Chucky the pony doll

Chucky the pony doll

Ponies think that he's just a plain old toy, but he's a killer. Every filly in ponyville decreases to 1, 10 then 100's!

published on January 20, 2013not completed

The Murderer

News reporter: Yesterday at 10:00p.m.  some kind of murder happened while walking out the resturant.
Marco the Pegasus: ughh... My throat is sore and who turned on the t.v.? Well, i'm up now. *turns off t.v.
Ben the colt Pegasus: Hey, Marco, are you alright?  your mane is very frizzy lately and you look like you never had any sleep.
Marco the Pegasus: yeah, I'm fine.
Ben the filly Pegasus: Mom! Marco needs some orange juice!
Marco the Pegasus: I SAID, I'M OK, WHAT WAS THAT FOR!?
Ben the colt Pegasus: Because you don't look like it!
Marco the Pegasus: *Double facehoof*

The Mother came out of her room. She gave the I'm-not-sure-face to Marco.
Mother: Well, you mane looks horrible for one.
Marco the Pegasus: But mom!
Mother: No buts! now get back in bed!
Marco the Pegasus: *Grunts*
Ben the colt Pegasus: Can I go play with my friends mom?
Mother: sure, just be careful!
Ben the colt Pegasus: YAY!

Later on that day, they started chatting about last night.

Willis the colt Earth pony: My mom kept telling me all these rules today about being safe.
Ben the colt Pegasus: about what?
Willis: about talking to strangers like I  know that already!
Jake the Colt Unicorn: *minmick Willis's mom words* Don't talk to strangers young colt!
Willis: Yeah, like that! I can't stand hearing that every day!
Ben: Yeah and I'm scared that the murderer is going to get me!
Jake: What are you, a chicken? * clucks like a chicken*
Ben: I'm not a chicken!
Willis: Yeah, leave him alone Jake! Like, you still wet the bed!
*tip: Willis and Jake are brothers, Willlis came from his  mom that was a Earth pony and Jake came from his dad which was a Unicorn. :)
Jake: Hey! That was embarrassing!
Ben: *snickers*
Jake: Hey! that's not funny!
Willis: to tell the truth, i'm scared of him too. He kidnapped colts and fillies like come on, who wouldn't be?
Jake: well, i'm not!
Willis: >:(.
Jake: Aright dag! It's not like i'm a punk or anything!
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Omg I love the end. So cute!!!
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on December 31, 2013
Vary well done. Plz hurry with the chapter 17.:-B
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on August 06, 2013
when are you making 17th chapter im dying to read the rest
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on July 12, 2013
Very, very, VERY intresting story... to be exact IT'S AWESOME
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on July 07, 2013
Omg!!!! chapter 16 was great. Can't wait until 17.
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on July 04, 2013
oh wow!!! thats um intresting...
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on June 20, 2013
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on June 17, 2013
i cant believe hat happened to the others on chapter 16!
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on June 16, 2013
aw shucks!
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on May 19, 2013
your story should bea book and be published
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on May 19, 2013
Omg I love this series. I know you probably here this a lot but you are the best pony story writer ever!!!!
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on May 18, 2013
Cool :D
Sorry Spike, I read your 13th chapter a couple of days ago, but I forgot to comment!
Anyway, great! It hooked me in :)
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on April 26, 2013
Awesome! Please continue Spike! :D
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on April 19, 2013
Ikr???
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on April 19, 2013
Awesome story!!:)
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on April 19, 2013
You are a fantastic writer Spike!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
P.s: The buffalo are twins. :)
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on April 17, 2013
I'm sorry for calling you an moron. :/
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on April 12, 2013
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on March 27, 2013
Sorry Spike....I didn't relize how mean that was.....:( forgive me?
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on March 27, 2013
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on March 26, 2013
Data good....wanna go 2 my page?
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on March 26, 2013
He's not. :)
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on March 26, 2013
Hope Red doesnt get possessed again....
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on March 26, 2013
um... let's talk, on my page. :)
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on March 25, 2013
U should!! I would want to see those movies!!!
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on March 25, 2013
I know, my mom says to become a storybook writer but I wanted to become an writer in movies along with Actress and producer and director!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Lol take ur time!! U r an amazing author!!
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on March 25, 2013
too much pressure!!!
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on March 25, 2013
okay!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
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