, 2014
:D anytime
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on May 20, 2014
^_^ Np
I'm just grateful that you added me in it etc
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on May 20, 2014
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on May 20, 2014
Nah its fine
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on May 20, 2014
Srry, just that sequels don't really get as much attention as the actual story
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on May 20, 2014
No sequel
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on May 20, 2014
WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE.A.SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SEQUEL TIME XD XD XD
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on May 19, 2014
Sometimes i did want to make a sequel, but meh
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on May 19, 2014
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