Invisible

Invisible

This is a story about a girl who has never stuck out... But maybe, just maybe, with the help of a cute guy, she can change that.

published on January 08, 2013completed

Prom?

A month passed.  Me and Lucas spent as much time as possible together.  It was now late April, and our school prom was in two weeks.  I had a feeling that Lucas was going to ask me to go with him.

I went to Lucas's house on Thursday night, to do homework.  We ended up making out on the couch for an hour, which is what we were doing right now.

He pulled away, catching his breath.  "Well, would you look at that?  I still have science homework," he smiled.

I laughed and snuggled into him.  

"So, you know the prom is coming up?"  He said.

My heart fluttered.  "Yes."

"Well," he got up and went into the kitchen, which was confusing.  He came back holding two cup cakes. He looked pained as he caught my gaze.  As he sat back down, I noticed that they both had writing in icing on them.  One said: Prom?  The other said: Me?

I laughed through the tears that were threatening to spill over.  I nodded, wrapping my arms around Lucas.  He went tense as his arms wrapped around me.  What was wrong with him?  He'd seemed distant lately, but I assumed it was because of all the stress from school.  Was I making it up, or did it seem like he didn't want me anymore?  No.  He wouldnt have asked me to prom.

I thought I heard Lucas whisper something like 'sorry', but I was probably just hearing things.  

We ate the cupcakes, which were chocolate, my favorite.  I found myself loving Lucas even more.  I haven't told him how I felt, but I was going to at Prom.

And I just couldn't wait.
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It's awesome dear
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on June 07, 2016
very good... I loved it very much.
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on September 02, 2015
Omgmmmmmm i fell inlove with this story
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Aw thank you
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on October 12, 2014
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on October 12, 2014
OMG IT TOOK MY 40 WHOLE MINUTES TO FINISH THE STTTORRRRYYY! AMAAAZZZIIIINNNGGG!
me reading the story:
me: *reading -10 minutes later-
parents: get off the computer
me: *keeps reading -10 min. later See More
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Thanks haha
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on August 24, 2014
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on August 24, 2014
Thanks everybody :D
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on August 13, 2014
OMG I couldn't stop reading!! XD
I spent a good part of my morning just reading this, :D
I loved it, and you are a great writer.
Sorry for babbling....
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Don't apologize! Thank you!
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 13, 2014
SO GOOD!!
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Thank youuu
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 11, 2014
I love it!! This is an amazing story!!!
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Thanks :-*
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
GREAT STORY AWESOME :)
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THANK YOU
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on October 12, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
@Bmac99 Hey Bmac!! YOU GOT 1000 READS!!!!!!!!!!
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ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUSSS AOSNSJSKABSOSNSJDBD OMGGGG
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Cool! I haven't read Taking Chances yet (I think) so I'll check it out!
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on July 12, 2014
aw thanks. I am almost done with the next chapter of taking chances.
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on July 12, 2014
Yep! :) I re-read it for u :)
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on July 12, 2014
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on July 11, 2014
(sniff) beautiful
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on July 10, 2014
Thanks :)
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on June 09, 2014
Wow! This is amazing!
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on June 09, 2014
WITH ABOUT TEN MORE READS WE CAN BUMP INVISIBLE INTO 3RD PLACE. WHO IS WITH ME?
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on May 21, 2014
Wow. There are some fan fictions, that are really long, but incredible. This is one of those. You are an amazing author.
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on May 21, 2014
Guys...this has almost 900 reads. Help me get to 1000? Recommend this to friends, get people interested! Seriously! I love you guys.
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on May 12, 2014
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Yes! That would be so cool!!!!!! And you can refer then back to this site or my wattpad account which is BeatriceB99!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
Okay so anyways. I'm going to start working on spreading your story now :3 sorry that I haven't started doing what I promised yet. Just been real busy. Anyways. Do you want me to create a cover for you? I mean like a lagit cover with the title and Authers name ( that would be you) ???
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on April 25, 2014
I would fall out of my chair if I was sitting in one.
LOOK AT HOW MANY READS THIS HAS!
Ugh, I love all of my fans :x
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on March 26, 2014
780 reads...wow...that is amazing you guys :))))
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on February 27, 2014
TAKING CHANCES IS NOW OFFICIALLY IN PROGRESS. TWO CHAPTERS ARE UP.
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on December 16, 2013
AND INVISIBLE IS #3 ON THE MOST POPULAR BOOKS.
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on December 14, 2013
OVER 700 READS?!? THAT IS NUTS! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE <3
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on December 14, 2013
ATTENTION: INVISIBLE SPIN-OFF ANNOUNCEMENT. THE TITLE IS GOING TO BE "TAKING CHANCES."
Summary: Maria as always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.
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on December 14, 2013
I HAVE OVER 15 PEOPLE WHO HAVE SAID YES TO THE SPIN OFF!!! I WILL GET TO WRITING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. HOPEFULLY THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE UP BEFORE SUNDAY. IT SEEMS LIKE A LONG TIME BUT STARTING A NEW STORY TAKES LOTS OF PLANNING. I MAY BE ABLE TO START TONIGHT, WHO KNOWS? KEEP YOUR EYES PEELED FOR A SUMMARY/SNEAK PEEK OF THE BOOK ON MY WALL. LOVE YOU ALL<3 See More
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on December 10, 2013
@peace_out what are you talking about?! your stories rock!
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on December 09, 2013
I agree with @The_Brendan yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Okay peeps!
I need three more yes's on the Invisible spin-off story!!! So if you read Invisible and have already told me you want this new story, tell your friends who read Invisible! If you read Invisible and want this story, please tell me. Comment here or, message me, or post on my wall!
And I would like to thank all of my supporters again. You guys have no See More
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on December 06, 2013
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