Invisible

Invisible

This is a story about a girl who has never stuck out... But maybe, just maybe, with the help of a cute guy, she can change that.

published on January 08, 2013completed

Bonding

It was Sunday night, me, Teresa, and Thomas had just finished supper.  We were just talking about random things.  Sports, school, weather, you know, small talk.

Thomas checked his phone and groaned.

"What's the matter, honey?"  Teresa asked.

"There's  a problem with the banking, I have to go check it out," he gave Teresa an apologetic look.

"It's okay.  I think I can hold down the fort," Teresa laid her hand on Thomas's.

Thomas leaned over and gave Teresa a kiss.

I felt a pang of envy.  I had never had a boyfriend, the only time I had ever kissed someone was in the seventh grade.  It wasn't even because I wanted to!  Blake Kimley had kissed me as a dare at some party.  He got paid a dollar for every second he kissed me.  He got paid an extra five because I smacked him with my flip flop on the side of the head.  I'm pretty sure he ended up with a solid fifteen dollars.  

But, Teresa and Thomas's kiss wasn't some seventh grade dare.  I could tell they loved each other just by the way they looked at each other.
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Thomas left, and I went up to my room to work on some homework.  (I had to write a poem about my weekend- it took five minutes.)  Teresa came in and flopped onto the bed beside me.

"What are you doing?"

I shruggedm "Homework."

"Mm, fun."

I laughed.  "It's so exciting."

Teresa suddenly gasped.  "I have an idea."

"Uh-oh."

She jumped up off the bed and held out her hands.

I took them and she pulled me up.  She kept her hold on me as she dragged me down the hall to her bathroom.

"What are we doing in here?"  I asked.

She finally released my hands and started digging through drawers.  She started pulling out item after item of makeup.  She threw her flat iron on the counter too.  "I'm going to give you a makeover."

A wave of panic came over me.  "Please don't."

Her lips pursed to form the perfect puppy dog face.  "For me?  This will be a good bonding expericence."

"But-" I started.  Teresa cut me off by starting to yank a brush through my wavey hair.  "OW!"  I said as she pulled out a tangle.

"Sorry," she said, not sounding sorry at all.

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Thirty minutes later, and I was beginning to loose my pateince.

Teresa had brought in a chair and had turned it away from the mirror, so I had no idea what she had done to me- which was alot.  She had started by brushing my hair, then she straightened it, then she put on what seemd like pounds of makeup on.  

"I am almost done," she said.  She grabbed a pair of tweezers.

"Whoa whoa whoa, hold on," I put my hands up to block her.  

"If you let me pluck your eyebrows right now, we will be done in two minutes," she said.

I gave her my best You-Are -Such-A-Big-Fat-Liar look.

"Time me!  If I'm not done two minutes from now, you can leave.  I swear."

I groaned.  "Hurry up."

One-hundred five seconds later, Teresa announced she was done.  She clapped her hands.  "You look so good!"

I stood up and turned to face the mirror.  I gasped at my reflection.  It couldn't have been me.  No, this girl had straight, shiny,  blonde hair, that framed her blemish-free face.  Her freckles, although still there, were less bold.  Her brown eyes seemed to sparkle more from the eyeliner, mascara, and eye shadow, that wasn't too dark, but compimented her eyes. No, this couldn't be me.

Teresa tapped her foot, "Well?!"

I responded with a question, "How did you do that?"
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It's awesome dear
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on June 07, 2016
very good... I loved it very much.
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on September 02, 2015
Omgmmmmmm i fell inlove with this story
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Aw thank you
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on October 12, 2014
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on October 12, 2014
OMG IT TOOK MY 40 WHOLE MINUTES TO FINISH THE STTTORRRRYYY! AMAAAZZZIIIINNNGGG!
me reading the story:
me: *reading -10 minutes later-
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me: *keeps reading -10 min. later See More
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Thanks haha
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on August 24, 2014
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on August 24, 2014
Thanks everybody :D
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on August 13, 2014
OMG I couldn't stop reading!! XD
I spent a good part of my morning just reading this, :D
I loved it, and you are a great writer.
Sorry for babbling....
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Don't apologize! Thank you!
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 13, 2014
SO GOOD!!
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Thank youuu
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 11, 2014
I love it!! This is an amazing story!!!
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Thanks :-*
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
GREAT STORY AWESOME :)
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THANK YOU
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on October 12, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
@Bmac99 Hey Bmac!! YOU GOT 1000 READS!!!!!!!!!!
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ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUSSS AOSNSJSKABSOSNSJDBD OMGGGG
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Cool! I haven't read Taking Chances yet (I think) so I'll check it out!
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on July 12, 2014
aw thanks. I am almost done with the next chapter of taking chances.
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on July 12, 2014
Yep! :) I re-read it for u :)
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on July 11, 2014
(sniff) beautiful
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on July 10, 2014
Thanks :)
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on June 09, 2014
Wow! This is amazing!
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on June 09, 2014
WITH ABOUT TEN MORE READS WE CAN BUMP INVISIBLE INTO 3RD PLACE. WHO IS WITH ME?
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on May 21, 2014
Wow. There are some fan fictions, that are really long, but incredible. This is one of those. You are an amazing author.
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on May 21, 2014
Guys...this has almost 900 reads. Help me get to 1000? Recommend this to friends, get people interested! Seriously! I love you guys.
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on May 12, 2014
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Yes! That would be so cool!!!!!! And you can refer then back to this site or my wattpad account which is BeatriceB99!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
Okay so anyways. I'm going to start working on spreading your story now :3 sorry that I haven't started doing what I promised yet. Just been real busy. Anyways. Do you want me to create a cover for you? I mean like a lagit cover with the title and Authers name ( that would be you) ???
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on April 25, 2014
I would fall out of my chair if I was sitting in one.
LOOK AT HOW MANY READS THIS HAS!
Ugh, I love all of my fans :x
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on March 26, 2014
780 reads...wow...that is amazing you guys :))))
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on February 27, 2014
TAKING CHANCES IS NOW OFFICIALLY IN PROGRESS. TWO CHAPTERS ARE UP.
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on December 16, 2013
AND INVISIBLE IS #3 ON THE MOST POPULAR BOOKS.
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on December 14, 2013
OVER 700 READS?!? THAT IS NUTS! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE <3
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on December 14, 2013
ATTENTION: INVISIBLE SPIN-OFF ANNOUNCEMENT. THE TITLE IS GOING TO BE "TAKING CHANCES."
Summary: Maria as always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.
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on December 14, 2013
I HAVE OVER 15 PEOPLE WHO HAVE SAID YES TO THE SPIN OFF!!! I WILL GET TO WRITING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. HOPEFULLY THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE UP BEFORE SUNDAY. IT SEEMS LIKE A LONG TIME BUT STARTING A NEW STORY TAKES LOTS OF PLANNING. I MAY BE ABLE TO START TONIGHT, WHO KNOWS? KEEP YOUR EYES PEELED FOR A SUMMARY/SNEAK PEEK OF THE BOOK ON MY WALL. LOVE YOU ALL<3 See More
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on December 10, 2013
@peace_out what are you talking about?! your stories rock!
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on December 09, 2013
I agree with @The_Brendan yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Okay peeps!
I need three more yes's on the Invisible spin-off story!!! So if you read Invisible and have already told me you want this new story, tell your friends who read Invisible! If you read Invisible and want this story, please tell me. Comment here or, message me, or post on my wall!
And I would like to thank all of my supporters again. You guys have no See More
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on December 06, 2013
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