The Island Of Pain

The Island Of Pain

John Ramsey Licit sets out on a voyage searching for an island that may not even exist. While he on this amazing adventure, he records everything in his journal.

published on December 30, 2013completed

Day 5

I woke up when I heard a strange noise. I looked around and saw a 4 foot tall rainbow-colored tiger approaching me. When it made it to me, it started walking around me as if it were interested. It then laid down and set its head in my lap. I grabbed my knife and pointed it at the tiger, but it didn't seem to notice. I then decided that the tiger meant no harm, so I put my knife down. We sat there for a while, but then I saw a much bigger tiger run out of the woods. The little tiger gave me a warning about the other tiger. I grabbed my knife and stood up. The littler tiger ran towards the other tiger. The big tiger pinned the small tiger on the ground, and then told it to leave. They, of course, didn't speak in English, but I could tell what the bigger tiger had told the smaller one. The smaller tiger backed off. The bigger tiger ran at me, and gave me the evil eye. I gripped my knife, and ran at the tiger! Right then, I could tell that my adrenaline had kicked on. Right when I was about to ram into the tiger, I jumped as high as I could. I landed on the tigers back. It got irritated, so it bucked me off. I went sailing into the sky. I think I went up about 15 feet in the air. I hit the ground with a loud "THUMP!" Luckily the bigger tiger had disappeared into the woods. The littler tiger walked up to me and laid its head in my lap. I said very quietly (because I was in pain),"I think I’ll call you Ralph." I just laid there until I fell asleep.
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woah, that was good! u r an amazing writer!!!! :)
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I wrote this two or three years ago, and it isn't the best of my stories, so if you want something (hopefully) better written, you should read "The Elementals - Dragon Fire." I'm glad you liked it, though.
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I will :)
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on December 20, 2015
Love it! But maybe add more detail, like add some feelings to the person
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Okay, thank you for the tip.
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on December 15, 2014
I am currently working on it to make it better, so I will consider making him name it something like that.
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on July 11, 2014
Thank you soooooo much. Not many people have been reading it.
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on June 29, 2014