Invisible

Invisible

This is a story about a girl who has never stuck out... But maybe, just maybe, with the help of a cute guy, she can change that.

published on January 08, 2013completed

Falling Apart... Continued.

John continued to kiss me roughly, out of control.  He had managed to spread my legs with his, making me feel ten times more exposed.

I refused to look at Lucas anymore, but I heard him get up from the bed, the springs squeaking.  

John pulled away from my lips, and I sucked in a breath.  Finally, some fresh air.  "Where do you think you're going, Luke?"  John rasped.

"I, I can't watch you do this.  I can't," his voice shook violently.

"Too bad.  This is your punishment too, so sit down and enjoy the show," John pressed his mouth back on mine.  

I sobbed some more.  This couldn't be happening.  Please be a dream.  Please let some one save me.  Please, dear God, help me.

"Please stop, please.  Please," I murmured over and over again.  

John pulled away.  "Sweetheart, this would be alot more fun if you would shut the hell up."

I opened my mouth to scream, maybe someone would hear me.  

Suddenly, John's hand was over my mouth, holding it shut painfully.  There was a pocket knife in his other hand.  "Don't scream.  Or I'll kill Lucas, and then once I'm done, I'll kill you too.  Do you understand?"

I nodded.

"Good girl," John released me.  For a moment, I thought he might have changed his mind, but then I felt his hand trailing up my thigh.

"Oh God," I whispered.   I needed to get out of here.  

John's other hand went around my body, hunting for the zipper on my dress.  When he found it, he tugged it all the way down.  

I shook my head, crying harder than I ever have before.

This

Was

Really

Happening


John's mouth was on my neck once more, and I took my chance.

I turned to Lucas, praying he would be looking.

He was, hand over his mouth.  

I mouthed, "call the police."

Lucas's eyes widened.  I knew what he was thinking.  He wanted to get me out of here, but he also didn't want to go to jail.

"Please," I whispered, then John was kissing me again.

I heard Lucas get up.

"Where are you going now?"  John asked.

"I think I'm going to be sick," Lucas said.

John rolled his eyes, focusing his attention back on me.

Please, Lucas.  Please save me.



Minutes passed, horrible, long, hellish minutes passed by.  Maybe it was an hour.  I dont know.  All I know is that Lucas was back from the bathroom, and he looked worse than before.  I saw him come back from the bathroom, and sit down in the chair across from the bed.  Then, John blocked my vision.

I was in Hell.

Then, in the matter of seconds, there was a large crash, and a horrible snapping sound, then John was off of me.  

I gasped, sitting up, holding my dress to my chest to keep it from falling over.  I looked down at John, who laid unconsious on the floor, blood on his head.  Then, I looked up to see Lucas, who held the chair in his hands, wood splintering off where one of the legs had broken.

"Oh my God," I whispered.

"Kasey," Lucas threw the chair to the other side of the room, looking disgusted.  "I'm so sorry.  I didn't know what they were going to do exactly until recently.  I wanted to call the cops, but I was too scared.  I'm sorry, I'm so so so sorry," tears streamed down his face.

I stood up, zipping up my dress as I did.  "Do you honestly think sorry is going to make everything okay?"

"No!  No, God no.  I know it's not okay, I know Kasey.  I'm just so sorry," Lucas took a step towards me, shaking.

I smacked him in the face.

He reached up, touching his cheek.  

"That was for lying to me."  I smacked him again.  "That was for all of this."  I smacked him one more time.  "And that was for making me fall in love with you."

Sirens sounded in the distance.  

"I texted Teresa and had her call the police.  They're after Travis, and are on their way now," Lucas ran a hand through his hair.

"Great, Teresa is probably freaking out," I said.  

"I'm sorry Kasey," Lucas took another step towards me.  "Will you ever be able to forgive me?"

I looked into his eyes.  Those beautiful eyes I had fallen in love with such a long time ago.  For a moment, I wanted to go back to what we had.  But then, reality hit me.  He was a liar.  He was horrible.  The Lucas I once loved, was now the Lucas I hated.  
I took a deep breath.  "Don't count on it."


*Authors note*  Pretty intense, I know.   Thanks for reading, and being so patient with me.  Remember the final chapter is coming up pretty soon.  (Chapter 25!) So, comment and let me know if you want to see Lucas and her back together.  I think I already have an ending in mind, but I'd like to have your opinions.  Thank you so much!


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It's awesome dear
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on June 07, 2016
very good... I loved it very much.
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on September 02, 2015
Omgmmmmmm i fell inlove with this story
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Aw thank you
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on October 12, 2014
OMG IT TOOK MY 40 WHOLE MINUTES TO FINISH THE STTTORRRRYYY! AMAAAZZZIIIINNNGGG!
me reading the story:
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Thanks haha
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on August 24, 2014
Thanks everybody :D
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on August 13, 2014
OMG I couldn't stop reading!! XD
I spent a good part of my morning just reading this, :D
I loved it, and you are a great writer.
Sorry for babbling....
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Don't apologize! Thank you!
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on August 13, 2014
SO GOOD!!
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Thank youuu
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on August 11, 2014
I love it!! This is an amazing story!!!
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Thanks :-*
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
GREAT STORY AWESOME :)
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THANK YOU
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on July 18, 2014
@Bmac99 Hey Bmac!! YOU GOT 1000 READS!!!!!!!!!!
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ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUSSS AOSNSJSKABSOSNSJDBD OMGGGG
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Cool! I haven't read Taking Chances yet (I think) so I'll check it out!
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on July 12, 2014
aw thanks. I am almost done with the next chapter of taking chances.
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on July 12, 2014
Yep! :) I re-read it for u :)
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on July 11, 2014
(sniff) beautiful
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on July 10, 2014
Thanks :)
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on June 09, 2014
Wow! This is amazing!
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on June 09, 2014
WITH ABOUT TEN MORE READS WE CAN BUMP INVISIBLE INTO 3RD PLACE. WHO IS WITH ME?
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on May 21, 2014
Wow. There are some fan fictions, that are really long, but incredible. This is one of those. You are an amazing author.
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on May 21, 2014
Guys...this has almost 900 reads. Help me get to 1000? Recommend this to friends, get people interested! Seriously! I love you guys.
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on May 12, 2014
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Yes! That would be so cool!!!!!! And you can refer then back to this site or my wattpad account which is BeatriceB99!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
Okay so anyways. I'm going to start working on spreading your story now :3 sorry that I haven't started doing what I promised yet. Just been real busy. Anyways. Do you want me to create a cover for you? I mean like a lagit cover with the title and Authers name ( that would be you) ???
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on April 25, 2014
I would fall out of my chair if I was sitting in one.
LOOK AT HOW MANY READS THIS HAS!
Ugh, I love all of my fans :x
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on March 26, 2014
780 reads...wow...that is amazing you guys :))))
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on February 27, 2014
TAKING CHANCES IS NOW OFFICIALLY IN PROGRESS. TWO CHAPTERS ARE UP.
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on December 16, 2013
AND INVISIBLE IS #3 ON THE MOST POPULAR BOOKS.
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on December 14, 2013
OVER 700 READS?!? THAT IS NUTS! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE <3
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on December 14, 2013
ATTENTION: INVISIBLE SPIN-OFF ANNOUNCEMENT. THE TITLE IS GOING TO BE "TAKING CHANCES."
Summary: Maria as always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.
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on December 14, 2013
I HAVE OVER 15 PEOPLE WHO HAVE SAID YES TO THE SPIN OFF!!! I WILL GET TO WRITING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. HOPEFULLY THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE UP BEFORE SUNDAY. IT SEEMS LIKE A LONG TIME BUT STARTING A NEW STORY TAKES LOTS OF PLANNING. I MAY BE ABLE TO START TONIGHT, WHO KNOWS? KEEP YOUR EYES PEELED FOR A SUMMARY/SNEAK PEEK OF THE BOOK ON MY WALL. LOVE YOU ALL<3 See More
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on December 10, 2013
@peace_out what are you talking about?! your stories rock!
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on December 09, 2013
I agree with @The_Brendan yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Okay peeps!
I need three more yes's on the Invisible spin-off story!!! So if you read Invisible and have already told me you want this new story, tell your friends who read Invisible! If you read Invisible and want this story, please tell me. Comment here or, message me, or post on my wall!
And I would like to thank all of my supporters again. You guys have no See More
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on December 06, 2013
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