The Island Of Pain

The Island Of Pain

John Ramsey Licit sets out on a voyage searching for an island that may not even exist. While he on this amazing adventure, he records everything in his journal.

published on December 30, 2013completed

Day 8

I woke up to someone screaming really loud. A big, buff man walked into my room and picked me up. He started carrying me toward the main room. I snuck my knife that Tim gave me out of my shoe, and put it in my pocket. He carried me into the main room, and dropped me on the floor. The tallest one of the aliens shrunk down to my size and walked up to me. I said this to the other aliens that were still their normal size," Will you all shrink down smaller? I want to see what you all look like small." They all shrank and walked toward me. When they all were in front of me, I pulled my knife out of my pocket and stabbed one of them. For some odd reason, it did nothing to him, but then I noticed that I stabbed him with my regular knife! He grabbed my knife and smacked me into the wall. I reached into my pocket to get the silver-bladed knife, but it wasn't there! I looked around the room, and then I saw it. It was right in front of the shortest one. I sat there for a minute trying to be able to see right, because my vision was really blurry. I stood up, and limped toward my knife. I made it about two feet away from my knife and then, the shortest one picked me up and threw me on the ground. I laid there hoping he would show me mercy. He did. I reached over and grabbed my knife. I rolled away, and stabbed the tallest one. Instead of falling over, bleeding, and dying, he just turned into dust. I ran, and stabbed two of them. One of the two that were left picked me up and pushed me up against the wall, while the shortest one picked up the knife. I thought for a while, and then I got an idea. I said this to the shortest one,” Listen to me. What you’re doing isn’t right. If you help me, you will be doing something very good. You will be saving many lives.” He started walking toward the other alien. He stabbed the other alien. He then said, " My name is John. I've been waiting for someone brave enough to stand up and take a chance. And you my son, are what I've been waiting for." so I said, " Wait, did you say that your name is John?" He then said, " Yes. Why did you want to know?" I then said, " Because thats my name." He just stood there looking at me like he was surprised, and then said, " He was right." So I replied by saying, " Who was right?" He didn't answer me. He just stood there staring off into space.We stood there for a few minutes, and then Tim walked up to us. Tim asked me if it worked, so I told Tim that it did work. Then Tim said very quietly, “ Then why is he still alive?” so I said, “ Because he's the good one.”  John then said, “ Tim, you seem like a good guy. You are now the new ruler of this island. Well if that's okay with you, of course.”  so Tim said, " Yes sir, I would be honored." John grabbed my hand and pulled me away. We walked through a long hallway. Then he made me stop right in front of a really tall door. He opened the door, and told me to go inside. Inside of the room, there was a jet! John said, " You and I will fly this jet to America tomorrow." so I said, " Thank you, John." John brought me to a room and said, " This room belonged to Phil, he was my cousin. Well, he wasn't really my cousin, but I called him my cousin. Anyways, he was about your size. There's some clothing in there that will fit you. You can sleep in there tonight." so I said, " Okay, thank you." I waked in there, jumped onto the bed, and automaticly fell asleep.
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woah, that was good! u r an amazing writer!!!! :)
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I wrote this two or three years ago, and it isn't the best of my stories, so if you want something (hopefully) better written, you should read "The Elementals - Dragon Fire." I'm glad you liked it, though.
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I will :)
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on December 20, 2015
Love it! But maybe add more detail, like add some feelings to the person
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Okay, thank you for the tip.
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on December 15, 2014
I am currently working on it to make it better, so I will consider making him name it something like that.
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on July 11, 2014
Thank you soooooo much. Not many people have been reading it.
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