The Island Of Pain

The Island Of Pain

John Ramsey Licit sets out on a voyage searching for an island that may not even exist. While he on this amazing adventure, he records everything in his journal.

published on December 30, 2013completed

Day 9

I woke up to Tim holding my sholders and shaking me. He said, " Hurry up,John's waiting for you." and then he left the room. I jumped out of bed, got dressed, and then ran to the jet. I walked into the jet and then said, " Sorry I made you wait." The roof opened up and we flew out. We flew for a few hours, and then made it to America. I showed  John around and told people about "Death Island", but no one believed me. I decided to tell my dad about "Death Island" and how no one believed me. He told me that if no one believed me, then I should write a book.
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woah, that was good! u r an amazing writer!!!! :)
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I wrote this two or three years ago, and it isn't the best of my stories, so if you want something (hopefully) better written, you should read "The Elementals - Dragon Fire." I'm glad you liked it, though.
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I will :)
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on December 20, 2015
Love it! But maybe add more detail, like add some feelings to the person
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Okay, thank you for the tip.
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on December 15, 2014
I am currently working on it to make it better, so I will consider making him name it something like that.
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on July 11, 2014
Thank you soooooo much. Not many people have been reading it.
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on June 29, 2014