Chucky the pony doll

Chucky the pony doll

Ponies think that he's just a plain old toy, but he's a killer. Every filly in ponyville decreases to 1, 10 then 100's!

published on January 20, 2013not completed

He's in your nightmares!

It was a long day for the colts and they was still talking about the Murderer.

Jake: Hey guys, want to hear a story?
Ben: yeah!
Willis: oh boy.. not this again!

Jake stood on top of a tree stump and these are his words:
"One Night,  a couple was walking out from their date. The wind was cold and misty and the time was very, very slow... The bushes rattled and this one evil creature lurked from the bushes carrying a saw and sneaked up on them and............ BOO!

Ben: Then what happened then?
Jake: and they were never seen again! BA HA HA!
Ben:  *shivers*
Willis: Shut up Jake, that will not happen!
Jake: What u talking bout Willis? (every should know where I got this line from Lol!)
Willis: Well that's possible, I guess, but still shut up!
Jake: You shut up!
Willis: No, you shut up!

Ben walked away and went straight home, He was thinking about what Jake and Willis said and he believes that the murderer is around looking for more little foals. Ben never talked at all and went to bed. His dreams was harsh and it was the worst nightmare.

Ben: Hello? Is anyone here?

At first his dream was at his house but the house was dark, so dark that he couldn't see.
Ben: I'm...I'm alone.
But he wasn't alone, he heard little voices at his house.

Ben: I'm
not playing any of your jokes, reveal yourself!

UnKnown: I can smell you and can hear you breathing!
Ben: if You're talking,  why I don't  see you?
Unknown: YOU'LL SEE! BA HA HA HA!
Ben: No! No!

Then Ben seen himself in the bathroom, this unknown person probably
took him in the bathroom to reveal hiself. But he did reveal hiself.
He had reptile-like eyes, Red huge horns and a purple striped body. His body was slender and was very tall in size.
His name was Chucky the pony doll.

Ben: Why do you want me here?
Chucky had his saw ready to kill the poor colt and he said
answer my question and I won't kill ya, got it?
Ben: ...ok.
Chucky: where are your parents?
Ben: No! i'm not telling you stranger!

Ben ran to the everfree forest but was trapped by timber wolves.
Ben: Noooooooooooooooo!
Chucky: Ba Ha HA!

Ben woke up, it was 5:00 in the morning
Ben: Marko, can I sleep in your bed.
Marko: Ughh... whatever
Ben: thank you Marko, you are the best brother ever!

Thanks for reading chapter 4 is on it's way, just stay calm everypony!
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Omg I love the end. So cute!!!
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on December 31, 2013
Vary well done. Plz hurry with the chapter 17.:-B
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on August 06, 2013
when are you making 17th chapter im dying to read the rest
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on July 12, 2013
Very, very, VERY intresting story... to be exact IT'S AWESOME
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on July 07, 2013
Omg!!!! chapter 16 was great. Can't wait until 17.
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on July 04, 2013
oh wow!!! thats um intresting...
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on June 20, 2013
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on June 17, 2013
i cant believe hat happened to the others on chapter 16!
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on June 16, 2013
aw shucks!
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on May 19, 2013
your story should bea book and be published
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on May 19, 2013
Omg I love this series. I know you probably here this a lot but you are the best pony story writer ever!!!!
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on May 18, 2013
Cool :D
Sorry Spike, I read your 13th chapter a couple of days ago, but I forgot to comment!
Anyway, great! It hooked me in :)
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on April 26, 2013
Awesome! Please continue Spike! :D
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on April 19, 2013
Ikr???
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on April 19, 2013
Awesome story!!:)
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on April 19, 2013
You are a fantastic writer Spike!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
P.s: The buffalo are twins. :)
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on April 17, 2013
I'm sorry for calling you an moron. :/
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on April 12, 2013
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on March 27, 2013
Sorry Spike....I didn't relize how mean that was.....:( forgive me?
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on March 27, 2013
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on March 26, 2013
Data good....wanna go 2 my page?
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on March 26, 2013
He's not. :)
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on March 26, 2013
Hope Red doesnt get possessed again....
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on March 26, 2013
um... let's talk, on my page. :)
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on March 25, 2013
U should!! I would want to see those movies!!!
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on March 25, 2013
I know, my mom says to become a storybook writer but I wanted to become an writer in movies along with Actress and producer and director!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Lol take ur time!! U r an amazing author!!
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on March 25, 2013
too much pressure!!!
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on March 25, 2013
okay!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
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