Invisible

Invisible

This is a story about a girl who has never stuck out... But maybe, just maybe, with the help of a cute guy, she can change that.

published on January 08, 2013completed

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I laid down on my bed, smiling to myself.  

Prom was tomorrow and everything was going to be great.  I had a perfect dress, for a perfect prom theme (a Night in Paris), and I was going with an amazing guy.

It was also going to be the day I told Lucas I loved him.  And I did, so very much.  

Teresa knocked on my door and I yelled for her to come in.

"Why are you so happy?"  She asked, sitting down.

"I'm just excited for Prom," I sat up.

She laughed.  "Well, I hope your experience is better than mine was."

"What happened?"

"My date, Josh Wilburn, tried to groppe me on the dance floor," she laughed.  

"He did not," I said.  

"Oh, but he did.  It wasn't entirely his fault though, someone had spiked the punch and he didn't know until his fourth cup."

We both laughed.  

"So, your going with Lucas, right?"  She asked.

"Um, yeah," I said.  "He's my boyfriend so it's only logical that he would ask me."

She nodded.  

"Teresa?"  I asked.

"Hmm?"  

"I... I think I'm in love with him," I said, my voice wavering.

Her eyes grew wide.  "What?!"

I was shocked by her reaction.  I thought  she would be supportive... anything but appauled and shocked.  "Why is it so bad that I love Lucas"

"I mean I knew you guys dated or whatever but I never thought you were serious or anything."  She said.

"We've been dating for over a month now, Teresa."

"Doesn't that seem a little sudden?"  

I sighed.  "Maybe, but that doesn't change my feelings.  I really do love him."

She shook her head.  "Okay, okay.  I just thought you would want to take it slow with a guy who..."

Huh?  What was she talking about?  "Someone who what?"

"You really don't know?"

I shook my head.  "Tell me."

She sighed.  "Me and his mom take yoga together, and ended up being pretty good friends about a year ago.  Now, we don't really talk.  But she told me about what happened.  It happened over the summer.  Him and two friends.... John and...Oh, what's his name?"

"Brandon?"

"Yeah!  Brandon.  Anyway, Brandon and John were buying drugs from a guy at school.  So, one day, Brandon decided to take Lucas with them.  John drove, Lucas was in the back, and Brandon was out buying.  The dealer got mad about something, I think Brandon didn't have enough money, so he pulled a gun.  John saw and hit the gas. He knocked the dealer a few feet back, and Brandon got in the car.  They drove, leaving the guy there.  But the cops found out, even though the dealer lost part of his memory."

"What happened?"

She shrugged.  "John and Brandon did some community service, and Lucas got off with a warning because it was his first time.   The dealer was released two months ago."

"What does this have to do with me loving Lucas?  He didn't do anything."

She sighed.  "You're right, he didn't have anything to do with it.  I just.. I don't know.  I just want you to be careful, I don't want you to get a broken heart."

I nodded.  

"I'm sorry.  If you love Lucas, then that's great.  I'm really happy for you and he seems like a great guy.:"

I smiled.  "He is."

"Okay, I guess I'll leave you alone now.  Sorry about me overreacting."

"It's okay, I understand."

As she left, I couldn't help but losing some trust in Lucas.  I knew it was just a mistake, but at the same time, he didn't tell me.  

I shook off the feeling.  He probably just thought I already knew.  

Still, something didn't feel right.

***Authors note:
Sorry it took so long for this chapter.  I've been ridiculously busy.  I hope you enjoyed it!  I just thought I'd let you know that the end of the story will be Chapter 25, and be prepared for a huge betrayal in the upcoming chapters.  Please check out my new story, The Nightmare I Live and my Harry Styles fanfic, How Did This Happen?  Thank you for reading!  Comment below!
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It's awesome dear
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on June 07, 2016
very good... I loved it very much.
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on September 02, 2015
Omgmmmmmm i fell inlove with this story
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Aw thank you
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on October 12, 2014
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on October 12, 2014
OMG IT TOOK MY 40 WHOLE MINUTES TO FINISH THE STTTORRRRYYY! AMAAAZZZIIIINNNGGG!
me reading the story:
me: *reading -10 minutes later-
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me: *keeps reading -10 min. later See More
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Thanks haha
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on August 24, 2014
Thanks everybody :D
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on August 13, 2014
OMG I couldn't stop reading!! XD
I spent a good part of my morning just reading this, :D
I loved it, and you are a great writer.
Sorry for babbling....
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Don't apologize! Thank you!
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 13, 2014
SO GOOD!!
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Thank youuu
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 11, 2014
I love it!! This is an amazing story!!!
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Thanks :-*
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
GREAT STORY AWESOME :)
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THANK YOU
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on October 12, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
@Bmac99 Hey Bmac!! YOU GOT 1000 READS!!!!!!!!!!
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ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUSSS AOSNSJSKABSOSNSJDBD OMGGGG
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Cool! I haven't read Taking Chances yet (I think) so I'll check it out!
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on July 12, 2014
aw thanks. I am almost done with the next chapter of taking chances.
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on July 12, 2014
Yep! :) I re-read it for u :)
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on July 11, 2014
(sniff) beautiful
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on July 10, 2014
Thanks :)
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on June 09, 2014
Wow! This is amazing!
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on June 09, 2014
WITH ABOUT TEN MORE READS WE CAN BUMP INVISIBLE INTO 3RD PLACE. WHO IS WITH ME?
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on May 21, 2014
Wow. There are some fan fictions, that are really long, but incredible. This is one of those. You are an amazing author.
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on May 21, 2014
Guys...this has almost 900 reads. Help me get to 1000? Recommend this to friends, get people interested! Seriously! I love you guys.
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on May 12, 2014
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Yes! That would be so cool!!!!!! And you can refer then back to this site or my wattpad account which is BeatriceB99!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
Okay so anyways. I'm going to start working on spreading your story now :3 sorry that I haven't started doing what I promised yet. Just been real busy. Anyways. Do you want me to create a cover for you? I mean like a lagit cover with the title and Authers name ( that would be you) ???
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on April 25, 2014
I would fall out of my chair if I was sitting in one.
LOOK AT HOW MANY READS THIS HAS!
Ugh, I love all of my fans :x
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on March 26, 2014
780 reads...wow...that is amazing you guys :))))
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on February 27, 2014
TAKING CHANCES IS NOW OFFICIALLY IN PROGRESS. TWO CHAPTERS ARE UP.
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on December 16, 2013
AND INVISIBLE IS #3 ON THE MOST POPULAR BOOKS.
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on December 14, 2013
OVER 700 READS?!? THAT IS NUTS! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE <3
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on December 14, 2013
ATTENTION: INVISIBLE SPIN-OFF ANNOUNCEMENT. THE TITLE IS GOING TO BE "TAKING CHANCES."
Summary: Maria as always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.
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on December 14, 2013
I HAVE OVER 15 PEOPLE WHO HAVE SAID YES TO THE SPIN OFF!!! I WILL GET TO WRITING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. HOPEFULLY THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE UP BEFORE SUNDAY. IT SEEMS LIKE A LONG TIME BUT STARTING A NEW STORY TAKES LOTS OF PLANNING. I MAY BE ABLE TO START TONIGHT, WHO KNOWS? KEEP YOUR EYES PEELED FOR A SUMMARY/SNEAK PEEK OF THE BOOK ON MY WALL. LOVE YOU ALL<3 See More
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on December 10, 2013
@peace_out what are you talking about?! your stories rock!
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on December 09, 2013
I agree with @The_Brendan yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Okay peeps!
I need three more yes's on the Invisible spin-off story!!! So if you read Invisible and have already told me you want this new story, tell your friends who read Invisible! If you read Invisible and want this story, please tell me. Comment here or, message me, or post on my wall!
And I would like to thank all of my supporters again. You guys have no See More
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on December 06, 2013
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